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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

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wow meeriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😃
monaya ff yupieeeeeeeeeeeeee🥳🥳
first of all congo 4 d new ff👍🏼
ya u r ryt we have no complains abt ur updations as u updated ur every ff regularlt...
i just read character sketchsssssssssss😳😳😳
yar i really loved the CS⭐️
both characters are awesummmm👏
hummmm finally everything in ur ff
dats gr888888 n i liked it too...
really its coolllllllll...😎
so ab character sketches to de diye ab part update karne ka irada kab haiii????????
well i knw tu jaldi hi karegiii but i cant stop myself yarr
as u knw i m always waiting 4 ur udsss...
n it was new so i cant wait yar plzzz i request u to update soonnnn
well tuje ye to nahi bol na padega na ki add me to ur PM list
but fir bhi bol deti hu add me ur PM list else i will kill you tu to gayiiiiiiiiii lollzz😆😆😆
nahi nahi itni jaldi nahi marungiii warna muje updates kon dega...'
ja tuje baks diyaaaaaaa
but iska matlab ye nahi ki tu time se update na de ya muje PM na kar
its compulsary okkkk
so abhi mene bahut saari bakwas karke tere dimag ka dahi bana diya haiii
i knw tu irritate ho gayi hhogiii but i cant stop my self commenting long here
baki me kabhi long comments nahi deti sirf jab bhi muje accha lage to
2 ya 3 compliments deti hu...
wo bhi dil se
but in ur last updatesssssssss
it forced me to give long comment so mene apne dil ka pura haal likh diyaaa
hope u like my commentttttttt...
by the way ab to sach me me apni bakwas bandh karti hu😆😆😆
its really fabulas part yarrr i want to read hw moyana will met n their reaction???
want to knw their reactions n their frnd ship n love n care n bond
n each n everyhitng gusssa narajgi ruth na manana sabbbbbbb
want to read sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
cont asap plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
by the way ab muje nahi likhna chahiye likhne ka bahut man kar raha haiii
i want ki tu first part long de plzzzzz 🤪
i will surely wait 4 ur next updates or is ff ke chakkar me baki ffs ko update karna mat bhulna😡
warnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
aisa haal kar dungiiiiiiii
😆
me janti hu tuje yahi lag raha hoga ki me paagal ho gayi hu
bt me kya karu tere updates dekhe aur new ff dekha to me khud ko rok
nahi payi aur likhne beth gayiiiii
itni comment ke baaad muje ye ehsas hua ki me koi ss os ya ff likhne nahi bethi hu
muje sirf comment karni haiii tere new ff pe but u seee
mene lamba choda bhashan likh diyaa...
i knw tu apni studies se bore hoti hi haii or ab mene apna lecture start karke tuje aur bore😔
kar diya haiiii
but u dont wryyyy ab me nahi likhungiii okkkkk
i promise...
ist is my longest comment till the date...
itna to tune CS me bhi nahi likha jitna mene comment kiya lolzzz😆😆
padhne wale confussed ho jayenge......😆😆😆
hope u like my comment
waititng 4 ur replyyy
again plzz cont soonnn😲
well ek complain haii plzz tu iska name change karde plzzzzzzzzzz....
sry if i hurt u.... but i like evrything in ur ff nt only in this but all
but in this ff dont like tittle...
baad me teri marjiiii ... ye tera ff haiii.....
i think iska name unconditonal Love hona chahiye..
as its mopnaya's ff
n in real life they love each other unconditionally...
so i suggested
hope u are nt hurted bt me....😒
Love ❤️
Radhi...😉

firstllyy thankssss a looottt😃update tera comment parh k abhe karne ko kar raha hai wo bhe 2 akhtee.aur mjheyy bohaatt maza aya tmhara comment parh k sach mein meri smile he kare ja rahe the aur tmhara itnaa long comment dekh k to mein bohaat ksuh huweee i just need them...pm tmhey karna bhool jaon its impossiblee.....baqi ffs bhe update karon ge balke now i am thinking har ff ka aik day kar don taake koi ff miss na ho mera....aur yeh baqwass merey lea bohaat maeney rakhte hai aur mein comeent parh k kbhe boor nahn hote...aur thank u soo much..mjhey itna lamba comment tmney he first tym diya haii...ff ka name change kar dete hon i didnt mind it..mein kcuh soch k bataon ge.tekh hope u dont mind.....n thankkk uu sooo much loved it totallly
lovee u
meri
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

coollllllllllllllllllllllllll...............start it soon yaar......................

