~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan)

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CHARACTERS
Geet Handa- An 18 year old modern/ traditonal girl from Punjab studying in Delhi. Fun loving, bubbly, Beautiful, smart.

Maan Singh Khurana- 25 year old business tycoon from Delhi. HOT, charming yet angry.

Savitri Devi- Maan's Dadimaa. Very kind and wants the best for her grandson.

Dev- 22 years old. Maan's younger brother. Kind, handsome and loving.

Rano- Geet's Mother.

Kuldip- Geet's Father.


Aditya- Geet's friend who is attractive but Geet doesn't really like him that much

PART 2
Maan- Yeh ladki to bolti ja rahi hain! Mujhe pagal kar degi!
Geet stared at him.
Geet- Pagal vi karlungi aur tumhare dil ki dharkan bhi baraongi! Mera ta jadu hi aisa hain.
geet winks. 😉
Maan smiles alittle bit. Geet looks at him,
Geet- Oyee! You smiled! Lagda aa edda flirting karke aap sadu nahi rahonge! Aapko main change kar dongi! Actually, maine kitne lok ki help ki hain, par aapko help karke ta bahut maza aayega!
Maan- Pata, tum ek bak-bak machine ho!!!
Geet- BAK BAK MACHINE??? Eh sadu, aapko Punjabi kahan se aa gayi.
Maan- mera Naam MAAN SINGH KHURANA hain aur main Chandigarh se hoon, Punjab ka hoon.
Geet- Oh!!! Ye to bahut acchi baat hai!Chandi-
Maan interrupts her
Maan- CHUP BILKUL CHUP!!! tum bahut bolti ho!!! tumhe to bolne ki koi tameez nahi hain!!
Geet had tears in her eyes.
Geet- Gadi roko!
Maan- arey geet main to bas gusse main vaise bol parra. I didn't mean it.
Geet- kise se aise baat nahi kiya jata. please stop the car.
Maan- yeh highway hain aur vaise vi tumhara college aane vala hain, i'll drop you.
geet nodded
maan dropped geet off.
Geet- Thanks alot. I know you had to go through alot of trouble.
Maan smiled.
Maan- ek punjabi larki jo pehli vaar delhi ko aayi hain, uski to help karni chahiye.
Geet-aap kaise jante ho main delhi pehli vaar aayi hoon?
Maan- bas, pata chal jata hain.
maan drives away as geet smiles.
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precap- college drama+ job interview
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...pls continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept
pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great part sweety :D
Chalo der se hi sahi maan ne geet se thik se to baat ki lol.

Cant wait for the next part. Do update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mee liking this....please add me to your pm list and update soon😃
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part 2
Maan ka ghussa...................ufffffff.....................
yaar post the parts in the same thread.........................

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