A Contract #2- FF on Maaneet (Last part pg 113) - Page 53

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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm sure geet i'll use her
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love it
but missing maan
brilliant update
pls cont soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh now understand geet's behavior...nice...
looking fwd,...

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Posted: 14 years ago
this is awesome,...i must say,,,so nt is not that bad in you ff ha..this is better,,but looks like she will definitely make some later...please contenue..thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
just kick out nt
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear loved the part continue soon it was great to know about maan past completely so she left betrayed no one could resist that his behaviour is quite justifies well
du update soon the next part eagerly waiting for what next i soo wanan se why they both got separate hope the whole story unfold soon
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Loved the part do continue soon
Thanks for the pm
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
great ff. i luved it. could u pls add me to ur pm list? ty!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part... waiting for next update. thanx 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey hi read ur ff..its lovely like the way geet planned to ruin shasha's image..nice plan..hmmm hope to hav more maaneet special moments...and poor geet standin down there all alone..cant wait for ur update..pls pm me the link and add me in ur buddy list!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi everyone,

Thank u all for ur encouraging comments.
-Sravanthi

Part 42

Maan enters the party hall. Yash see him n smiles but as shocked seeing that Geet wasn't there with him. Yash the thinks "O god I think knew everything n felt Geet there……I need to go." He was about to leave meera comes there.

"yash..where r u going"

"Actually I saw Geet with Maan on the way but only maan came here……I'm worried about Geet, I will check n come."

Meera smiles n asks him to leave. Yash leaves.

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Geet was standing there in mid of the road, she was feeling uneasily. She holds her head in closes her eyes. Yash reaches there in his car n spots Geet. By the time Yash reaches there geet faints. Yash holds here n takes her home.

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Maan was in the party.Meera comes near maan.

"meera…when did u come."

"I just come"

"but…"

"I come with yash…….It is him 1st big deal…….so he just wanted me to there."

"but y???"

"leave that…..Geet did not come."

\Maan as silent

"at least did u leave her in such a place from were she can go home or come here easily."

Maan realizes n says "O no.."Maan was about to leave n meera says "yash has already left."

"What???then its ok they will reach." Says maan carelessly

Meera with tears in her eyes says " u know maan I was happy ……very happy last few days…….in fact few mins before also."

Maan smiles but worried says "what happen tears????? Did vickey say anything."

"no…."

"no????"

"Maan do u know the reason of my happiness."

"of course I know."

"u don't know……bcz the reason u r thinking is not the main reason."

"then…….."

"nothing" tears roll out n she wipes n leaves.

Maan was confussed n he was about to go behind her but some one call him n he leaves that side."

Yash bring geet home. Dadima comes running "what happen?"

"Nothing dadima."

What happen to geet?"

"I don't know" Yash takes her to the room n dadima calls a doctor.

"yash where is maan"

Yash does not reply.

"Yash"

Yash hesitantly says "Dadima I don't know what happen but maan left geet on the way n left…….I saw her in this state on the road so got her home."

"where is Maan"

"I think in her party."

"what????"

Dadima get angry.

Yash thinks "I'm sorry Dadima I could not tell u the complete thing."

Doctor comes n treats geet.

"doctor" dadima

"don't worry there is nothing to worry……..just use these medicines n ask her to take rest."

"sure."

Doctor leaves.

Dadima says "Yash u leave I'm here."

"but….."

"yash this is a imp deal for u right."

Yash nod n says " not more than Geet."

Dadima smiles n thinks "if I would have heard this from maan it would have been good."

N says "yash…" n smile

Ok" n yash leaves.

Dadima " I need to know what's wrong."

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Meera comes out, sits on a chair sadly n says " I was wrong………I was wrong…..I thought maan has changed but he did not…….i is the same old one……he is nor a new one nor my Maan…" maan comes here n says "Meera y r u crying." Meera thinks "I'm out crying out of pain but I'm crying out of disappointment."

"meera"

"A"

"what happen"

"nothing Maan……..maan u know I was happy thinking that u got a very good friend in form of geet"

maan does not reply, meera continues "I never thought that geet got a punishment in form of u that she do not know who long to bear."

Maan gets shocked listening to this.

Yash comes back, Meera gets up n say "Yash geet"

Yash looks seriously at Maan n says "She is at home…..She is not feeling well" Maan gets up shocked. "I found her in fainted state on the road…….dadima called a dadima, he told nothing to worry." N he leaves.

Maan immediately runs toward his call n leaves. Meera gets a small smile seeing this.

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Yash comes back n Meera says "If we can…we will leave."

Yash nods his head n says " I will come."

He informs Adi n then Meera n yash leaves the place.

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Maan comes home worried n goes into there room.Geet was awake n dadima was there beside her. Maan goes in.He stands quite.Dadima see him

"Maan" geet looks there n finds Maan. She was very angry n maan looks at geet he was guilty. Dadima observes them n says " I will just come" n leaves.

Maan goes near geet n Geet gets up.

"No geet take care."

Geet sees maan seriously n says "I just wanted to say "I'm sorry".

"sorry" says want with sad n confused face.

"yes sorry………….sorry that I worried about to u……….sorry that I interfered in ur life……..sorry that I thought that u r my friend………….I'm sorry for everything."

"but geet….."

"sorry Maan I should I remaindered that I'm just ur contract wife…I don't have any right to interfere in ur life……….n about friendship……..we were never friend n can never be."

"geet"

"maan u r not at all wrong………I'm right."

"geet listen to me"

"do u think any thing else is left to listen"

Maan lost this patience n says "do u really think that NT even to matter to me so much…….what do u even know"

"Maan yes………..NT even matters to u even to day……….maan any one can never forget their past…….what so ever……if it is times of happiness may be one can forget but sad n painful times in ones life can never be forgotten by him/her…..u r no exception."

"No……..she does not matter to me today.'

"don't tell me…..but just asked urself once ur soul will tell u the same.."

"u can't tell that."

"I'm telling u that but I know that." N leaves.

Maan stands there in dilama as he is not able to accept the same but he knows its true.

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee
luved ittt
geet showed d mirror 2 maan

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