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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Hi Dear

Nice part...but who is this Vaishali??

Where is Raj??

Continue soon

Bye

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hinal

@hinal60

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

really nice update

sister and mother daughter scene is really good

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

nice part. loved it.
update soon.

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Purnima

@-purnima-

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

lovely first part 👏👏👏.................. it was good to see naina loving her mom so much 😃😃.........
naina's family seems to be a quite happy & loving family 😃😃😃.......... her relation with isters was good too 😃😃.........

& naa not excited to know who vaishali is 😆😆😆................ but more excited to know......where is Raj 😍 😳😳😳........... missed him in first part 😉😉😉😉...........

continue soon 😃😃

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

wow great part love it thanks dear

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nabiha (bia)

@Bia_Ansari

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

commendable.......................ria love it.............incredible

for PM me ....do remember me again !

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Nice part.

One suggestion for u riadon't mind but pls try to use different dialogues same dialogues humesha effective nahi hote hain.

As u write apni feelings dil me dabate hue, it didn't match to the second situation where Naina was trying to get up her sisters.

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Riddhi

@RiddhiB

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

nice start...
Pia-Tia sleepin'..hehe..but Naina shouts "goo.....sis" to wake them up..oooo..shoo sweet..loved that scene!
And what's with Vaishaali ka b'day? who's dis Vaishaali?
Another new entry..wow..
cont. soon..

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

[QUOTE=Mahak Sinha]Nice part.

One suggestion for u riadon't mind but pls try to use different dialogues same dialogues humesha effective nahi hote hain.

As u write apni feelings dil me dabate hue, it didn't match to the second situation where Naina was trying to get up her sisters.

[/QUOTE] yaaa offcourse dear mian mind kun karunge actually i wrote this part in a hurry aur mere mind mein kuch ideas bhi nahin aa rahe thre so but anyways thanks a lot dear for ur suggesions i know and i always appreciate ur writting style its really nice and this kind of suggesion or criticism i always welcome as a motivation which enable me to do preogess so from next time i hope to see this kind of suggesion from u

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
yaaa offcourse dear mian mind kun karunge actually i wrote this part in a hurry aur mere mind mein kuch ideas bhi nahin aa rahe thre so but anyways thanks a lot dear for ur suggesions i know and i always appreciate ur writting style its really nice and this kind of suggesion or criticism i always welcome as a motivation which enable me to do preogess so from next time i hope to see this kind of suggesion from u

thanks Ria i want u to write in very good manner that's why i point out these things.

thanks 😊 😊 😊

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