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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 1
Kumud is at college she is very bright. She loves to study. It becomes lunch time and Kumud is listening to her favorite radio station. Salaam|Namaste. Kali puts the phone on Kumud ear.

Kumud: Kali Whats this

Kali: you going on air

RJ: we have our first caller on air!

Kumud: Hi my name is Kumud and I LOVE to listen to you radio

RJ: who is your favorite singer

Kumud: Angad Khanna

RJ: What song would you like to request?

Kumud: Angad Khanna's....Kaisa Yeh Pyar

RJ: looks like your a crazy fan also in love with Angad

Kumud: I really like the meaning to his music. Love can not be done by popularity or looks but by the kind of person her is. What really matter is how kind and caring her is from the inside rather than how good he looks

RJ: wow terrific answer. I think this is the 1st girl I have met thats not crazy and in love with angad. Thanx for calling and now listen to KAISA YEH PYAR HAI by Angad Khanna

Meanwhile:
Angad is listening to this. He is shocked. The first girl that does not droole over his looks. He thinks he has fallen in love

Angad: I need to meet Kumud



AT COLLEGE:
Kali: you crazy! well everygirl is in love with him and you dont love him. y is that?

Kumud: every girl is crazy. how can I love someone whom I have not met. But I know sum1 who is crazy for him

Kripa comes rushing in!

Kripa: wow! Angad's show is tonight. I have to go to it

Kumud: and she has made her entry

THEY ALL LAUGH LOL!

Kali: Kumud and Kripa I have passes for u both for the show

Kripa: wow really? if I see him I m going to faint...

Kumud: Kripa can u talk of anyone else but Angad?

Kripa:hmmmmm let me think NO! he is the hottest guy in the world

Kumud: shut up

Kumud: Kali, I m not going!

Kali: y?

Kumud: I enjoy listening to his songs..I have the CD..I don't need to waste my time

Kali: I know your not crazy about him but plz come on! it will be tons and tons and tons of fun! plz?

Kumud: fine only because your saying so!

The bell rings and the 3 friends go to class.

IN THE EVENING

Kumud, Kripa and Kali go to the concert

Angad perfoms his items

Kripa is going crazy cheering

Kali is cheering for her bro

Kumud is lip singing the lyrics

Then Angad announces that one girl will come up and dance with him.

All the girls are cheering like crazy!

Kripa is jumping to putting her hand out just like everyone elses

Angad hold Kripas hand

Kripa goes on stage and dances with him

The concert ends and they are in the hall all 3 of them!

Kripa: OMG OMG OMG that was so awesome. I got to dance with the one and only Angad.

Kumud: its just Angad

Kali: come on u guys lets go meet Angad bhaiya

They enter Angads room,

Angad is lost in his thoughts, he is thinking how to find Kumud!

Kali: bhaiya! that was an awesome show

Kripa: rocking

Kali: oh bhaiya by the way these are my BEST friends in the whole wide world. This is Kripa..the one u just danced with on stage. She is a BIG fan of yours.

Angad shakes Kripas hand

Kali: this is Kumud. The one I share a dorm with. The daughter of the owner of Kapoor Industries. Kumud

Angad shakes her hand

Angad: are you Kumud Kapoor, the one who was on air this afternoon on Salaam Namaste?

Kumud: yes that was me

Angad thinks: wow she is so beatiful just as I had imagined. Kali did my job she found Kumud

Kali: bhaiya what happened?

Angad: oh nothing just tired from the show,,

Kali?: oh ok we'll go back to our dorm cya

Outside

Kripa: omg Angad talked 2 me

Kali: shut up Kripa

They laugh and go to der dorms


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Posted: 19 years ago
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lovely part...angad n kumud...hmmm pretty interesting..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kumud_Kshitij

Nightangel of course! tumhare daar meh Kumud aur Kshitij hamesha saath honge. Have u read mi id :"Kumud_Kshitij"...I m a crazy fan of theirs of course I wont sperate em

Dear sis....😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hy sis!!!! dhis si 4 ur fiction...

in ur words....tons of tons of tons of....best wishes....👏😛

dhis is small treat 4m me:

Three cheerss 4 u & ur fiction..

Hip Hip Horay👏

Hip Hip Horay👏

Hip Hip Horay👏

My ❤️ goes MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM 😛

Edited by nightangel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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your welcome mi dear sis
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: annu2005

y is kripa such a BIMBO?


her character changes quite a bit...right now der in college its just fun times
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Posted: 19 years ago
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NEXT DAY:

Kumud is walking 2 college. Her friend Kshitij walks up to her.

Kshitij: Hey Kumud. I need ur help. my girlfriend Poonam is made at me how do I make it up to her

Kumud: Well give her a gift and take her out. let her know ur truly sorry and u love her.

Kshitij gives Kumud a hug

Kshitij: thanx Kumud! ur mi best friend!

Kshitij leaves and Kumud thinks: I wish we were more than friends! 😭

Meanwhile Kali and Kripa come.

Kali: Hey what were u thinking?

Kumud: nothing

Meanwhile Angad comes..
He wants to know more about Kumud..lol 😆 😆

Kripa bumps into him...

Angad catches...her

Kripa blushes 😳 😳 😳

Angad and her let go

Kripa: thanx

Angad: sry that was mi fault...I was looking for someone

Kripa:ooh Kali? sry u juss missed her she left to pick up her friend, she'll be back soon

Angad: oh yah I forgot. he'll be comming back after 13 yrs

Kripa: Who

Angad: Kali's best friend!

Jus then Kali eneter with her best friend

GARV!!!



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Posted: 19 years ago
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everything is perfect 👏except him!!!! 😉

plz anybody tell him.... yaar uskee face ka geogrophy bhi thik karvlee be4 stiching cloths.....😆

sorry garv fans!!!! 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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woooooooooooooooooooow why not anybody tell me about this fanfac...
I just found it,, but it's fantastic
keep writing
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Posted: 19 years ago
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BEST OF LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
excellent Keep it up!

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