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Posted: 14 years ago

ADD ME TO YOUR PM LIST PLEASE! this FF is so good! Dev is such an a**hole omg maan should just kill him there and then looool ..I feel sorry for Naina =/ ..Contine soon 😃xx

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome FF
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con't soon!
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Part 29: Enjoy and Comment!

Armaan and Shilpa entered the ballroom to find this whole scene going on. They were shocked to see Dev there... why would he come?. Armaan walked up towards Maan and Sameer... " Dude? kya hua?.. what's going on?". " Armaaaaaan!! hellloooo.. how are you doingg dude?... surprise surprise.. THE Dev Singh Khurana is here?" said Dev in his drunk state. "Shilpa kaisi hai yaar? suna hai kay tu nay us item se shaadi ki hai" said Dev with a laugh. Armaan looked at Dev angrily, " Don't even DARE to take her name Dev... I swear to God I won't spare you". Shilpa rushed towards Geet, Meera and Naina. " Geet.. kya ho raha hai yahaan par?... aur Naina.. TUM? tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho"said Shilpa with a frown. "My oh MY.. the three strong.. college dudes... you just refreshed my memory guys.. " said Dev as he chuckled to himself. Daadi Maa was standing there looking so upset... and all the girls were comforting her. " Maan.. I always knew that you would get Geet.. she was afterall the hottest thing in college.. wasn't she?"said Dev. Maan stepped in front of all the other guys and into Dev's face...he looked at him with his full maan singh khurana angry eyes... his blood was boiling... every muscle in his hand was itching to skin him alive.

Suddenly, from behind Geet, Aryaan rushed towards Maan and grabbed onto him. He looked up at his father who was staring with anger at the strange man. He tugged on Maans sherwani and Maan looked down at his son, softening his face. " Papa..aap theek ho naa?" said the innocent Aryaan. Maan half smiled at his son and said, " hes no one.. no one beta.. you don't need to worry about it". Dev looked down at Aryaan who was looking at him with questioning eyes. Dev softened his expression and said, " Ari... Main tumhara chachu hoon.. actually.. who am I kidding.. im your dad". " Aap mere papa nahin ho sakte... yeh mere papa hai" said Aryaan. Aryaan hid behind Maan's legs and peeked through a little bit. " Geeet yaar.. tumne bataya nahin?.. daadi maa?". Daadi maa looked at Dev with disgust, " Dev.. mujhe sab pata hai.. aur Aryaan Maan aur Geet ka beta hai.. and main jaanti hoon kay aapne Geet kay saath kya kiya tha... mujhe ghin aarahi hai kay aap hamaray potay hai". Dev looked at his daadi maa, "That's what I expected... old buddhi will never listen...".
"DEV... DON'T YOU DARE...SAY ANYTHING TO DAADI MAA"said Maan as he grabbed Dev's throat. Armaan and Sameer held Maan back from doing something that will cost the family the eldest son. Geet rushed towards Aryaan and scooped him up into her arms and she stood in front of Maan. " Aryaan.. mera aur Maan ka beta hai... aur tumhari itni himmat kay tum mere ghar aakar mere parivaar ko beizzat karo?" said Geet coldly. " Aray.. tum jaisay insaan ko jail mein sarna chahiye.. and you've tested my patience... I kept it only for Maan and Aryaan.. I won't let my bad past ever come over them". She walked back and Meera scooped Aryaan into her arms. Geet came back and stepped in front of Maan and raised her one arm to divide Dev and the rest of the family. " Don't you dare come near my family Dev... I swear to God I'll ruin your life even more than I did last time.." said Geet with fiercely angry eyes. Maan stood beside Geet and took an extra step in front of her. " Dev.. tumne suna nahin? JAO YAHAAN SE WARNA I'LL THROW YOU OUT OF THIS HAVELI MYSELF" roared Maan. Aryaan covered his ears and put his head on Meera's neck out of fear. Meera protected Aryaan and inched his head closer toward her shoulder.

" Mahaan... Mahaan... Mahaan parivaar.. yaar tum logon ko starplus kay dramay main hona chahiye... you guys would win the best rhona dhona parivaar" sneered Dev. Geet widened her eyes in anger and said, " PARTY KHATAM HO GAYI HAI.. AAP SAB LOG JAA SAKTE HAI". The guests looked at eachother in confusion and they left out the door. As soon as the room was empty.. it left only the family and Dev. " Dev... yeh tumhari aur meri larayee hai.. and don't blame anyone else.." said Geet in anger. "You all really want to know why Im here?? why I hate Geet and Maan and all the rest of you?"said Dev out of frustration. Everyone looked at eachother.. Maan and Geet, Meera Sameer knew where this was going... And Dev told what and how he got to where he was... and how matters got worse.

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Geet, Maan, Meera, Sameer, Armaan and Shilpa and I all went to the same University. Sameer and Meera were in 1st year, while the rest of us were in our 3rd year. Geet was doing her Bachelors in Architecture and Maan was as well. I was doing my Bachelors in Business... while Meera and Sameer were doing the same, except in different years and Armaan &Shilpa were doing their bachelors of science.. soon to apply to med school. . Geet and Maan never knew of eachother... they were silently competing with eachother with. marks... Although they never knew eachother... Geet and I were very good friends from the start... and I was always jealous of Maan..

