***paradox*** THREAD 1 - Page 8

Originally posted by: smj1977

HI

good morning,

I think I like concept 1

hey this not final

sorry to say but read my other post/comment

Concept 3 sounds very interesting...Wonder wat maan will do in finding out geet's truth....u are an excellent writer...

All 3 are great, Don't know which one to choose. But Seriously can you start all 3.

As long as geet is not fat throughout the story, my first choice wud b the first concept. Nothing wrong with being fat but I don't want geet to be any less than maan in any sense. Other than that I think the story may have alot of potential. I luv childhood crushes and coming of age stories. How u r surrounded with so much and yet ur heart is consumed with only one trail of thought. My second choice would be third concept. Geet will learn to trust maan and the ppl at large. Maan wud be a sweet addition to geets family. I can c geet's siblings approving of maan way before geet actually admits, she is in luv. I think the third concept also holds water. ...... I'd u ask me , work on the first concept now then when u have time hen work on the 3 rd concept as well. Take care and best of luck.

loving concept 3 and 1 so them 2 plzzzzzzzzzzzz!

wow honestly love the 3rd one super duper see soon

Would love it if u wrote concept 1

hey keyams read all three,but u are so good at it cant really decide which one's the best why dont u write on each one 😉 JK anyways ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i wud go wid the first one if u ask me i alwaz love the teeneage love concept ov urs like in "innocent love" provided wataever u write on it has to have real hot stuff hun😉😆😳 so babes go ahead waiting eagerly for the next one ferom ur side👏👏👏👏