just starting itt..hoope u liked it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
hi...
awesome concept n a superb cs...
love monaya...
wud love 2 read more...
thnx 4 d pm....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: meerrii

firstllyy thankssss a looottt😃update tera comment parh k abhe karne ko kar raha hai wo bhe 2 akhtee.aur mjheyy bohaatt maza aya tmhara comment parh k sach mein meri smile he kare ja rahe the aur tmhara itnaa long comment dekh k to mein bohaat ksuh huweee i just need them...pm tmhey karna bhool jaon its impossiblee.....baqi ffs bhe update karon ge balke now i am thinking har ff ka aik day kar don taake koi ff miss na ho mera....aur yeh baqwass merey lea bohaat maeney rakhte hai aur mein comeent parh k kbhe boor nahn hote...aur thank u soo much..mjhey itna lamba comment tmney he first tym diya haii...ff ka name change kar dete hon i didnt mind it..mein kcuh soch k bataon ge.tekh hope u dont mind.....n thankkk uu sooo much loved it totallly
lovee u
meri

thnk god u liked comment muje laga meri bakwas tuje bore kar degi...😆.
but u liked m glad...😃.
well soch ke jaldi new ff ka title bata de.....😊
ok m waiting 4 d 1st part
Love❤️
Radhi...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

hi...

awesome concept n a superb cs...
love monaya...
wud love 2 read more...
thnx 4 d pm....

thankss a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

thnk god u liked comment muje laga meri bakwas tuje bore kar degi...😆.

but u liked m glad...😃.
well soch ke jaldi new ff ka title bata de.....😊
ok m waiting 4 d 1st part
Love❤️
Radhi...😉

mein ney kar diya agar is sey better mila to phir change kar don ge by the way i loved ur segestionn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: meerrii

mein ney kar diya agar is sey better mila to phir change kar don ge by the way i loved ur segestionn

