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Posted: 14 years ago


Waiting For UR Comment :)

Originally posted by: sajniksgian

Hey very nice part..update soon...





Originally posted by: arshbest

heyya

dii verry nice partt hope they fall for each other soon

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshi



Originally posted by: illa8

nice part...continue soon =)



Originally posted by: ayushijha

awesome intro liked it



Originally posted by: janu1610

hi N ,H.... loved this part too..I know i always do coz You r amazing writer ...loved every scene u plotted .
it shows us a reality .Man is so weak nd can loose his/her cool under the effect of crucial circumstances...this was exactly done by Ridhima....
But i must say Armaan saved her shows ,he is not bad at heart ,but a tough nut to crack. And now when she has already break it than he is going to be her shield nd will protect her from every hardship n obstacle in her life.


thanks for pm
love
ritu




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpI007

Hey diii😊........... awesome part di👏👏⭐️...........just loved it.............hwwwwwww ridz tried to commit sucide😔............i hope armaan will help her to come of stress n where she actually live life for her not anyone😊............. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😊



Originally posted by: jiyaa

nice ff

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Originally posted by: ayushijha

you know one thing that this story os awesome dear it was great to read it



Originally posted by: ar.arsh

lovely part......................................................😛

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Originally posted by: -Prithi-

nice part
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Originally posted by: sjain

I luved this part...she trued to commit suicide ..aww thats sad..hope she cumes out of this depression soon

update ssoonnn

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Originally posted by: vidu87

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Originally posted by: anushkajain

nice part ⭐️
loved it 😃
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Originally posted by: jannat4ever

superb update dear.......................


Originally posted by: princess_rashmi

gr8888888 part

luved it

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Originally posted by: Amona

gr8 prt..

lobed it...
tnx 4 da pm n continue soon
AMOON



Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiiiii awesome update

loved it
poor ridzy
glad she is ok
love da gang
they r sooooo sweet
armaan is falling 4 ridzy
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm





Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyyy dear,
nice part
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Originally posted by: PrincessBushi

wow amazing update . w8ing for da next update




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshilpa

hey love the part plzzzzzzz pm me u r added in my pm list too plz pm me





Originally posted by: Zeisha143_MBG

Thanx for the nice update,



Originally posted by: arshluver_15

hima and nidha

that was great part........i loved it........i am glad that at less now armaan knows what wrong he had done with ridhima.................and its great that he is falling in love with her i hope she also fall in love with him...................

thanks nidha for the pm
love
nruti



Originally posted by: salinashah

hey awsome part anjie , nidha, and ritu .u all have done a really very good job in this fic i must admitt it.....well part was awsome ...... i hope every thing in AR life got set and they unite in love. thnx4 d pm

luv u
salina



Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

amazing part! thanks for the pm! nice to know ammy is falling for her! (on my bday too!)


Belated Happy Bday Dear :)

Originally posted by: saniashzadi

hey dear

really lovely part...feels bad fr ridz but nw atleast armaan understands that she is not that type of girl...

update nxt part soon(thanks fr the pm)

love

sania





Originally posted by: piyushi

nice updt... do continue...



Originally posted by: amruta04

hey hima it was wonderful update loved it waiting for the next update do continue soon thanks for the pm nidha di.





Originally posted by: ADITI3310_AR

hi.......nidha di
was busy in tests 😒 so couldn't comment.......sorry 😛
the part was really great!!!!!!!! luved it......👏
hope riddhima will stop avoiding him.....update soon.....😃
bye, take care😊





Originally posted by: sammy4u

awesaome intro yaar loved it



Originally posted by: RUBA-SIDDIQUI

hey dear
awesome part
liked it
thnx 4 the pm



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add me 2 d pm list pls



Originally posted by: AMMY12

Nice part.
but u didnt pm me.
chalo koi baat nai.
update soon.
t.c


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P:S:@ammy12 Sorry ... Will defintely Try Not To Happen It Again !

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Posted: 14 years ago


Originally posted by: Caramel_21

Hello to all the three lovely ladies...
I just saw that the story is a combined effort of all three of you..😳..
enjoyed the part though it was sad but you can't make her look happy ..right? Still Don't forget about the note you wrote in the end. ;P..
the story is shaping well..liking it so far.. :D
thanks for the Pm and continue soon..

loads of love..
Mel..



Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

hey..
wasnt able to comment on the first 2 parts
very busy ryt now
but as soon as i get time, i'll read it.
and thnx for the pmz
pls dont stop sending them out to me
and thnx for sharing such nice ff dear nidha



Originally posted by: taman07

awesome part yara and thanks for the pm yaar



Thnks A Million Ton For All The Comment Guys ... The Part Will Be Updated Soon :)

@Mel ... I Know Yaar .. It May Be Difficult To U To Read Sad Parts 😆😆 .. But Dnt Worry ... There Will Be Loads Of Happiness After Some Moments :)

@khushi ... Its Absoultely Ohkies :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 4

A Month later '

Riddhima REALLY changed a lot.A lot for her not just because for anyone else.She is really happy in her life.She is opening with the people around her.She adopted new hobbies.One of which is Painting.Her many feelings reflects in her work.Even a change can be seen in Armaan.He and Atul became a much more good friends ,after that incident.After knowing all reg.Riddhima from Atul,Armaan also started to have feelings for her.Even today Atul or anyone dnt know what happened between Riddhima and Armaan n neither either Riddhima or Armaan talked reg. this.Atul is seeing a lot more change in Armaan.He saw him stealing glances of her.He even stopped being with that stupid girls.Though Armaan encountered Riddhima a few times when he was in Atul house,never had any serious convo.After that incident Riddhima almost avoided him.How much he tried to deny his feelings for her,for the first time Armaan Malik really going to make this feeling work.He want to be there for her ,as her love,as a support, in her life.For that he is going to wait how much time it take.


He was ready to wait ,to wait for her .Though he knows very well this'd not happen so soon.
First he has to make her believe in her self than on him.He wanna take away all her pain nd let feel her blissful.But for that time was needed.Whenever he looks at her he always found a fake smile on her face,a smile that never reached up to her eyes,some thing was missing in those green orbs,a sadness was covering her soul,he could see her soul through her eyes .Though she has friends,who take care of her nd love her dearly but some thing has changed or may be she has changed after the dismissal of her mom.A hollowness was crept in her.And she needed someone who'd love her with all his heart n soul.He promised himself to get that grin back .He always tried to be friendly with her but she always maintained a distance from him.As she wanna forget that incident or to erase the memory of that bitter past.
Ridhima was to scared to recall that memory.She was shivering again.That dream was haunting her again nd she screamed loud....Muskaan got up at once nd asked her
kya hua Ridhima tum itna darri hui kyun ho?
Rid:vo mainne dekha mom phir se mere ko chhod ke ja rahi hai.....
Mus:Ridhima please aise mat karoo apne saath..! Tum agar khud ko nahi sambhalogi to kaise is duniya ka samna karogi?Abhi to tum ko padna hai..Khud apne pairon pe khade hona hai.
i think hum thode din ke liye yahan se ,is mahaul se bahar chalte hain.shayad u feel better..main kal hi Atul se baat karti hoon..
and she kept caressing her hairs with love n affection.
In the morning she told Atul about her nightmares nd convinced him to go away from town.
Atul: let me talk to Anjie first..!!
Mus: ok par hum jayenge kahan?
Atul: yaar hum kyun na Armaan ke farm house chale
Mus: Ridhima nahi manegi,vo ab bhi Armaan se poori tarhan se khuli nahi!!!
Atul: yaar us ko batayega kaun?Hum bas aise hi kissi ka bhi naam le lenge.
Mus: theek hai.
Atul : main Anjie ko bolta hoon is weekend hum sab chalte hain.....
Mus: ok done.Be ready for fun.
She packed her luggage n settled in car.
Rid:Bhaiya hum kahan ja rahe hain ?
Anji: Ridhima tu bas enjoy kar baki sab hum pe chhod de...
Rid:ok Anjie thanks for your love...
They all reached there in few hours This was beautiful house with lots of greenery surrounded by mountains.



