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Posted: 14 years ago
when r u going 2 updt
it has been a long tym
waiiitttiiinnnngggg
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya95

when r u going 2 updt
it has been a long tym

waiiitttiiinnnngggg

Sorry Yaar, I thought I will be able to update 2day, but seems like i will not be able...

But i will try my best to update tonight or 2mrow!


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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 28


Maan: Geet! What happened?

Geet: (Sweating) : Maan, something happened to me...

Maan: Something?

And again he heard her screaming when he tired to make love.

Maan: Geet, are you alright?

Geet: M..ma..maan.....

She got fainted. Maan really got scared.

Maan: Geet, Geet, geet, open your eyes,, Geet kuch bolo......

But no use. She was unconscious..

He took the mobile and dialed "Hotel Doctor"

Doctor: Hellow, Mrs. Saksena Speaking, how may I help you...

Maan: Hello Doctor, it's MSK speaking..

Doctor: Oh hello Mr. Khurana, how are you?

Maan: Doctor, I need your help...

Doctor: Is everything alright?

Maan: Something Happened to my wife... she got fainted as soon I......

Doctor: Yes, Mr. Khurana...

Maan: See doctor, as soon....

Doctor: Oh! I can understand what you mean. Is this the 1st time this happened?

Maan: Actually doctor, this is our honeymoon and ....

Doctor: Oh! So you have no past experience.

Maan: mh!!! yes doctor...

Doctor: Ok, I think she is under some pressure.

Maan: No Doctor, she was alright before, but suddenly... Plz doctor, help me...

Doctor: Ok, I'll come now. What is your cabana no. ?

Maan: No. 288, see side one... and thank you doctor...

Doctor: It's oki, I will be there within 15 mins.

As soon she hung the phone, Maan quickly grabbed Geet's night dress and put it on to her.

He tried his best to get her conscious back, but failed.... He rubbed her hands, feet, fingers.... But no use.

.....................................................................................................

Doctor: Hello Mr. Khurana, may I come in and have a look?

Maan: Oh come in doctor. Plz plz have a look @ her. Plz make her feel better, if something happens to her, my life will be no use.

She is my life.... plz try your best.. Don't worry about the expenses.

I will take care of everything, only thing that does matter for me @ the moment is Geet feeling better...

Doctor: Plz Mr. Khurana, control your self. You have to be strong now... I will go and check her. You can wait here.

Maan: I'll try my best doctor.

...........................................................................................................

Doctor spent more than 1 hour to check her. Maan was really worried over Geet. He couldn't do anything.

The only thing he could do was calling Dev. He knew Dev and NT are in California @ the moment.

He didn't want to bother Daadi.

So he grabbed his phone and dialed the no.

Dev: Hey, bro.... wazzup? so u remembered us nah?

Maan: Dev...

Dev: Bro, is everything alright?

Maan: Dev, Geet...

Dev: Kya hua bro, is bhabhi ok?

Maan: No she is not

Dev: OMG! what happened?

Maan explained everything to him. As he is his brother and they shared a very good bond, he was able to tell him the truth, the very truth about their relationship...

Dev was shocked by this... But as this situation, where maan involved, he could no longer ask him more.

Dev: Got it bro...btw, what did doc say?

Maan: She is still checking her... that's why I am really worried.

Dev knew Maan was about to cry, yes the MSK who never cried, is about to cry.....

Dev: You don't worry bro, we will be there by tomorrow morning. NT is booking our tickets.

Maan: Thank you dev.

...............................................................

Dev: OMG! NT, Geet is in this situation, i can't imagine..

NT: Dev, some girls get stressed out with that situation. She got stressed too I think..

Dev: But bhabhi, she was a strong character nah?

NT: Dev, we don't know her inner side. the only thing we can do for bhai is to go there as soon as possible...

Dev: Yeah, please check the bookings.

..........................................................

Doctor: Mr. Khurana, can I have a word with you?

Maan: Kya Doctor?

Doctor: please don't be upset, but we have a problem...

Maan shattered. He knew something was wrong.

Maan: That means Geet is not ok??? is it critical...??

