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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nahtani88

superb update n nice poem
cont soon


thanks for loving the update.
poem is posted by sharmake11 and simi91
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Awesomeeee update
loved it
gr8 work
cont soon
Thankz


thanks for loving the update.
I'll update soon.
my pleasure dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

when r u updating this FF???


I'll update it tomorrow most probably.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

wow wow super duper mindblowing all parts i hate that Sameera poor Maan heard bad past he lost parents because of how of him taking care child that its not his he has big heart poor Geet suffer lot real love how desecribe each character pls cont soonnnnnn

cant to read more


thanks for loving all parts.
me too hate sameera.
yes poor maan had bad past.
yes anjali not his own daughter but he thinks anjali as his own daughter.yea maan has very big heart.
anjali is soul of maan now.
yes geet also suffers lots.
I'll update soon
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

A KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR
Author: Anonymous
In this world full of hurt and pain,
I need someone who would help me through the rain.
To comfort me when Im sad,
Doing everything just to make me glad.

In this world I need a Brave Knight,
Who would never give up any fight.
A knight who would dry away my tears,
Telling me to overcome my fears.

A knight who loves me for who I am inside,
With him there's nothing more I need to hide.
A person who will still be standing strong,
Eventhough everything has gone wrong.

I need someone who is willing to give me more,
Someone I can call my Knight In Shining Armor
susana what beautiful poem
cant believe yu read this FF & yu
didnt tell i'm kill when see yu


beautiful peom👏

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


I'll update it tomorrow most probably.



probably...grr....😡
no probably...definitely...plz...
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l



probably...grr....😡
no probably...definitely...plz...


ok jee,
tumne bola aur humne suna😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

nice story................very interesting......................
till part 3
Maan has feelings for Geet par he hasnt confessed yet and also doesnt wanna go thru' the pain and betrayals again...................just kick that Sameera out........
wonder what Maan is up to.......................
add me to ur pm list and cont soon........................and pm me.............


thanks for loving all parts,
yes maan has feelings for geet but he hasn't confessed it cause of his past and the pain he went through in past.
yes u guess right ,
he feared about the betrayal.
maan will throw sameera away .
maan's plan will reveal in next part.
Added u dear.
I'll update soona nd pm u also.
.
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for all comments. loved it all.
replied all.
pm list will updated soon.
love u all
rakhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Note:-this part is spl for jyoti, durga and heermeher.
maaneet's abck story will not be post today.
maaneet's back story part 2 will be post next time.
but Ill send u all pm after both part posted
hope u all fine with that


Next Part:-

Anjali looks tired after some time, geet noticed it and pull maan's elbow and said can we go home back?

Maan looks at her and said y? what happen? R u not feeling well.

Geet :-no,I'm fine but Anjali is not fine, she is looking tired, I think she needs some rest.

Maan looks at Anjali and said ok, Maan take Anjali in his arms and said kya hua mere bacche ko, neend aarehe hain.

Anjali just nodded in yes. Maan kisses her cheeks and said ok bete, we will go back now.He looks at dr suman but she is no where.

Maan thinks may be she is busy some where and said let's go geet.

Geet:- but dr suman.

Maan:-I'll call her in the way.

Maaneet and Anjali settle in the back seat while driver start the car.

Maan call dr suman after some time she picks the phone and want to where is he?

Maan apologize for sudden disappearance but when he said about Anjali,

Dr suman said ok , but u and geet will come again and I have to show u something and needs ur help.

Maan agreed and promised to go there again.

Geet looks at maan .Here Anjali snuggled more closely to geet.

Geet patted her back and then again she falls in sleep.

Maan looks at geet- Anjali and found them perfect; he admired their bonding, just like mom and daughter. But he feared about something.

They reached at khurana mansion.

Maan helped geet to come out from the car.

Here from out house sameera seen it. She is fuming in anger. She wants to snatch maan from geet.

She is confused about maan's behavior. y he is too much caring towards geet, what is

the relation between geet and maan. Maaneet enter the house with Anjali.

Sameera seen Anjali cuddle in geet and held her neck tightly.