All settled there luggage in their rooms .Suddenly a figure appeared in the room of Muski...
Muski who was busy to open her luggage thought it is Ridhima...Ridhima yaar iske lock ko kya hua hai dekh na khul hi nahi raha.
that boy came behind her nd tried to open that lock.
Mus: ridhima tere haathon ko kya hua?
And she turned nd screamed her lung out ....
Muski: who the hell r u ?
Boy : ye mera ghar hai ,tum kaun ho aur yahan kya kar rahi ho?
Mus: oyye chup kar ye bahana mat bana mere ko pata hai ye tera ghar nahi hai ,tu bewkoof kissi aur ko banana.chal phoot le yahan se
tu is ghar ko logon ko rehne ke liye deta hai aur paise kamata hai .Ab lagta hai is baare mein Armaan se baat karni padegi .
In between Atul came there running .
Atul: kya hua Muskaan ?
oyye Rahul tu yahan ?
Muski:U know him?Ye kaankhjura yahan mere kamre mein hai aur tum ne is ko kuch kaha be nahi ?
Atul:Shut up muski!!Ye Rahul hai Armaan ka bhai.....
And her jaws dropped to touch the ground....
Ridhima who was standing at threshold was astonished.
Rid: bhaiya aap ne pehle kyun nahi bataya ye ghar Armaan ka hai?
Atul: Ridhima is se kya faraq padta hai ..Hum yahan sab ikatthe ghoomne aaye hai .hum enjoy karnge aur chale jayyenge .
Rid: par bhaiya main us se apne liye koi b favour nahi chahti.
Atul: Ridhima vo bura insaan nahi hai vo apne doston ke liye kuch be kar sakta hai...
Rahul:You are right..Bro is too protective about his near ones..The man u know as Casanova is very tender nd caring from inside....
Rid: plz main yahan se waapis jana chahti hoon....
Anj: Don't be spoil sport Ridhima .more over Armaan to yahan hai be nahi...why u r trying to avoid him?He is very nice to you..
Ridhima kept mum,but inside she was disturbed ...
Mean while Armaan was restless ,wanna join them.wanna see Ridhima...And he reached infront of her apartment...A letter was lying there on the floor for Ridhima.
Urgent was written on it.
He thought twice before open it .He torn it found this was about her fees...He was surprised to know if she'd not able to pay all liability in time ,then she might thrown out of college.
Next morning he approached higher authorities.He made sure they wont disclose his identity to her ..
Again a problem was there they wanna some document signed by her .Finally he decide to visit there and hand over this form to her directly...
Armaan canceled his all appointments for next two days nd reached there .All were laughing Muskaan was behind Rahul ,chasing him nd throwing what ever she 'd catch while running .And Rahul was pleading to Atul to stop her.Rant of them was floating in air.
His eyes settled on Ridhima .She was wearing a chudidar suit nd was looking adorable. Her cheeks were pink nd eyes were moist due to laughing .She was clutching her stomach.At once she felt someone's intense gaze on her .She looked at him nd his blue ocean met with her green ones .She saw a pool of emotions in them.And wanted to drown in them.There was some thing hidden in that but she couldn't decipher what?
Her trance was broken ,when Muski threw another vase on Rahul nd he ducked nd vase was on the floor with a sound of thud.
Atul: Hi Armaan!!Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Arm:Yaar mere ko Rahul se kaam tha to soch tum sab se be mil loounga aur Ridhima ko ye form be de doonga.
Atul:Ridhu ka form tere ko kaise milla?
In his mind' Armaan jaldi kuch soch'
Arm: vo main Rahul ke princi se milla tha to he gave me this to pass to Ridhima.
Ridhima was not so convinced but she kept silent nd went from there...
Atul : jab tu yahan aa hi gaya hai to kyun na hum sab ke saath reh le .tere ko to is jaghan ki achhi jaankari be hogi isi bahane hum ko ghumma be dena .what say?
Arm: ok buddy any thing for my friends.
And Rahul was still in shock as he had never seen a girl like Muskaan .She was crazy nd he was thinking about their banter.A smile was dancing on his lips.
All decided to visit near restaurant for their dinner....


A soft music was lingering in the air.They moved towards their reserved table nd settled on that Atul asked Anjie for dance nd Rahul approached Muski .Armaan was sitting alone with Riddhima There was awkwardness crept in between them.And to his luck some media persons reached there nd started taking pics of him with her...one of them asked to Armaan : Is she new flavour the month???For how long is she going to stay??You had fun with her as you have with your other girlfriends...????

Armaan nd Riddhima were shocked to hear this crap...Riddhima bursted out on the reporter...
Rid: Stop it .....STOP IT AT ONCE...
And she ran out of the restaurant crying.....

To Be Continued....


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Story N Concept :Ritu { Janu1610} & Hima (k_anjali12)

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Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww..thats interesting update..njoyed it..

update longer part this one was short

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part 😃
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice and engaging story line
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Posted: 14 years ago
Even I can handle Sad parts, it's just that not always..par sometimes I can.. which may be once in a blue moon..😆...phew..this was for your reply.. ;P
now to this update..
hello to all the three..
about the part..it's wasn't sad, so I am happy... ;D
Riddhima is finally moving on and Armaan, is falling for her..that's great..
but him paying her fees, may create some problems later..
Muskaan and Rahul are as usual into fighting but enjoyed it very much..
and Another problem in the end..hmmm....😆...waiting for the next update..

thanks for the Pm..

loads of love..
Mel..

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
liked it
thanx for the pm

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