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Posted: 14 years ago
***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 26

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Darji- is everything alright Geet?
Geet- yea Darji.... She jumps....

Next day...
Shila was still laughing. She couldn't control at all. The amusement was to much.
Maan picks geet up and makes there way to surfing. He brought her different type swimming costume that is not bikini type. Shila laughed further.

Whole week went like this. Geet getting more wild with maan while maan trying to keep distance. He looses control with her every touch...
Maan & Geet laid under one of the palm tree.... Maan looking at her while geet on top of him. Playing with his hair.... He closed his eyes. Relaxing.... Geet gently strokes his cheek and kisses them. Maan smirks...
Maan- jaan don't do that....
Geet kisses his other cheek- more?
Maan modes negatively- no.....
Geet laughs...
Geet- you will be busy again after we are back. She makes a baby face. You hardly have enough time for me.
Maan- once this exam finishes I will.
Geet- I will be 15 2moro. What have you brought me?
Maan- umm....
Geet- no umm... You better make it special.
Maan- I will. Promise.
Geet- ha... That's what you always say!
Maan- which year you didn't get what you wanted? Maan makes a false angry face.
Geet- every year!
Maan- it's your fault. If you ask something stupid!
Geet- I never asked anything stupid.... Geet was about to get angry. And gets up. Maan brings her back in to his embrace... Both laid on there side holding one another..... Geets legs un willingly went between maans... Her bare leg against his was already making him go hard. Maan snaps- don't!
Geet makes a baby face...
Maan- one good thing you getting older... He smirks with his closed eyes and both takes a small nap with the sea...

Another week passed by. It was time to go back. Maans birthday was few weeks way.... Geet is 15 while maan will be turning 20. He felt old!
Only thing maan was worried now was Brij. He was hoping he have salted everything out.

On there way back Geet took seat next to maan... As usual both flirting... She was trying her best to convince him to kiss her while he would just refuse... He couldn't trust him self. He knew well that if they start doing it now... Neither will be able to stop...
Rano walks by... Bit suspicious with there behavior now days. She knew something was cooking but not sure exactly what.

Shila on the other side kept teasing Geet. Maan completely unaware or about all the prank she plaid on them on the holiday. Geet gave her a glare to shutup. She passed her a paper with two bug circle on it. She couldn't stop laughing when maan was trying to figure out what is it... He presumed that's what she was about to get in exam & told Geet off. Shila laughed further. Geet made a baby face. Took the paper and ripped it off.
Geet- you always look for a reason to shout at me!... She gets angry. How could she possibly say that those two circle was indicating towards her curve. Egh! So embarrassing.
Maan- if you fail in your exam like that then of course I will.
Geet- it's not my fault that I don't understand anything!
Maan- yes even after all those 5 teachers!
Geet- I don't understand them.
Maan- Geet! Don't give me stupid excuse.
Geet was cursing shila now. Because of her they are arguing. Ugh... Hate her.
Geet- whatever! I am sleeping. She took maans arm popped it round her and fell sleep on his strong arm. Maan rolled his eyes.

It was midnight when everyone arrived. All the children were so tirade...
Whole khurana family was picked up by 2 limo while Handa just one car. Geet laughed looking at there family size. She wondered how do they keep count of everyone. Maan gives Geet quick peck while everyone was busy & they disappears...

Maan went straight to outhouse. There was no Sammera. The butler was confused now. He wondered who's child exactly it was. Because Brij came & took Sammera way.
Maan called Brij but he wasn't answering. He decided to salt everything out later and head towards his room...

Few days have passed. Brij was no where to be seen or sam... Maan wondered what happen. He was back to collage. Missing his holiday very much. More like Geet. He haven't spoken to her since they came back. He hardly get enough time to eat. Hopefully Geet is understanding about that he thought....
Merra slowly came from behind... Nearly made maan jump.
Merra- I am sorry maan. I am sorry. She was in tears. I really didn't!
Maan looks at her- it's ok. Please stay way from me.
Merra- I am sorry.... She walked round the table and stood opposite of him. Started her work...
Maan- where is sam?
Merra- I don't know. I haven't seen her whole of this week!
Maan- aren't you her best friend?
Merra- yes... But couldn't get through her phone or anything!
Maan looked a bit tensed. Dr did also say her abortion was to complicated.!!! He looked a bit tensed.
As the day ended maan made his way home. He have tried to get through Brij but he got caught up with work again. Everyone in khurana haveli was surrounded by works. Children with there HW ... Elder with work while him uni + work! He hated his life... Just wanted to go on holiday... Somewhere quit with Geet again + that Brij problem...

