A Contract #2- FF on Maaneet (Last part pg 113) - Page 42

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update..
fabulous ff

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi everyone,

Thank u all for ur encouraging comments. Guys I'm really sorry for this late update.Hope u like it.

Guys I started a new SS:hijack:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1658604/hijack-new-ss-of-maaneet

Plz do read n comment.

-Sravanthi

Part 37

Geet holds Maan shoulders n Maan holds Geets right hand with his left hand n Geet waist with his right hand.Geet then clamed down n looks at Maan .Geet n Maan were so very close n it was raining, the coat fell down so they were drenching but did not realize it as there was a eye lock between them, they were lost in each others eyes. Then there was a lightening.......Geet just got scared n then came back to her senses......n does Maan. Maaneet turned to opposite sides, they felt very inconvenient,both bend there head down n hold there head. There did not understand what to do. Maaneet then turn towards each other n slowly lifts there head, looks at each other ,but were silent. They were drenching in rain.

Maan cell rings,Maan takes his cell out n Geet was seeing confusedly n thinks "who is calling????? Hope not sasha….." n gets worried Maan looks at the name n says "dadima."

Geet gets relaxed.

"hello"

"Maan"

"ji dadima"

"where r u?"

"Dadima ……..actually……actually."

"anyways………I just called to ask u n Geet………she is with u."

"yes."

"It its good…….u both come back soon……Its raining heavily.'

"Ok dadima."

"bye"

"bye"

Maan then cuts the call n putting the cell in his pocket smiles.

"what happen?:

"come fast."saying this he will run into the car n immediately puts his cell out."

"what happen"

"nothing……..dadima called to ask us to come fast as it is raining heavily…."

"O…"

Maaneet was in the car n Maan was driving the car…

Geet opens the window n Maan looks at her seriously. Geet with a smile looks out, puts her hands out n was enjoying the rain…..

"U love rain."

Geet turns towards Maan n says "Yes….n u know I always wanted to travel in the car when it was raining n….." saying this she slowly puts her upper body out off the window n looks up, she puts her hands out. She had n great smile on her face……Maan see this n smiles ………he start to drive car very fast…….She gets scared n immediately comes in completely n sits, she looks seriously at Maan.

"what happen ????Why did u come in."

Geet sees seriously n says "u wanted me to sit properly…..thats y"

"what??? who told u?"

"no one have to say….I can understand…….."

"O…O…what's wrong with u….what did I do know?"

"why r u driving this fast."

"O..Geet….ok I will slow down…(n he does) u don't know if car is going fast u will have the really fun….."

Geet just turns her face to other side.

"I'm serious Geet….try it."

Geet looks at Maan n Maan nods his head, Geet smiles n agin puts her upeer body out of the window n Maan drives fast…

Geet smiles n enjoys but after few minutes n she comes in n sits properly.

"what happen??"

"nothing….It really nice but I'm bored now."

"so soon."

Geet nods her head.

"u know how to drive."

"yes but its been long that I droved."

Maan stops the car n gives the keys n says "then do it now."

"now…..no way"

"y"

"bcz its been long that I droved….almost a year…….after I learnt driving I never droved so……."

"So……..Its interesting to see Geet saying no to do some thing n is not confident .."

"Maan."

"I'm serious….."

"Ok…..but it anything happen to car or if we meet with a accident I'm not responsible."

"Ok……done."

Maaneet exchange their sits……Geet starts to drive n she was driving so slow…

"Geet if u drive like this we will reach home after 3 days."

"Ha.ha.ha very funny……..anyway do't disturb me……let me concentrate."

"Geet…."

"MAAN" shouts Geet.

:"last ?"

"Ok"

"Its ur dream to travel in a car……..I did not get it.'

"I don't earn n car……so its obvious that I never traveled in a car…….i just learnt it….."

Maan looks n smiles.

"Geet…."

"stop it Maan."

"Ok….."

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Yash reaches home.

He immediately calls Geet.

Geet cell rings.

"Maan …….my cell."

Maan looks at the phone's screen n says "its from Yash's home."

"o. lift it"

"me……"

"yes u know him right…….its Ok………n not everytime."

Maan smiles n picks up the phone. Maan was about to says hello but before it only yash says "helloooooooooooooo geet……good News I met that girl……u know her name is ….."

"hello…..yash Geet is driving…….she will call u back."

"Ok"

Maan cuts the call.

"who is it???"

"Yash"

"yash????"

"he was saying that he met her."

"really…….the"

"I don;'t know I told him u will call him back."

"O……ok"

Maaneet reached home.

"see maan its not been 3 days….."

Maaneet smile n goes in. dadima was sitting in the main room n waiting for them.

"Dadima…….u did not sleep."

"no Maan I was waiting for u……."

"Sorry dadima."

"Its Ok Geet……both of u go n change ur clothes….."

"Ok…..dadima." saying this maan sits.

"Maan……first go n change." Says Geet seriously.

"geet……" says Maan angrily

Both Geet n Dadima starts laughing loud…….n Geet runs to towards her room. Maan sees geet seriously n then looks at dadima n dadima gets up n goes. Maan sees dadima seriously till she leaves n smiles n leaves to his room.

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Next morning,

Maaneet comes to office n go to their respective cabins…

Sasha comes into Maan's cabin

"Good morning MK."

"good morning Sasha "

"MK u did not come yesterday, everyone were waiting for u."

"I already spoke to u about this Sasha……anything else."

"nothing MK………O sorry…… Mr.chary meeting."

"O yes I will there by 12."

"Ok MK." N she leaves.

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Yash comes into Geet's room.

"hi"

"hi…..u called me yesterday."

"yes I did but u were busy."

"nothing like that."

"No problem………u know that I met that girl yesterday." Say yash happily

"O really." Say geet excitedly

"yes….."

"when"

"she came to KC"

"O……but.."

"u know what the most shocking news is she is Maan's friend."

"what??????"

Yash nods. Pinky comes in.

"good morning Mam…..good morning sir."

"Good morning" both says

"today at 12 we have Mr.chary's project meeting."

"O……….We will be there."

"Ok mam" she leaves.

Yash turns towards Geet n says "this project is Sasha's important project……."

"O…then y we r going."

"since he is imp client Maan refers everyone's presences."

"O……..yash."

"what????"

"I have a idea."

"Idea……….."

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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!
LOVD D RAIN PART!!!👏
WAITING 4 UR NEXT UPDATE!!!😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...dear

loved it...
i hope this contractual relationship between them soom blossoms into love....

hate that female ..sasha..she is such a 😡.....feel lik thrashing her.....

read ur new story HIJACK.. also...
looking forward for its updates
keep writing

love ur writing

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
very lovely n amazing update..........

now shasha shud get her first blow to mess with geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing update.. enjoyed it... luved maneet in rain.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it n hope geet's plan works
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it yaar ...awsome one
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Posted: 14 years ago
tanx 4r updating...............nic update..........do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome luv the way they were playing in the rain like two teenager and then maan letting her drive. Stupid Sasha i hate her whats her problem cant she accept that he is married

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