SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: sanjh1234
very nice now want maan to miss geet yaar 😊

Both of them will miss.. but as my story is mostly from Geet POV... so .. you will not be able to see Maan's pain...😭

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: Nav2010
Woh...Maa chahti hain kee delivery wahin hon..... they want to take me to HP after Godhbharai......."she almost had tears in her eyes and left the table......

oHHHh feel sorry about them, they gonna miss each other oopppssss

Yes...more bacuse they have not confessed to each other...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: zahra15
i so want maan to go to hp with her as well......it will b so nice to have bth of them together there.......continue soon

Good thought...He will surely visit her.. becaue dil ko chain kahan aayega

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: puth
lovely update gb......geet is trying her best to save the marriage and get close to maan..............

Yes.. she is trying to find about Maan's feelings.. she is OK if Maan cares for her.. but will be very happy..if he loves her...so she has to make him confess...

Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Geet gng aln to HP no plz
Liked the update

Geet was using her mind n Maan was giving in willingly😉

Maan from starting had said.. if she wants he will come near to her...so he has no problems..he has never tried to hide from her that he is attracted to her.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: preethia
waisey geet ka acha plan hain maan ke pass jane ka.........................
loved the update.......................cant wait for the next update..................

wanna know wat happens next..............will he let her to go to hp and if she does will this make him realize his luv for her

she will surely go to HP...bina separation ke... dono confess kaise karenge...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56
Its all abt geet pov.... Wat abt maan's pov wat is he thinking ryt now.... Ofcourse he loves her but being maan he will make things worst..

Yes.. I am writting more from Geet's POV... Maan's POV I am keeping silent most of the times.. so that the suspense is maintained......

Maan is in caring mode.. so he will never do that... (worsts)

Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: preethia
loved the update...................so maan is in love with geet but not expressing himself now.................as of now geet understood but when is he going to understand her feelings i am eagerly waiting for that part ..............................
thanks for the pm pl cont soon

Yes.. he is confused for the time being.. and I will keep him confused...for long time...😉

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#509

FEELING GOOD MAAN TAKING CARE OF MOTHER OF HIS CHILD................. THEY BOTH LOVES EACH OTHER................OR HA HP TOUR IS GOING TO BE VERY INTERESTING AS THEIR SEPREATION WILL INCREASE THIEIR FEELING TOWARDS EACH OTHER

Edited by maansee - 14 years ago

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56
Oh dat was sweet part...... Awesome yaar but know i scared...... Btw y u post so many parts on one page its makes page very heavy on cell phone as my system is banned 4r me due to exams.....lol...

I don't know how I can help you...😭😭