SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: jazzerette
The voice that went "Trouble...trouble" in her head came true in a way!

Maan's reaction to the realization was very well written!! 👏

Hope everything turns out for the best *fingers crossed*

Thanks..

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: zahra15
amazing part......hope maan doesnt think bad of her..........continue soon

He will be confused..

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

pls cont soonnnnnnnn wow the more read the more crave to read again
wonder what i'll happen

i hope he doesnt miss

understood her

poor Geet amazing update

pls cont soonnnnnnn

thanks pm

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saim

@amzu32

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

amazing part 👏 continue soon

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manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

finally maan knew the truth.........fabulous update.............continue soon..............

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Geet Malhotra

@SapphireFlames

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

confrontation! yay! i wanna see.

nicely put update. :)

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Phew

Atlast Maan got it that it was Geet

He hav GF but still was forcing himself on Geet

Bad guy but good wit Geet😉

Liked how they talk n their unspoken words also

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

loved this ff..............oh god babaji sach mein geet ko bahut pareshaan kar rahe hain..............bechari maan banne wali hain aur upar se ussey maan ke paas bhej diya aur woh jantha tak nahi ki woh kaun thi well he knows now but only half truth................he doesnt know that she is bearing his child and bcoz of that she had to lose her family and happiness.................i am worried abt his reaction.........hope he doesnt react the other way

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Edited by preethia - 14 years ago