Sameera feel nothing but she don't' want to see Anjali so close to geet.

Here , geet take Anjali in her room and changed her dress then tucked her in the spread.

Maan enter his room and enter the washroom to take a shower.

Here sameera also came but servants said sir didn't like her here so stay in the hall, they will inform their boss.

Sameera shouts and said she is madam of this house.

Geet heard some noise and come out and find sameera shouts at servants .they not let her enter further.

Geet try to come down fast but suddenly her leg slipped and she almost fall and geet closed her eyes in fear but soon some one catch her in time and pull her towards him.

Geet closed her eyes in feared and collided a solid, hard rock. Then she understand it's maan and maan's hand hold her waist tightly. His breath falls on her face.

Geet shuddered and whispered in audible voice.

Maan smiles little but said r u ok, what is the urgency coming here? Y r u running like this?

Geet:-oh, sameera.

Then maan look at down stair and find sameera looking at them ,

Then sameera said so, mr khurana this is the reason , u want to keep this girl with u. great, if u do anything wrong then it's right but when other will do their own then that will wrong according to u.

Maan close his eyes and barked robin, robin,

Robin came and said yes sir.

Maan :- call police right now and said some intruder enter here and creating problem,

Sameera gasped and thinks if maan throw her now then where she will stay .

Sameera said sorry.oh I'm feeling hungry and no food in the out house so.

Maan:- nale call some one to serve food in the outhouse .

Nales nodded and looks at sameera.

Sameera :-ok and left the place.

Here, maan said kya hua geet, is it hurting.

Geet nodded in no and said I want to talk with u now.

Maan shook his head and said no, I'll not, ur problem is same, now let's go and eat dinner, where is Anjali now?

Geet:- she is sleeping. I make her eat some little food, I'll stay with her a tonight, hope u r ok with it .

Then , geet try to walk but couldn't her ankle twisted and she almost fall.

Maan saw it and said kya hua?

Geet:-kuch nehi…

But again she struggle to walk and maan hold her shoulder then take her in his arms.

Maan looks at geet and said don't u have mouth . god know u women when u'll know the correct time for using ur mouth, when not required u r continue ur bak bak and when it's required u r like.

Geet is totally uncomfortable about their close proximity, geet thinks that she is maan's arm and maan only wearing his vest. Oh god when this man will know my problem or whne will this man will give me some peace.

Maan placed her in the couch and said nakul bring hot water.

Geet:-I ..don't….

Maan:- ms geet handa, I don't need ur precious opinion . Let me do my work.

Geet twisted her lips and said I'm ok , it's but stop to see maan's angry glance.

Nakul bring hot water and then an ointment. Maan held geet's leg and pull her pant slightly but geet said maan.

Maan :- stop behaving like illiterate. If u have any problem then think U r patient now and I'm ur doctor

Maan keep geet's leg there and slowly massage her leg upto her calf. Geet feels shiver and new sensation but not due to pain or hot water, cause of maan.

Maan noticed it and slightly he smiles.

After that maan slowly wipes her leg by towel . Then asked how is feeling, now still hurting.

Geet:-hmmmm.

Maan:- geet…

Geet still in shocked or some stance and said hmmmm.

Maan shook his head and then sit besides her and placed her leg in his lap and said geet, oh ointment do pehele.

Geet is thinking about her child hood when her parents used to care for her but then… after long time some one again giving her love, care .Geet said again hmmmm.

Maan :- this girl, he takes the ointment and massaged her legs.

Here sameera seen the whole scene and feeling tremendous jealous .she could not see geet for one sec. she want to kill her.

After this maan order nakul to bring their food in the table.

Maan again carry geet and make her sit and said eat ur dinner.I'm coming within 5 min.

Geet just nodded in yes.but she is waiting for maan.

Sameera stop there and want to see what is happening there actually?

She saw maan return back and maan sit besides geet.

Maan little scold geet for waiting for him but smiles when geet said don't scold me, that day when I eat early u give me long lecture for not waiting for u. just like that day in office u told me go but later u scold me again , when u r the one who told me what to do or not then forget everything, u suffering from partly amnesia.

