SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: doosheeka
nice update...........

does maan remember with whom he was that night?

No.. he was also drunk that night remember...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: jazzerette
@Part 3....Geet's dilemma is well-understood...how do you tell a man you don;t even know, but apparently slept with, that you are carrying his child. Her doubts as to what would he think of her are also well founded...infact I am anticipating it whenever he comes to that realization.

Jazz..

as always.. you understood her dilema so well.. Thanks..

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--Nargis--

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Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

And so...the plot thickens...nice update. 👏 I'm looking forward to the next one!!😉

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

OMG!!!...... Its really interesting.... I jst came across.... Poor girl.... We have read 3part from geet p.o.v but i looking 4rward to read maan p.o.v.... Wat he thinks abt dat night nd did he recognised her......... Looking 4rward to next parts...

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

He better recognized her...... Oh plz i want him to recognized her..... Let see how would he react..... Dat would be fun!!!lol..

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

nice concept . awaiting development!!

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untamedtigress

@untamedtigress

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

loved the update ,lolll very interesting concept,as i already sed. plz coninue soon,thanx for the pm 😊

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

awesome update dear

i loved it

continue soon

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: jazzerette
@Part 4...
So Maan has a gf? So why was he in the hotel and had asked for some "company" that night!!😡 This is interesting...waiting to see the reason behind it.

Jazz

You missed it... go thorugh Maan's intro once again.. (1st para).. its from Office people POV.. so no need to believe all what they say..

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: esha143
nice update....so Geet pakdi gayi na khud ke baaton se...thoda toh kaabu karna seekh leti apni baaton pe....ab dekhon Maan ka shaq aur badh gaya....well I'm liking it....continue soon pls...

Yes .. I am trying to maintain same character flavor..

Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago