SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#331

super duper hit beautiful ending pls come up with another lovely FF thanks pm

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: chubzy
I jst lovd maan's confession his fears led hm marry her forcefuly in disguise of claimin hs child when d reason was other way round. Plz give an epilogue if u cn.

Many requests have come for epilogue...I have never written one.. I will check some ....and then surely will put one if I find it relevant.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: jazzerette
Whoa!! That was an awesome conclusion...and very passionate towards the end too......that "ek baar aur" cracked me up!!😆 Totally hot!! And ofcourse it was preceded by an equally sweet confession by both. Will you do an epilogue? Start another FF soon...👍🏼

Jazz...

I was missing your comments....

Yes, their milan has to be part.. as its after their confession...and it makes huge difference in love making if you know your partner loves you......and then they were in stress for so long...so that has to come out....

I normally have subdued love making scenes .. this time I let myself go.....

Epligue- I don't know how to write.. u know this is my first long story.. surely will put one as many requests have come.

New FF - very much.. I am excited by all of your support.

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: goldenball

Jazz...

I was missing your comments....

Yes, their milan has to be part.. as its after their confession...and it makes huge difference in love making if you know your partner loves you......and then they were in stress for so long...so that has to come out....

I normally have subdued love making scenes .. this time I let myself go.....we are not complaining...glad u let go...it was apt for the situation...you had perfect grip on the scene...after such a stressful scene...it was a logically passionate scene...that is why love your writing so much...you always write logically n sensibly imbibing all the romance, drama, emotions....without making it over the top.

Epligue- I don't know how to write.. u know this is my first long story.. surely will put one as many requests have come.

New FF - very much.. I am excited by all of your support. Waiting eagerly...

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#335

great union of them....................... finally they confess.............................. love them

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manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#336

amazing update as usual......finally maan confessed and they lived happily ever after.....................

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: jazzerette

👏👏

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untamedtigress

@untamedtigress

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#338

why has it ended up soo sooooooon pls start another HOTT PASSIONATE FF jaldi ,and pls dont forget to PM me😉

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Durga

@mrk-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#339

wow that was an awsome part yaar ..loved it so much

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#340

ooo dear loved the ff it was fab really loved it
thouruogly enjoyed reading it completed today ially
sorry 4 commenting late bt
really loved all the part
i wish if we could get an epilogue 4 it would really love to see it
thnx 4 the pm dear
du continue soon