Maan smiles at geet and said eat ur dinner now.

Sameera shocked to see maan like this, she never seen him smiling or take any jokes or casual talk or taunting lightly. But here geet taunt him still he smiles at geet. But y?

After dinner geet want to clean the table when maan warned her and take her with him.

Geet try to protest but maan ignored and carry her and said If u not ok then I'll be the one who will suffer .

Geet pouted and said sadu, jhootha.

Maan held her more close and said say again.

Geet gasped to see him close and held his biceps tightly.

Maan looks at her innocent face and take her with him.

Here , sameera seen and fuming in anger but then she remember maan and feel lust and her hidden desire for maan is rising .She wants maan now and taking step towards up stairs but robin come and block her way.

Sameera:- leave from way.

Robin just look at her then said nila take her with u and watch her un till sir give us further instruction.

Nila nodded and take sameera with her.

Sameera shouts and said I want to meet maan, leave my hand.

Nila forcefully take her with her.

Maan placed her beside Anjali and said good night and if u need anything then just call mrs berry, she is next door.

Geet just nodded and said thanks.

Maan stop and said from when we r saying each other thanks or sorry geet?

Geet shook in no and said ok ,I'll not.but…

Maan:-I know u want to talk to me. U'll not now, it's late and have some sleep, u r not fully well yet.

Geet nodded in yes.

Maan switched off the light and close the door behind him .

Geet lay in her bed and look at Anjali who is sleeping soundly. Geet kissed her forehead and said beta I'll leave tomorrow and u'll get ur mother back.but don't forget me.

Geet lay in the bed and thinking about the time when she spend with maan and Anjali.A tears escape from her eyes and she sighed to thinks about her destiny.

She close her eyes and smiles again she will be alone, no one will there to care for her, to give her love.

She want to cry but now it's impossible,

Here maan enter his room and think it's high time to tell everything about his life and past and sameera to geet.

Robin knock the door and maan said come in.

Robin sorry to disturb u sir.

Maan glance at him and robin inform him about sameera and her deed.

Maan :-hmm and then said call mr saxena tomorrow morning.

Robin nodded and then maan said mein jo bola tha , oh kaam ho gaya.

Robin smile and said yes sir.

Maan evilly smirks and said good now just check sameera.

Robin nodded and left the room.

Maan closed the door and lay in the bed and said I'm sorry geet but I have to do it for u and me and Anjali,I'm taking risk but today I seen something in ur eyes and I trust ur eyes more than my stupid heart .

Both maaneet sleep in each other thoughts but one think about their union and other separation.

Next day morning, maan is busy with his morning work out session when he feels some one hold his waist and give her kisses in his back,

He feels sick and push that person and turns said how dare u to come here? I feel disgusted ,I never seen a women like u.

Here that person is none other that sameera who is laying in the floor and said uff maan calm down and look at me. I'm ur ex wife , yes we never have any husband wife relation but if u wish we will.

She winks at him.

Maan barked robin, nakul nila,

Sameera:- don't shout at this hour.

She slowly approached towards maan and said I'm still young and u r also, y can't we have some S**.

Maan just slapped her hard and said don't u dare to cross ur limits again.

Sameera looks at maan and said Mr Khurana, u r a looser; I'm still thinking either u r man or not.

Maan's anger rising in top and he held her hand tightly and hissed don't u dare to cross ur limits, u'll not have time repent for it.

Sameera thinks she did wring thing by say those lines unless she didn't know maan Singh khurana.He dealt everyday sameera like women.

Maan dragged her mercilessly and throw her in the out side of the mansion and said get lost from my house if u not want kill by me.

Sameera want to stay but when she looks at maan's eyes which is fuming in anger just taking stap backwards .Maan closed the door and shouts where is every one?

Robin who is running and asked sir sorry, we r busy .

Maan glanced at him and said r u want to loose ur job now or what,I warned u yesterday about sameera still that lady came here , y? Where is nila. I'm not paying u all or u all r paid by sameera.