I loved Geet from the beginning of university.. Geet was the hard to get type.. every guy admired her for that attitude... they loved her simplicity, attitude and intelligence.. and even I did too. Maan on the other hand was the same with all the girls.. they went crazy over him.,.. he paid no heed to them.. I wish I could'v ebeen like that.. Geet, Meera and Shilpa were the best of friends.. the smart.. and beautiful bunch. Whereas Maan, Sameer and Armaan were the cool dudes of our uni and girls went crazyyy over them. I was never included.. ever... I was just the odd geek of a brother.. I had no friends.. nothing... I didn't have the best marks, looks like Maan did. It was always strange of how Maan Geet didn't meet for all their university years.. even being so near to eachother..

Anyway... I finally got the courage to tell Geet that I love her and want to introduce her to daadi maa and I did my best to look good... I walked upto her while she was in the library, studying for her final exams. She said hello and talked to me for a bit.. I couldn't look into her eyes.. but finally I did and I told her.. that .. I love her. Geet frowned at me and said, " Dev? are you okay.. tumhe kuch hua to nahi?" I replied that I was fine and I was very serious. She walked away laughing at me.. at my comment.. at my seriousness.. she thought it was a joke. I was angry.. " how could my friend do that to me?".

As days went on.. I loved her so obsessively that I grew lustful.. so sex crazy that I would go to desperate measures to calm myself down.. I hated seeing her around any guys.. talking to them.. even just taking her lecture notes from them... But I didn't budge... so I sent her a love letter.. again... saying that I would commit suicide if she didn't agree to be my gf.

Once I walked out of my classes and into the front of the uni to go to my car and drive home... I saw everyone just laughing at me as soon as I walked past them... And there was.. Shilpa and Meera standing there snickering along with Geet at the love letter I sent her. . Everyone was whispering and talking jsut looking at me as if I was the most funniest clown ever... I looked at them with anger and they stood there just smiling at me. I looked at them and looked down and rushed towards my car.. I drove away.. not caring.. or trying not to care... I was about to commit suicide.. but I decided to get revenge back... in the near future... I knew I would get Geet back so badly for hurting me.. all those years..

So after graduation.. and about 3 years after that... I had my own successful hotel business.. Armaan Shilpa were both doctors.. Meera and Sameer both had successful businesses as well.. and finally Geet had her all famous Handa constructions and lone behold Khurana constructions belonged to Maan... I saw Geet in an interview with Fox news.. and I saw Maan in an interview with CNN..they were both successful architects.. constructing all over India.. Dubai.. etc.. I saw my flame of revenge coming back for Geet.. and of how she hurt me..

So I had gone to the club last night.. got myself drunk as hell and I went to Geet's house.. I had earlier gotten her address of her house.. and I had shot all the guards and Geet recognized me.. she pleaded.. she fought.. for gods sake that woman was strong.. but I knew that I was alwasy stronger.. I dragged her into the car and took her to the cottage and well... raped her... I felt good.. my revenge was over.. I was done.. I ruined her..

She came back to me the next morning and handed me a file which said that Khurana chain of hotels was auctioned.. because I was in billions of dollars of debt.. and the bank took my house.. my properties and hotels.. and left me on the street. You know which b***** took all of this? your lovely Geet Handa.. she proved herself... she took her revenge back.. And I was left alone.. again.. with revenge flaming in my heart..
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Everyone stood there in complete silence and " Okay well.. khatam kahani kids.. I'll be back soon" laughed Dev. He turned around and head out of the room and they heard his car zoom away into the distance. "Meera, Sameer.. tum dono Daadi maa aur Aryaan ko upar lekar jao.. abhi aur isi waqt"ordered Maan in his stern voice. They obeyed and left upstairs.. leaving Armaan Shilpa and Geet Maan just shell shocked of what just happened.. their history ran through their eyes like a movie..

I hope you liked it!😊
Edited by Desigirl144 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yess,, im first, the part was amazing, loved the flashback, made the story understandable, please do continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
urghhh!!!...i hate dev!...he's sooo disgusting!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am shocked that y did they 1st of all let dev go i mean maan cud hv atleast punched him...i hope things get sorted soon
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Originally posted by: preethia

i am shocked that y did they 1st of all let dev go i mean maan cud hv atleast punched him...i hope things get sorted soon



Maan did punch Dev... he just got back up into his face again... its Dev... he doesn't give upp. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 29
nice part..........Dev is a psycho....................but how did Maan and Geet meet and fall in love????????????? cont soon.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
I m a silent reader but I love your FF & I want bubbly geet back.
I hate DEV. he should die.
sugg; end this dev track ASAP! we need a party in khurana mansion/intense scenes between maaneet & some good news from geet's side again ;) you cud throw in new characters like vicky? and maybe Geet's family? I want to see love-track between vicky&rajj(geet's sis) ;D that would be funn.
we need happy times bacckk :D some scenes with aryaan too (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow so he was jealous Dev atleast they told him about Ari his not his son wonderful update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm

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