Doctor: Mr. Khurana, be strong...

Maan: Mh!!!

Doctor: Mr.Khurana!!!!

Maan: Oh! Doctor,

Doctor: Please Mr. Khurana, you have to be in a good condition...

Maan: Oki Doctor, now you going to tell me that Geet kabhi maa nahi banpayengi right? Muje iska koi mathlabh nhai, I just want her happiness.

Muje koi bachcha nahi chahiye, sirf or sirf Geet ko chahiye,, agar...

Doctor: Mr. khurana, it is not like that, please, control your self.

Geet has a medical condition which gives her pain. She can't handle the pressure and pain.

So, when ever anyone tried to get close to her, i mean if you tired to consummate with her, she will get stressed out and will get faint.

Hearing this Maan broke in to thousands of pieces, that means all their dreams will be shattered.

He cried, yes, actually cried, MSK, for the first time in his life he cried.

Doctor: PLZ you have to accept this truth. You ahve to be there for Geet.

...................................................................

As soon doctor left, Maan seated near the bed and hold her hand.

Maan: Geet, I am sorry, i will not be a help. I will accept this truth, but how can you accept this.

I know you will die if you know this.

I will have to hide the truth from you. The only thing I have to do is continue our fights.

I'll have to inform Dev and NT, not to tell this to Daadi.

..................................................................

Maan informed this situation to Dr. Suman, their family doctor.

She promised him that she will not reveal this to anyone.

..................................................................

Geet: M... a... aa.....nnn

Maan: Geet?

Geet: Oh! My head is paining. What happened to me?

Maan: nothing.

Geet: Can u pass me the water glass?

Maan: Here you go...

Geet: Maan, muje kya hua?

Maan: Nothing, you fell asleep.......

Geet: What? But I remember..... mh! dinner, beach.....

Maan: You must be dreaming.....

Geet: Kya?

Maan: When I came back with the dinner you were in a sleep.

But must be a good dream. You were smiling, hugging the pillow..


Maan tired his best with his lies. He knew this will hurt Geet, But if he told the truth, she will be shattered.

So he has to do this,in any cost.....

Geet:Oki, I am sleep now. I am gonna sleep, are you coming?

Maan: WHAT? are u nuts, pehele bhi tume sone keliye mere aana saroorath nahi thi nah, so abh what?

Geet: Maan!!!

Maan: han, Maan, look @ the time... it is 5 in the morning..

Geet: Kya?

Maan: Han. tum so jao, i have some work to do

He left the room with a question in her mind..

That means all those incidents were a dream.......

Geet: I was so stupid to think that he loved me back.... i am an idiot.....

Geet cried a lot, she knew she was blinded by love...


Precap: Bro??? are you sure????

Han, i am pretty sure..........



Guys sorry for the late update. I was really busy with my work.

And this whole chapter is dedicated to,


AVANI_9


This twist idea is hers. She is the one who gave me this physical condition.


Thank you Avani for your great help.

To others who helped me, thank you so much!


Sorry for the typing errors...


Plz leave a lovely comment!

love Pini


Ps. hit the like button!


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Posted: 14 years ago
piniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,.... ye kaisa twist de diya tum nay .. am sure there has to be some cure of Geet's condition😕.... plzz dont tear them apart ... pweeeaaassseee "makes a pleading baby face"

continue soon

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant part.
new twist
precap is interesting.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh babes awazing twist. Aaw bechari geet. I feel bad 4 her
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Posted: 14 years ago
superbbbbbbbb twist
but sad for maan n geet.....
continue soon........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear loved the part it was fab
ahan nice twist lets c wat next
ryt now i tnk non of u are planning to give us sum relief
the no of ffz\ im reading i find non happy
nd the serial that too going gr8
alas lets c wats next u have 4 us
well loved the part bt surely u will du sumthing nd get them together
there must b a solution
coz wen there is a problem there defo a solution
so updtae the next
part will b waiting eagerly
thnx 4 the pm dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahahah twist sabardasth hai.heeheheeheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
msk is crying................
poor geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
new twist
pls cont soon...

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