thnks a ton dear......
title rakhne ke liye actually wo me mere next ss ke liye rakha tha but
u knw 2 ffs n 1 ss me likh rahi hu pehle wo khatam karu bad me new
warna manage nahi kar paugiii u knw stdy....
lolzz m glad yarr
m still waiitng
Love ❤️
Radhi...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
PART 1
the camera zoomed to a room in a big banglow.....a girl with swweet smile covered in pink soft blanket sleeping like a princess dreaming about her prince charming...a girl of 18 years came in her room n opened the curtains n the sunrays touched the inocent face.........
v:sanaya di uthoo..subha ho gae hai.......
the girl open eyes n with swweet smile get up yawning in her baby pink night gown..
s:good morning meri mano..
mano was daughter of a servant mehta....mehta was just lke sanayas dad friend n were taking care of her in london..n mano was just like her liltle sis n close to her.......
ma:subha bakair di...apka nashta ready hai ap aa jao fresh ho k.........aur yeh ap k coffe.........
sanaya smiled n take cup from her
s:thanks mano mein adhey ghantey tak ate hon
ma:tekh hai di........she left........sanaya get up n walks to balcony..stnad there n smiled...n take a sip of cooffee
s:thank GOD studies finished aur ab mein finally ghar jaon ge....waooo..mom..dad...dadi..aur adhi bhae......uffff i cant control my hapines n excitment.......just then she remberd....aur wo.......pata nahn khahn ho ga....hm kbhe mil bhe paein gey ya nahn.......a tear came in her eyes but she wipe it.....ab ase bhe koi baat nahn hai wo jahan bhe ho ga usey dhondh nikalon ge akhir mohit sehgal k best friend sayana irani hon.......jisney kbhe harna nahn sekha.....aur mohit usey tu mein chorn ge nahn mil jaye aik baar sarey hisab barabar karneey hain mjhey....shaid wo bhe mumbai mein a jaye....pata nahn usey mein yaad bhe hon ge ya nahn.......GOD...agar na huwe tu kara don ge uski himat kase huwe mjhey bhulaney k.......ops.......yeh coffe he thandi ho gae us mohit k waja se
sm:har baat pe mohit ka naam mat lagaya karo sanaya.........
s:maa sach mein mohit ney he mjhey nahn anye diya tha...
m:han maa wo yeh sanaya bari dea bina ja rahe the
sm smiled
sm:acha chalo andar ao dono mein ney terey lea gajar ka halwa banaya hai
m:sachee maaa
sm:han sache chal andar a
s:aur merey lea
m:mein tmhey bhe don ga......both smiled.........
mom..i am missing u.....dont wory i wil be there in next 48 hours.........yapieee.....chaloo...sanaaya princess jaldi tyar ho dn shoping pe chaltey hain sab k lea shoping bhe to karne hai na....yaa.....she drank her coffee........n then goes to take shower........she came out wearing simple pink anarkali frok...loking like cute inocent girl.......she get ready........n was simply looking awesome....
ma:sanaayyyaaa diiiiiiiiiiii a bhe jaooo apka adha ghanta kab sey khatam honey ka nam nahn le raha
s:aye bus do mint manooo
ma:han do do mint kar k pora ghanta laga diya hai....
s:lo mein a gae manoo bus kush.......
ma;ap khaein ja rahe ho
s:han na aj raat k mumbai k flight hai na so shoping pe socha sab k lea gifts lete jaon..she sat on chair n start breakfast.mano was feling sad as hearing her going back to mumbaii..
s:hey manoo kya huwa yeh itni udas se shakal kuin bana le hai..........
ma:ap ja rahe ho na india isela apko bohat miss karon gey.......sanaya smiled then puting arm around her kissing her forhead
s:mein bhe tmhey bohaat yaad karon ge aur itni udass mat ho tm ana na mumbai dekhna hm kitna maza karein geyy
mano smiled
ma:han wo to aon ge ap mjhey apni shadi pe bulao ge na....sanaya who was drinking water split out...she blushed lightly but coover up with fake anger
s:manoo
ma:han to aur kya kahoo to di ap k lea larka dhondoo
s:uff.......manoo.yeh mom sey last tym tmhare kab baat huwe the
ma:abhe.........she bit her tounge...woh
s:kya keh rahe thein
ma:wo yeh k apko shadi k lea tyar karwa k behjon ap meri har baat mante ho na islea mjsey keh rahe thein
s:uffff mom bhe na itni baar kaha hai hai k kar lon ge shadi bhage thori na ja rahe hon mein aur wasey bhe abhe wo to mila he nahn hai........she said dreaming about woo.....
ma:kya??sanaya came out of day dreaming n blushed lightly n hit her forehead lightly smiling
s:larka aur kon
ma:to wo kon sa muhkil hai
s:han bilkul jagah jagah lafangey muft begair kise garantee k miltey to hain har street har block mein.......mano smiled
ma:to apko kon sa shehzada chahye........sanaya smiled .........get up from table.......
s: shehzada(we see a flashback of 10 years old boy playing bb) apney khawabon k haqeqat k talash hai(he did basket n turnd to see his friend who was now having sad expresssion)........us simple(he smiled).......sey cute(goes to her n look at her with soory expression)....sey...inocent(held his ears..).....smile waley(his friend smiled n he too smiled
)....larkey k talash hai jo sirf mera hai(his friend was sad as wanted to eat a choclate..another boy gave her but she shaked head in negative...his friend bring choclate for her n she smiled taking it from him).......jis k muhaabat(they both playing).......uski har ada(he making her smile by sily acts).....usk chahat jis pe sirf mera he haq hai(their last meting before leaving each other.he trying to hide his tears)........jo sirf mera intezar kar raha hai(a promise to each other n goes in oposite directions)sanaya wipe her tear quickly n then tunred to mano smiling...........
mano smiled........
ma:acha to yeh haqeqat kahan miley ge??
s:bohat jald dekhna ...aur tab mein us sey shadi karon ge aur tmhey zaror bulaoon ge ab becharey k aik he tu itni cute se sali ho ge.......
mano smiled.....
