[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134)

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ashwini_k

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

wow third thread, nice updates.

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bluerose1889

@bluerose1889

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

2 updates?? Awesome! Loved both parts.

It was so cute the way both brothers were hiding behind the pillars, spying on Gauri & Senna.

So Shiv did notice all those changes Gauri's gone through recently. Poor guy! He's getting tortured every night. He loves her so much that he restrains himself thinking that's what she wants too. I guess Gauri has to make the first move now.
Apparently, Shiv thinks she's softened towards him because of the changes he's made. I hope Gauri tells him soon that she likes him just the way he is.

Rathan - Senna part was also really good. I like Senna, she's sweet.
I think both the brothers have a thing for "against the wall".

You know, I've never like Sari that much before I started reading your FFs. But now I think I should try it out too.

Few questions..
Where is Senna actually from? And what about her family, are they coming for the wedding?
Are we going to get a part on Sangeet too?

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Nirjhor105

@Nirjhor105

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

loved it.....i comment very less but that doesn't mean i don't appreciate your brilliant hard work, i just don't find the right words to justify my feelings after reading each part
congrats on the third thread

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Congratzz on the new thread :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

what a smashing way to start up the new thread ...great going Devi ...

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Cytherea

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

heyy..any chance of an update today??

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Sigma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

congrats on the new thread, Devi 👏

Ch83

This judai is making everything go all filmy on us, all Shiv can see is bollywood related things 😆 well we have those famous bollywood style saris why not the sets, esp when you can hide behind them and get up to some mischief 😉 with the added thrill of getting caught by those aunties 😉😆

I knew the changes wouldn't have gone unnoticed by Shiv, Gauri after that big rep you gave him, did you serious think that would escape his notice esp when he is mad about you. I love how he calls the bedroom, the tortue chamber 😆 and i love how she can sense him there before she turned out 😳

The next scene that played out Devi was fab ⭐️ 👏 loved it all, it was perfect even with the interuption 😆 It gives Shiv something to ponder over now 😛 altho i think it might have confused him more even more instead of solving

Gauri is talking about wanting the same Shiv I was but she gets to have him, how unfair 😡😆

ps Devi that guy from the fighting scene has a hot bod 😳 but i'll let you have him 😆

Ch84

Another couple taking advantage of the decors 😆

Rathan seems to love the sari as much as the readers do 😉😆

Luckily they were caught by Gauri, imagine an auntji turned up 🤣

Can't wait to hear more from this couple esp as Rathan seems like another Shiv 😳😆

@ Tammie I used to watch Robin hood all the time when it was on, me and my friend had a crush on Guy of Gisbourne even tho he was the villian 😳😆

Your son's gf is beautiful and she sounds like a lovely person too. You sound like such a cool mum you let your son be in a band ⭐️

@ Shradhav I also agree Gauri has a wicked sense of humour, she is very witty and sarcastic, I love to be sarcastic myself altho drives my parents up on the wall as they don't get it 😆

I always want to know whether these men exist and if you find one send him to me 😳

ps keep your tunes coming 😃

Edited by Sigma - 14 years ago