Geet heard everything from work out room. She feels crying and don't know y?

She went to give juice to maan but when she seen sameera with maan but she didn't hear anything there and thinks differently.

Maan :- iha khare kyuon ho, go and clean out house first and call mr saxena to meet me within 1 hour.

Maan left from there and but before leaving he said if this time u all fail to do ur job then wait for the consequence.

Here in the anjali's room, geet is crying and remember what she seen in the work out room.

Maan passing by the room and heard noise and knock the door.

Geet quickly wipes her tears and said come in.

Maan open the door and found geet's eyes r red and swollen.

Instantly Maan look calm and worried for geet and he asked what happen geet? Is it still hurting u?

Geet:- no. then said I'm going from here now.

Maan closed his eyes and said no again.I"m fed up with ur I'm going ,I'm going.

Geet:- isliye I want to leave u and ur place.I feel suffocated to stay here, here many things happen just cause of me .

Maan:- just leave the topic and take rest, today u have to help me from some work . he turns and said don't u think to leave the home,We will meet at breakfast time.

Maan leave the room and enter his work out room and see sameera's scarf .His hidden anger again rise and he pick it and burn it quickly.

He is punching the bag continuously.

Here , in the room , geet is sitting in the bed and thinking about maan and sameera.

Geet:- no,I have to talk to maan now, I have no right to spoil their life, what about Anjali, who needs her mother, maan, no maan sir needs his wife. I'll reunite their family.

She just get up and goes to meet maan .

Maan keep punching the bed unless he feels extremely tired.He sat in the floor when geet came and said I want to tell u something .

Maan closed his eyes in frustration and said u'll not changed or u'll not ever want to listen to me.go ahead.

Geet:-I'm sorry but I'm leaving now.I don't want to spoil ur life , u r unhappy and I cannot see u like this. U'll be happy with sameera…..she loves u, she cares for u, she want to come back ur life again. Pls maan sir but before she can complete maan get up and said if u want to leave go but don't interfare in my life.

Geet shocked to hear it and said I'm sorry .I… just but her voice is choking and just said take care ur self sir and pls bring sameera madam in ur life, she loves but this time maan angrily hold geet's waist and said do u know, past of mine, do u know who is sameera and what she did ? what is her crime.U don't know anything.

Geet slowly whisper I know everything sir.

Maan shocked and said no u don't know , u don't know the actual truth, no one will be know it.

Geet try to freed herself and said pls leave me.

Maan pinned her in the wall and said no,

Geet look at him and plead but maan said I'll not leave u.

Geet:- sir, u r giving urself only pain and all cause of me.

Maan:- yes all cause of u.

Geet closed her eyes and tears falls from her eyes.

Maan just closed his face and kissed those tears.

Geet shuddered and maoned maan, pls .leave me.

Maan :-no. u have to listen my story with out it, u'll not even after that u'll no.,cause I'll not let u leave me ever.

Geet:- y r u giving urself too much pain.pls bring back sameera.

Maan evilly smiles and said cause I love pain and want to give others also pain.

Geet:- maan sir.

Maan:- from when u r calling me sir again .

Geet:-Pls leave me.

Maan close the distance and said no .their body r so close there is no space to air will pass.

Maan look at her lips and said just come with me.

Maan take her with him and both enter their room .

Maan said sit there but geet is still standing there and said I'll.

Maan hold her waist and pull her closely and this time maan just shut her up by kissing him ferociously, angrily and then passionately.

Geet want to protest, her hand curled and tries to punch him but her body reacted differently .after some time, She respond him but suddenly realization stuck her and she pushed and said r u out of mind or sameera is right u r .But maan hold her hand and pull her and said what ? say na.I'm wrong .

Geet look at him and found truth but… her mind say she is coming between maan and sameera.

Maan throw some papers and said see this and ask dr suman and mrs saxena. .

Geet look at him when maan said yes mrs saxena wife of our family lawyer mr saxena. Waise today mr saxena will come and u can ask them , I know u'll not trust me still ….

Maan left her there and geet sat in the bed.


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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