THE STORY OF A PRINCE & A PRINCESS

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My story is started after the horrible accident of arman –riddhima in "dill mill gayye"…I had written it in 2009,.when cinevista made all of us crying by that pathetic scene…..and again arman –riddhima came back in 'dmg' but perhaps cv slipped from their track and made a hotchpotch….made postmortem of the 'most beautiful youth based story"and as somehow ended it ,which could not be satisfied their viewers….

SO ITS FORCED ME TO WRITE A BEATIFUL STORY OF 'AR' TOGETHER….WHICH IS UPDATING REGULARY ON DMG BLOG …..AND LIKED BY ALL….SO PLZ.FRIENDS TRY IT…

JIWANSATYA HOSPITAL

arman was lying on the hospital's bed....he opened his eyes very slowly.....he saw that someone was smiling and caressing his hair…....who???..perhaps riddhima....he tried to smile and touching her....but he have a terrible pain in his whole body....he is unable to smiling....and suddely he remembered everything and cried out......"riddhima!!!!!......basket!!!!!!......

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atul was very tensed today....after that accident....everything changed.....now dr.sashank didn't come to sanjiwani....anjali spent her whole time in "MOTHER NURSING HOME"....muskan used to come in hospital but like a puppet...only dr.kirti and abhi -nikki tried to manage all things....all were leading a motionless life… ...............atul was

suddenly mobile rang.....anjali was other side..."atul,arman ko hosh aa gaya hai...wo pagalon ki tarah chilla raha hai....riddhzi ko dhundh raha hai....koi bhi usey sambhal nahi pa raha hai...ab kya hoga atul!!!!.....

Atul: "toom ghabrao mat anjali, mai Arman ke pass ja raha hoon'

Anjali : 'nahi Atul,toom mat jao .toom to jhuth bhi nahi bol sakte aur abhi mujhe tumhari jaroorat hai,toom yahan aa jao.'


Atul : 'tum thik kahti ho anjali, mai Rahul ko wahan bhej deta hoon'.

Atul tried Rahul in mobile....just then he heard the voice of muskan..

Muskan : 'dekh Rahul,mujhe tung mat kiya kar'.

Rahul :' toh tu kiya jo ji me aaye karegi?'

Muskan : 'ha,karungi,tujhse to puchke nahi karungi na.tu wapus aaya hi keun? tu mujhe apne doston ke sath chor de.'

Rahul : 'mai bhi apne dost ke liye hi aaya hoon.'


Atul :' guys,koi mujhe bhi batayega ki kya ho raha hai?'

Rahul :' ish pagal ne do din se khana nahi khaya hai.Arman-Riddhima ke liye mannat magi hai..'

atul : 'sayad ishka hi rejult hai ki Arman ko hosh aa gaya hai.'.

Rahul-Muskan (both ) : 'kya !!! arman ko hosh aa gaya.!!!'


Atul : 'aur use koi sambhal nahi pa raha hai.'

Muskan : 'mai chali jati hoon.'

Rahul : tu kya karegi? tu gurudwara ja,tu wahi thik hai. mai ush pagal ke pass jata hoon.'

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Jiwansatya hospital

Rahul came in the hospital....he saw that dr.kirti was coming from arman's ward.....


Rahul :' Dr.kirti aap?'

Dr.kirti: 'yes,mai everday morning yahan aati hoon---Arman ko dekhne.'

Rahu :"wo kaisa hai?

dr.kirti : 'agar aaj mai na aati to bari muskil ho jati.he threw his all medicines....he was crying madly for riddhima….He got out of bed trying to run off…he has fallen 2-3 times…..i reassured him with a great difficulty….'

Rahul : 'abhi kya kar raha hai?.'
Dr.kirti : 'he is sleeping now.i gave him injection…,but now its your responsibility Rahul to keep cool him….'

Rahul : 'ok Dr.kirti,i will try my best.'

……………………….

atul took out his cycle quickly and left for 'mother nursing home"...he was trying to reach nursing home as soon as possible....he knew that anjali was very nervous that time and wants atul to uphold her....he remembered his best friend riddhima's words ...'atul,di uper se jitni tough hai ander se utni hi soft '.sach hi to hai...since 1 month,atul was watching a new look of Anjali.......she forgot everything.....na koi make-up,na koi sundar si dress....mano apne aap ko hi bhul gai hai---- arman -riddhz.ke liye.

to see atul,anjali ran towards him and hug him tightly.......'Atul,ab kya hoga?Arman toh bilkul pagal hai,kisi ki baat sunega hi nahi.kya bhagwan hamari imthaan le raha hai.'

atul : 'sab thik ho jayega Anjali.aur toom to bahoot himmatwali ho..toom toot jaogi to hum kya karenge?.'

