Life partner Maneet FF Climax - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe such a cute update and mohini is nice all of a sudden is it genuine or just doing it to please maan anyways great and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update!
wtz wid mohini??y so sweet all of a sudden!?
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooooooooooooooo
that was such a cuteee update
hawww i thought u were going to erm......go into some maaneet details with the honeymoon 😔
doesnt matter - awww im starting to like mohini now 😊 hehehehhee
cant wait for more
this was a chota sa update lool
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Posted: 14 years ago
please include me in your PM list. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar..short yet sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 11
Mohini knocks the door:Maan!
Maan removes his arm from Geet.
M:This mom....
He is irritated.Geet smiles. Maan opens the door.
Mo:Tomorrow there is Holi's puja.Get ready early.So sleep soon.
M:Yes mom.
Mohini goes away.Maan closes the door and looks at Geet
M:This mom is sometimes...
G:We need to sleep early.Because we have to make arrangements for the puja.I will change and come.
M:Ok.

The next day...
Puja is going on in the house.Geet puts a gopi on Maan's forehead with saffron and gives prasad to Maan.

All are celebrating holi.They all throw colour on each other.
Maan goes near geet and puts colour on her face slowly.They both look deeply into each other eyes.
Geet thinks:I like Maan.May be i love him.But when he touched me now i felt very different.I felt secure.
Maan smiles at her.She also smiles.They both hold hands together and smile.
Mohini:Maan & geet...come..pose for a photograph.
They both stand together before the camera.
M:Maan...stand close to geet.
He is shy:What are you telling mom?
Mo:Stand close to her.
Maan stands close to her.They both are shy.Ronit takes their photograph.

Night....
It's raining...Geet is standing out with a smile.Maan goes out looking for her.
M:What are you doing here at night?All are sleeping.
G:Rain is so lovely.I love it.So cool.
She is dancing in the rain.Maan feels nice seeing her wet in the rain.He goes near her and pulls her close to her.
Geet can't move.They both can't utter a word.Their eyes speak to each other.
M:I love you Geet.It's time to break the distance between us.
She is shy:I love you too.
Maan sings the song 'Zindagi Do Pal Ki...' while becoming intimate with geet.

The next morning...
Geet is drying her hair.She sees a rose flower on the bed.
G:Who kept this here?Maan?
She hears somebody entering the room.She looks at him.That is Maan. She is shy to face him.So she tries to go out of the room.But he holds her hand.
She is shy:Leave my hand Maan.
She removes her hand from him and runs away.Maan smiles.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part dear... i still feel something is cooking in mohini's mind
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe that was so cute loved how they confessed so direct lol anyways great update and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
love your FF....
could u plz add me to your PM list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
finally they are in love lol
continue soon!

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