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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys thanks a ton for such a warm response.....
now i can continue........😊.....and guys i know you all must be thinking that if adhi and nups are getting married than what about mayank?,...but dont worry.mai hoon na😉😆..and some havent added me in their buddy list....pls accept it..that will be easy for me to pm you guys
again thanks a ton


part-2




adhiraj was in his room...when someone knocked on his door....kya mai apko disturb kar sakta hun?
adhiraj was more than happy to see the person....
a-mayank....god mera yaar...and hugged him tightly.....
m-are aram se....and he also hugged him back

mayank sharma,25 years old...his parents died in a accident when he was 6 years old..from then he stays with his mama- mami..mr and mrs khanna...adhiraj, samrat and mayank had been always more than brothers...mr and mrs khanna love him as much as they love adhi and sam...he's image is a choclate boy....his one smile is enough for 100 girls to fall for him...girls drools over him..but he is in wait for his "true love".......

a-i missed you like hell...itne din lagane ki kya jarurat thi...jaldi nahi asakta tha....
m-yaar mai to ana chahta tha...par factory me kuch problem hogayi thi..agar mai wapas chala ata to mama ji ko jana parta...
a-to wapas ajana chahiye tha na...atleast hitler to mere sar pe nahi baithta
m-adhi....
a-ya i know..i know his my dad..and i should respect him and all....
m-ab kya huya tera dimag itna kyun garam hai...he said taking a seat in the bed
a-are yaar dad ne phir se ek ladki dikha di.....
m-to problem kya hai.....???????....
a-what do you mean.?......mujhe shadi wadi nahi karni hai.....
m-did you like the girl?
a-what do you want to say?
m-look adhi...one day or the other day you need to get married so why not today?..i have seen the girl photo..she's beautiful man....
a-oh!!! to tu kr lena usse shadi....
m-just shut up......
a-but.....
m-just give it a try......ok?
a-are you sure..?
m-ofcource
a-fine!.....
mayank was happy for adhiraj.....he hugged him
m-congrats!!!! man
a-yah..yah..i know....
he smilled at him....now sleep ok....
a-yah good night..
m-good night....
mayank closed the door and saw samrat standing there with a questioning look in his face....he gave a thumps up to him...and winked at him....
m-its done bro.....
s-you are too good.....hugging him...
m-tell me something i dont know.....
s-now its late...go and sleep.
m-yup...good night...

next day.......

all of them were sitting in the breakfast table......
am-adhi beta your dad must be coming........
a-i know....
s-all the best brother....and chuckled with mayank and gunjan....
a-haan haan uda lo mera mazak....
mr khanna came and took his seat..
ad-so adhi bataiye hume...apka faisla......
a-i am ready for the marriage.....he said looking down...
ad-he smilled at his son....he knew he wasnt happy but he believed everything will be fine soon......i am really happy son...you took the right decision ......
everybody was happy....samrat smilled at mayank and thaked him in heart.....

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mr khanna called mr bhushan.....and informed them .....
the whole bhushan house was dancing with joy......they were so happy as nupur was their only daughter and she will be married in such a respectine family...it was their dream which came true.......but nupur's dad isnt so selfish so he decided to ask nupur first.....

nd-nupur kya mai andar ajaun.....
n-haan papa...aap puch kyun rahe ho.....
nd-beta mai jyada ghuma phira ke baat nahi karunga....isiliye sidhe sidhe puchta hun.....tumhe adhiraj pasand hai na....
nupur wasnt sure what to say....not that adhiraj wasnt a good prson...but still...
n-papa ap logone agar mere liye kuch socha hoga to sahi hoga...
nd-kya mai yea haan samjhu?
nupur faintly smilled and nooded.....nupur's dad kissed nupur's forehead....and left....he also informed khanna's....both famylies were really happy.....