Anjali (sobbing): 'aaj hi keun?jab itne dino tak arman ko hosh nahi tha to aaj hi keun Atul?'

Atul : 'aisa nahi kahte Anjali..sayad Arman ka hosh me aana kahta hai ki sab thik ho jayega.Rahul gaya hai usey sambhalne.ab toom thora rest le lo..mai ab yahin par hoon'...

Anjali kept her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes.....really she was very tired .but when atul said.."tum ghabrao mat anjali....all will be fine.." made anjali free from tensed....she always thought that atul was only a good friend..but now she understood that he is not only a friend,he is her 'prince'....who will always be with her .................



JIWANSATYA HOSPITAL


Rahul was caressing arman's hair.......a few tears flowed over his cheeks...that is the boy..whom he got always jealous in the college...a hero..'PRINCE'...who made thousands of girls crazy for him....today he is lying on the bed...injured..weak…helpless!!..if that day ,rahul would be there...he could be help arman and prevented to happen it....

rahul hold arman's hand lovingly.....suddenly arman opened his eyes....

Rahul : 'kaisa hai Arman?'

arman : 'tu kaise aaya?mere baki friends kaha hain?basket ko bulao...mujhe abhi usse milna hai..'

he tried to get up but unabled...

Rahul : 'takat to hai nahi feer bhi hospital ko ser pe uthake rakha hai.tu bilkul nahi badla.1 month se bed per para hai,kya tumhare dosto ko koi kam nahi hai?wo aa jayenge...

Arman :'dekh Rahul,mujhe mat samjha.mai baki dosto ki bat manta hoon..per basket kahan hai???...mujhe yad hai use goli lagi thi...wah kaisi hai?agar wah thik hai to mujhe chorker wah duty karegi mai nahi maan sakta.tu jaldi se use bula...nahi to mai kuch kar jaunga'

Rahul:'wo to mujhe pata hai.tu kabhi chain se baitha hai? ....kuch na kuch natak karta hi raha hai.tu behosh hi thik tha,ab hosh aaya hai to kuch hangama karega ye hum sab ko pata hai'...

shashank's house

nani : 'beta padma,kya tumhari puja khatm ho gayi?hume ab nikalna chahiye'.

padma : "haan ma,bus abhi aayi,aapne kuch kha to liya na.aj to sara din hospital me hi rahna hai'.

nani :"arey khane ki kisey pari hai,mai to bus jaldi se apni dono bachchion ke pass pahunchna chahti hoon.Anjali waha akele ghabra rahi hogi.'

padma : 'waha atul hai ma,baki dost bhi pahunchte hi honge.ma apko pata hai,Arman ko hosh aa gaya hai.Dr.kirti ne phone kiya tha.'

nani : 'ha beta,ab uske pass bhi kisiko rahna hi parega.ishwar jaldi se hamare bachchon ko thik kar de,fir mai dono ki sadi de dungi.ab mai sashank ki ek nahi sunne wali.kya sashank ne phone kiya tha?'

padma : 'ma wo Dr.francis ko lekar pahoonchte hi honge.unhone jo medical team banai hai,wo nursing home pahoonch chuki hai.'


nani : 'chalo beta,ab der nahi karna hai,bus jakar riddhima ke pass ye puja ke ful (flower)rakh doon'...




JIWANSATYA HOSPITAL


Arman : 'rahul,mai kuch bhi nahi karunga,bas mere bhai ye bata de riddhima kaisi hai?mai itna to buddhu nahi hoon ki tu mujhe taal dega.agar basket ko kuch ho gaya hai to mai yah hospital kya poori duniya me hangama macha dunga.sab kuch jalaaker rakh kar doonga.'

rahul ; 'kya tumhare liye abhi itna kafi nahi ki riddhima thik hai?tu agar jyada dimag per stress dalega to feer se paresani badhegi..'

arman : 'tujhe pata hai rahul,jab use goli lagi to usey meri bahon ka sahara chahiye tha.wo geer rahi thi aur apni bahon ko failakar mujhse sahara mang rahi thi aur mai itna kamjor nikla ki bahon ka sahara to dur,uska hath bhi nahi pakad paya,sashank sir thik hi kahte hain, mai unki beti ke layak nahi hoon.......'"