It was 2am when maan received a call from Brij.... He was worried sick. He wasn't sure what to do....
Brij- maan! I need your help! Please come to my farm house. Hurry!
Maan jumps up instantly. Brij sounded really tensed on the phone. When maan arrives everything was shattered. Brij was banging the kitchen door for sam to open!
Brij- please sam! Please open the door!
Maan- what happen? He looked at him in confusion.... But soon as sam heard maans voice she ran out. Holding him tight... Sobbing!
Sam- he killed my baby! He killed my baby! I could never be a mother! I could never be a mother!
Maan froze. She is only 20.
Sam-He killed my baby. He killed .... Before she could utter another words sam faints.
Brij looks at him in pain. He him self wasn't sure what was happening.
Maan picks sam up & takes her to the bedroom & then shouts!
Maan- DR have told you the abortion is to risky for her! Then why did you take her? He shouts in anger.
Brij was quit... He was num.
Maan- this is ridicules. This have gone out of my lead I have to tell mom & dad. Maan was shaking.... He wasn't sure why... But for a girl to be not a mother again... & that to for some ... In frustration he breaks the flower pot!
Brij- don't! Please! Please don't!
Maan- have you realized what will happen to her? Have you realized what you have done to her? For god sake Brij! 5 abortion! 5!
Brij looks at him in shock....
Maan- I have to now....

Maan walks out. He couldn't think.... He drove madly at Handa house! It was quit. Guards were shocked. He wasn't sure why but he walks in to geets room. He was scared & petrified. Geet jumps up... Rubbing her eyes... Seeing maan after a week & that to at this time. She Checks her clock.... She was confused.... But maan came to her bed and hugged her tight. He just needed someone to comfort him. Love him. Take all this nonsense way. Geet was confused with his sudden weird behavior. She holds him tight & takes him under the spread... Geet wasn't sure what to say. He looked tensed and tirade. Maan just laid on top of her and rested his head on her chest.... Geet gently strokes his hair.... It soothed maan allot.... It just took all his tensed way. Feeling relaxing. She was comforting him. Taking him out of his misery. Both didn't utter a word... Maan didn't.... He couldn't tell her anything... She was too young... When she eventually decided to ask... He simply answered- just hold me tight.! Just hold me tight!


next- the kiss or More😲




PLease comment kardo...



Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeyyy...1st one....
shila still teasing geet...😆 she is so naughty...😆
loved her shararat... O O...🤣...ong...geet getting angry.🤣..n maan getting confused n saying she will get this only in her exams🤣
that was hilarious...bechari geet...🤣

hate that brij...😡 ..poor sam......he destroyed her life...she can never be a mother again....😒...
n to top it all...brij calling maan for help...as if trying to get him in trouble as well...
hope maan tells his family soon...
loved how maan went to geet...coz only she can calm him down...😳
but feel sorry for him as he is not able to tell her about anything...😔

as far as the question is concerned...i think a KISS will do for now...
she is too young to understand it...n moreover maan would not cross his boundary...he is way better than that...
otherwise you know whats best...

by the way you did not tell what maan gifted her for her birthday...that special thing???...

Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG....brij brat...ewwww.....y is maan not telling al this to the family...hope no misunderstanding happen coz of tht...n precap...😲..!!continue soon...ne more updates???

Rohini

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part dear. Plz add me in ur buddy list
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Posted: 14 years ago
stupid brij hate him
want to kill him now
maan not even able to share it with geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
stupid brij:@
i hope his problem does not create any more problems for maan and geet
con't soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved da update
It was amazing
Aww I feel sad for sam
Do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update!!!!
Maaneet scenes were too good......loved it.
Poor sam.....,wish she kill Birj with her bare hands.
Hope tat prat don't creat any probs for Maaneet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow the first half was a romantic one, and the second was a tensed all kinds of spices in this one update, thank u so much, hope all the elders get to know about brij's deeds and save poor sam.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update keyama.....brij😡😡😡😡😡 what is maan waiting to confess abt brij to his family??

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