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nupur was sitting in her room thinking about her decision....did she do the right thing?....she still dont know anything about adhiraj....and marriage ?......she took a deep breath and think this is right....what is happening is for good....she was lost in her world of why?..what?....when suddenly someone broke her chain of thoughts......

d-yahi teri dosti yahi tera pyar.....shadi ki baat fix hogayi aur hume doosro se pata chala......
n-diya.....and hugged her tightly....
d-chor mujhe.....mujhe tujhse baat nahi karni......
n-are baba sorry....sab kuch itna jaldi hogaya ki....
d-bas..bas...aur kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi hai.....
nupur smilled at her friends anger and held her ears......
n-ab bhi maaf nahi karegi......????
dia looked at her from the corner of her eyes and smilled....and hugged her
d-i am so happy for you.......

dia,nupur's best friend since chilhood...she's the one and only person who understand nupr completely...may be better than nupur's parents......

d-ek baat bata tu khush to hai na?
nupur looked down and said nothing.....
d-oh god tu khush nahi hai....
n-pata nahi dia.....meri kuch samajh me nahi araha hai yaar......
d-dont worry everything will be fine.....
n-i hope so.....
sensing the seriousness dia decided to lit up the mood....
d-shopping chalien?
n-shopping?
d-haan baba shopping.....
n-umm...to intezar kis baat ka hai...chal na
d-pehle change to karle.....
n-oopps abhi ayi......

dia smilled at her friend....nupur was a master piece..she was shy..nervous...clumsy in some time.....but she was also strong...bubly..and fu loving...for only those who could know her closely......
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gunjan came running in mayank's room......
g-mayank.....mujhe tumhari help chahiye..
m-gunjan.....dont tell me tumhe phir se koi dress return karni hai?
g-please mayank......chalo na samrat bhi office chala gaya....aur adhi ka to tumhe pata hi hai.....
m-gunjan......this is the 3rd time in this week that you want to return a dress.....tum kharid ne ke time pe check nahi karsakti kya?.....
gunjan made a baby face and said...tum meri help nahi karoge?
m-dont make this puppy face ok....
gunjan looked down and started going when mayank said...
m-i am waiting for you in the car ...come soon
gunjan looke up and smilled
g-just two minute.........
mayank smilled at her silly act

mayank and gunjan being same age....and class mates became best friend...even he was the one who helped samrat and and gunjan in their love marriage.....gunjan was mayank's true friend...though sometime she irritates mayank with her silly acts but still mayank respects her a lot......


precap-first meeting😍

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Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
keep updating........

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rati's IF intv2....she is sooo happy so am i....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
OHHHHHHHHHHH...so sweet update
loved the bond mayank sami n adi share....loved they way thy were talking
nupur behave like a gud daughter..gr8 .....but adi is nt her type...neither she is ....l
waiting for th first meeting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Nice part
Loved Mayu's relation wit all
He is really sweet
Evn Dia n Nups relation is fab
Loved how she understood her so well
Waiting for the meet
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hayeeeeeeeeeeee
it's getting better n better ab toh agle part ka w8 bhi nahi ho raha
jaldi update karna yaar
n thanks toh mujhe tumhe kahna chahiye
ke mujhe itna acha ff padne ko mila !!!!!!!!!

😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Hey Fia , sweets first of all congrats on your first FF🤗, i know you are an awsome writer. And Next i LOVE the name,actually someone very close to me calls me ehsaas...😳 so i get reminded of them when i see it.

Last but not least whats with N&A?..where Mayank? and I'm loving SG in this FF.

Your doing a fabulous Job, keep it up sweety

Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Wow beautiful update dear
i adore adhi-mayank frship
awesome part

waiting for mayur first meeting

good job- do cont it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Mayank and adi are like great friends!😛 Aww so sweet. I don't Adi suits Nupur that much, its not that i have some basis againt him, rather in this ff the sweet and sober girl nupur is she needs someone to match that quality.

Looking forward to the meet.

Sajjal

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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb....awsome....can't wait for mayur meet😍
thanks so much for de pm
do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice part
mayank is really sweet
and nupur diya are gr8 frds wow
wtg for mayur meet
continue soon😊

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