....arman was crying like a child.........'aur usne kaha tha mai uski jaan hoon,wo mujhe chorkar kahin nahi ja sakti.lekin meri jaan kaha hai rahul? mujhe usse sorry kahna hai....rahul basket kaha hai? .....agar wo bhi hospital me hi hai to ekbar mujhe le chal,mai bus ekbar uska face dekhunga.....feer jab tumlog kahoge tab milunga.'

rahul :' wo yaha nahi hai arman ,mai itna hi kah sakta hoon aur god promise wo thik hai,per abhi kuchdin tujhse mil nahi sakti.'

arman : 'kya wo mujhse naraj hai?apne arman se? thik hai mai milunga nahi,sayad Dr.sashank ne mana kiya ho!!.lekin ekbar mobile per uski awaz suna de....plz....'

rahul's eyes were full of tears....kya itna bhi pyar hota hai kisime!!!kya god ko inpar taras nahi aata?kya wo only test lena jante hain? "pyar ka imtihaan!!"

he hold arman hand gently and said : 'do you not believe me? '

arman said nothing ....just then muskan came in and hugged arman...'arman mai janti thi tu thik ho jayega...mere papaji ne mujhe kaha tha fikr karne ki jarurat nahi sab thik thik ho jayega.'

arman(worriedly) : 'muskan,riddhima kaha hai? mujhe uske pass le chalo...'

muskan ; 'are ish bhondu ne tumhe nahi bataya?wo to apni nani aur anjali ke sath kahi kisi mandir .'...(act like thinking something)....'kya naam bataya tha!!....kisi pahari per koi devi hai....wahan gayi hai,tumhare liye.....pata nahi koun sa jagah batayi thi!....waha to mobile bhi nahi lagta.mai to morning se yahi kosis kar rahi hoon ki tumhare hosh me aane ka samachar de du.wo to sunte hi udte hue chali aayegi,per kya karun!....sorry yaar.'

rahul : ' plz.arman...take rest..if you will be sick again..the riddhima will scold all of us....we promised her to take care of you.'

arman : 'atul kahan hai?'

muskan : 'are anjali jahan ,atul waha.tu kya samajhta hai kuch badla hai?..tu jaisa chodkar gaya tha,waisa hi hai....bas teri hi kami thi....ab phir se hum masti karenge.' ....'mai ab chalti hoon...dekhu agar riddhz. se contact ho jai.'...then moved towards rahul.......'tu kya mujhe bahar tak nahi chod dega?'

rahul ; 'ya,sure'..

rahul and muskan came out of the room....

rahul : 'tu to bari samajhdar nikli..ish situation ko achchi tarah handle kiya hai.'

muskan : 'thanks...but wo Arman hai Arman...uska dimag hardam ulta chalta hai....koi na koi tarkib lagayega.uske pass mobile to nahi hai na....'

Rahul : 'nahi hospital mein allow nahi hai.'

muskan :' thank god.lekin uske hosh me aney ka news soonkar sabhi usse milne aayenge aur wo sab se riddhz.ki baten hi puchega.'

rahul : 'mai abhi Dr.kirti aur anjali ko inform karta hoon ki kisi ko na bataye aur mai yahan ke security se bhi kah deta hoon ki mujhse bina pooche kisiko arman se milne na de.mai yahi rahunga.'

muskan(anxiously): 'rahul ..kya sab thik ho jayega?

rahul ; 'sure ,muskan.tu chinta mat kar.'

muskan : 'aur tu phir mujhe chodkar chala jayega?'

Rahul : 'nahi muskan,mai ab samajh chuka hoon ki pyar karnewale bari muskil se milte hain..aur aaj hame koi pyar karnewala mil jaye to kal ki chinta chodkar ushe apna lena chahiye.mai tujhe chodkar kahi nahi jaunga.'

they hugged.....muskan : 'i love you.'

rahul : ' I love you too.'

Hey friends….hope you liked it…plz.feel free to comments…and as you know ,I am weak in English…plz.ignore my mistakes in English words..love….

punam






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