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Posted: 14 years ago

Maaneet back story:-

Geet unwillingly complete the dinner .After it, she look here and there fear for something to stay here with a stranger.

Suddenly a little girl came there and hide behind her and said don't tell her papa.

After some moments , maan came there and asked about a little girl.

Geet feels uncomfortable to see maan in a vest. His well build body very much prominent and his biceps. Geet instantly close her eyes and look at other side.

Maan:- Miss handa where is anjali, I mean, ek choti si lerki, iha aayi hain kya?

Geet nodded yes but said no,

Maan look confused then again asked and this time geet nodded no but said yes.

Here from the behind anjali looks at them then tired to stand there and lay in the bed.

Maan irritated at geet and left the room to find his daughter.

Geet sighed and turn and see some one lay in her bed and she screamed loudly.

Anjali looks frightened and she also screamed and get up and said Dadaaaaaaa.

Here out side the room, maan hear both sounds and ran back there and seen geet and anjali stand in the bed and looking at each other.

Maan :- what happen ? Then to geet, when I'm asking u about anjali, u r avoiding my question and gives me riddle.

Geet:- no sir, I mean sir.

Maan:- just shut up , and anjali, y r u here? Come here beta.

Then maan takes her in his arms and said to geet, get ready tomorrow morning, my driver chor denge tumhe.

Geet just nodded and said thanks.

Geet try to sit when maan came back and said it's very late and go to sleep now.

Geet just nodded and lay there.

Next day morning, she back to her house, every one looking tensed and adi about to inform police when geet enter there.

They asked about her sudden disappearance .Geet told her experience about previous day.

Adi shocked to hear maan's name and his help towards geet.

Adi think every one know maan is like robot, no feeling, no care for any one except for his daughter.

Pinky told him to not think too much about it.

After some days sasha takes leave and take her father with her for further treatment,

Maan arranged everything.

After 2 months, pinky and adi have to go abroad for business but they feared about geet, she will stay here alone but it's not safe.

But geet assured them and they leave.

After that, geet stay there alone but she feels feared very much.

One day maan meet her in a mandir ,anjali also came there.

Anjali :- aunty , how r u?come with us.

Geet politely refused and runs from there. After that night she feels something towards maan. She doesn't understand it and try to avoid him.

But destined planned something else for them.

Part 2 of maaneet story will come soon and there u'll all know the reason behind y geet wills tay with maan in khurana mansion.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


Part 2(A):-

In the Mid night, geet groaning in pain and tossed from here to there.

Here, in anjali's room, maan cannot sleep. He thinks about the incident he seen in the road .he shiver to think if anything happen to geet. He doesn't know but he loves her but never want to share his feeling to any one. Cause of his lack of trust, his heart say geet is different from other but his brain say all women r same.

He feel the way sameera came and destroy his family, if geet, not from the next moment, his heart scolded him.

He remember how geet feel uncomfortable today and feel sad after his scolding, she just leave the cabin and obey his order.

In fact, whenever maan said anything she promptly obeys it. She is very good learner. She is very good student.

Maan laughed how she got scared to see his anger.

But maan admitted that she is intelligent.

Maan still don't know the past of her.

Geet avoid it and one day when maan want to confront her but geet shout at him that day first and last time. After that time geet want to say sorry maan stop her.

After some time maan dost off to sleep.

Next day early morning, maan get up and doing his morning exercise.

After his exercise, he goes towards his room and found geet is sleeping peacefully.

Mrs Berry came and said madam is fine now, but very tired and full night she was tossing in the bed and murmurs something.

Maan shouts at her for not calling him .

After hearing the sound geet stir little and said don't hit me , pls don't hit me.

Maan look at her and goes close to her and take her in his arms.

Geet suddenly hugged him and continuously sobbing and murmurs pls don't hit me.

After some time her sobbing stop and she sleep there.

Maan placed her in the pillow and said to mrs berry. Geet, ke tuhne ke baad, mujhe bolna.

Mrs berry nodded.

Maan takes his cloths and goes to another room for bathing and changing.

After some time, geet wake up and find herself in maan's room.

She feel scared and confuse and don't know anything. She remember last night but then . she look worried and tensed . then she remember maan's word then whole day incident.

She get up and runs from maan's room .

She reached downstairs and try to leave the km when maan said where r u going?

Geet stop there and said to search my new house.

Maan come back and go to ur room.

Geet look at him and said no, I'll not. I'm going from here.

Maan runs and hold her elbow and said just come with me.no more argument , if u then I'll carry u to take u inside.u know me very well.

Geet struggle and said I'll not stay here.

Maan carry her in his arms and said another shout and u'll regret now.

Geet punch him in his chest and maan give him angry glance.

Maan placed her in his bed and stay here . maan call mrs berry for breakfast.

After placing the breakfast, maan said eat it.

Geet nodded in no.

Maan think what happen to her now, before today she used to hear everything but today she deny.

Geet:-I'll go from here.

Maan give geet an angry glare and said drink it now else I'll force .

Geet murmur something drink it.

Anjali:- aunty,How r u? dada told me that u r injured ,

Geet pull her and give her a hug and said yes darling but now I'm fine.

Maan looks and said lier but geet heard it.

Geet eat break fast and then drink the juice.

Geet asked Anjali about her breakfast.

She nodded in yes and said dada feed me and slowly in her ear. He try to make paratha but oh jal gaya.

Both smiles at each other.

Maan talking with some one.

Geet heard maan cancel his all meetings.

Geet get up and said Anjali beta, pls go to ur room,I'll be there in 10mins.

Anjali said ok and runs from there.

Maan look at geet and try to leave when geet said I will leave this place, if u will not attain all meetings.

Maan:- geet, look,

Geet:-pls, don't bother about me.I'll not stay here for a moments.

Maan :- y r u behaving like this. What happen geet?

Geet turns and said I'm going to outhouse.

Maan look furious and said no, u r not going, just stay here. I'm going to attain meetings.

Maan just leave the place and still wondering what happen to geet suddenly.

Geet just sat in the bed and close her eyes then slowly call mrs berry to call Anjali here.

Geet said sir , some one call u and will come here at 4.30 p.m

Maan:- who is that person?

Maan shocked to see that person and shouts at her.

Maan received court notice for anjali's custody.

Geet slipped but some one hold her right in time.

Maan massaged geet's leg and sameera saw it.

Sameera feel jealous.She wants maan back for her desire, lust.

maan slapped sameera and warned her for something.

Maan:-I feel disgusted ,I never seen a women like u.

MAan angrily hold geet's waist and said do u know, past of mine, do u know who is sameera and what she did ? what is her crime.U don't know anything.

Geet slowly whisper I know everything sir.

Maan shocked and said no u don't know , u don't know the actual truth, no one will be know it.

Geet:- y r u giving urself too much pain.

Maan evily smiles and said cause I love pain and want to give others also pain.

Sameera came and scold geet for stay in the khurana mansion.

Geet want to leave the mansion.

Maaneet meet with gynecologist Dr. Suman.


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi all
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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
updated next part. pls read it and comment it.
ur comments inspired me lots.
love
rakhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it hate sameera for doing all that n know she has come to take anjali how mean of her
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.........................does geet really know all about sameera and anjali?
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. but does geet knw abt sameera n anjali??? continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
I'll ans all ur quesion soon. lovely comments loved it.
keep commenting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesoem part dear.. os Anjali is not Maan's daughter... hell of sameera... lovely Geet and anjali combo..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome..
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loved it.
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