ma:acha gee
s:han gee aur ab baaton mein itna tym waste kara diya chalo change kar k ao shoping pe chaltey hian
ma:acha abhe aye
s;tekh hai mein wait karte hon.........
she left while sanayas daydreaming starts.............after they left for shoping..............
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the camera zoomed to a room in great banglow...a guy lying on bed with his famous smile....just like cute boy of 2 years.having inocent smile........a man of 40 years came in room....opend the curtains.......
v:mohit baba uthoo.....dekho suraj apne roshni leye kab ka apki khirki pe a gya hai....
samrat who was dreaming about her dreamgirl get up smiling........
m:good morning chachoo........
that man named gupta was friend of mohits dad n living with him in swizertland..........
gu:wah aj bina tang kea he uth gae
m:han wo mein ney socha k ab ja he raha hon tu kuch achi yadein he deta jaon..mohit pulled him n made him sit next to him n put head in his lap..... aur wasey bhe mein wahan apko bohat mis karon ge......he smiled n creases his hairs
gu:tjhey uthaney mein jitna maza ata hai aur kushi hote hai woh to kbhe bhe terey kudh sey uth janey mein nahn ate.......mohit smiled....aur ab tu chala jae ga tu kise uthaon ga.....mohit get up n held his hand kissed it.......
m:chachoo ap india ao gey na
gupta smiled pated his cheeks
gu:han jab tera band baja bajey ga...mohit blushed lgihtly.....
m:ap bhe chachoo.....yeh mom bhe na .......apko phone kar k zaror meri brain washing ka kaha ho ga
gu;han to is mein burae kiya hai teri studies complete ho to gae hain aur busines to tu jae ga to tuhe handle kare ga.........mohit smiled n get up n moved to balcony n whispers to himslef...han par wo abhe to nahn mile na use ka to intezar hai
gu:kis ka intezar hai........
m:wo..kise ka nahn chachcuu
gu:acha phir bhabeh ko bol don han
m:han wasey kis lea
gu:wohe teri shadi
m;chachuuuu plzzzzzzzz nahn
gu:par kuin baba
m:chachuu...wo...dekhein meri aik dreamgirl hai jab miley ge tu mein us sey shadi kar lon ge
gu:han aur agar sare zindage na mili to kanwara he reh jaye ga
m:chachooo aesa kbhe nahn ho ga
gu:mohit..yeh akhir teri dream girl hai kon aur kase hai kis shehzadi k talash hai tjhey
mohit smiled
m:shehzadi hai wo..princees(a girl wearing fork writing in her notebook)...angel(a boy came to her n iritate her n she stoping him)........inocent(she make inocent face n the boy returned her notebook)....sweet se smile(she smiled n he too smiled)...chote chote baaton pe larney wale(boy not giving her choclate while she trying to snatch it n at last got angry).......phir kudh he man janey wale.....(the boy didnt take noticed at last girl herself take choclate from his hands...n that boy smiled at her....she too couldnt help in smilng)........meri parwah karney wale(he got hurt during playing.that girl quickly take his hand n start blowing air on it while boy staring at her smiling).........wo sirf meri hai sirf meri(many childrn palying n asked girl to join them but she sahdked head in negative n then her friend came n they both played together)........uski chahat muhabbat sirf merey lea(both standing with teary eyes...).......sirf mera he intezar ker raahe haii(both promised n then left in oposite directions).............mohit wiped his tear n turned smiling
gu:aur yeh konsey khawab mein mile ge
m:miley ge chahcuu dekhna
gu:acha yeh teri dreamgirl bad mein discuss karon ga ja ja k change kar ley aur yeh teri coffe thandi he ho gae dubara behjwata hon
m:nahn rehney do mein asey he pe lon ga
gu:par
m:pee lon ga chachcuu
gu:tekh hai nashtey k lea jaldi a
m:jeee........
m:mom bhe na....i love u mom.dad....finally studies finsihed n me going to india waoo....mom dad shevangii...aur nanoo..aurrr .....woo...........pata nahn khahn ho ge usey mein yaad bhe hon ga ya nahn.........wo kbhe nahn bhool sakte mjhey....i know wo bhe mjhey utna he miss karte ho ge jitna mein karta hon...aj finally india ja he raha hon..aur wo bhe ho shaid wahan.......i am missing her yar....aik dafa mil jaye phir usey janey nahn don ga...intezar k bus kuch he pal baqi bachey hain.............oh cofffe aur bhe thandi ho gae....sanaya hote to kudh pilate.......
mm:mohit beta kbhe dodh pe lo
m:nahn maa mjhey nahn pena
mm:mohiittt
s:mohit pe lo na dodh maa ney itney pyar sey bana hai
m:par sanaya u know na itna karwa hota hai
s:nahn hota tm pee k dekho to sahee..she take glass n made him drink.......
mm smileeddd................
mohit smiled...then picked up cup........mohit dude abhe tu kudhe he peney parey ge us k lea tu intezzar karna parey ga..he smiled
mohit drank coffee........n went to get ready..........he was wearing blue jeans with black t shirt looking handsome as always.........he came down n join gupta in breakfast
m:chahcu mein soch raha tha k shoping kar lon mom dad k lea aur shevangii k lea bhe
gu:han kuin nahn chale jaoo sham mein he flight hai
m:jee.....he left for shoping after breakfast................
precape:monaya meett.......
Edited by meerrii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res ***edited***
just read part its fabulas part
really u did excellent job
loved each n every words
loved the way they descrebed each other
n also their flash backs.....
they were so cute when they were child
my cutiepie mohit n sanay........
both are waiting 4 each other.....
dats88888
m dieng to knw moreeeeeeeeee
but i knw i have to wait.....
well do cont next part soon m waiting 4 d nextttt....
Love ❤️
Radhii...😉
Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz add me to your pm list.

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