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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 510
nakul left
dadi is silently watching maneet from some distance
G:(approaches maan)y r u doing like this?
M:wht did i do?u r d one who shouted @ me
G:sorry maan.actually i'm running behind u 2 apologise 2 u.bt u r nt stoping.tht is y i shouted
M:(holds her shoulder&pulls her 2wards him)
G:(confused)
M:(smiles)acha.nw my wife wants 2 apologise 2 me.bt she sounds very hard
G:(softens)maan i'm sorry
M:i'm nt impressed by ur apology
G:143 maan
M:very good...
G:(happy)thank u
M:wait.lemme complete
G:kya?
M:nw close ur eyes
G:kyun?
M:don't u want me 2 pardon u?
G:...
M:aankhein ban karo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 511
G:(closes her eyes)
M:u shouldn't open ur eyes untill i ask u.teek hai?
G:maan,wht r u going 2 do?
M:chup
G:ji
M:(smiles)nw say 143 for 200 times
G:par ye 143 kya hai?
M:i'll tell u later.nw start saying 143
G:teek hai.u count it
M:hmm
G:143 maan,143 maan...
dadi is still carefully watching maneet from some distance.
M:(staring@geet lovingly)
G:143 maan,143 maan....
M:(goes 2 kiss her forehead,thinks something,stops&smile)
G:maan r u counting or nt?
M:haan geet.i'm counting.bt don't stop in d middle.otherwise u have 2 start from d beginning
G:kya?(abt 2 open her eyes)
M:geet......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 512
M:geet i told u na nt 2 open ur eyes ?
G:(makes baby face)teek hai.143 maan,143 maan...
M:(controls his laughter&leaves d place silently)
G:(still chanting)143 maan...
dadi:(selftalk)ye kya horah hai?maan has left.thn whom geet is talking with?

in d drawing room
nakukl:chandu,ye 143 matlab kya hai?
chandu:oho,u too know abt 143
nakul:just nw geet madam said it 2 maan sir
chandu:is she still saying?
nakul:ye chodo.nw tell me wht 143 means?
chandu:it means 'l am sorry'
nakul:really
chandu:haan geet madam told me
nakul:teek hai(runs)
M:(enters drawing room&bumps in2 nakul)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 513
M:(shouts)tumara dhyan kahan hai?
nakul:(scared)sir wo...
M:ab jao
N:143 sir(buddies,he says 'sorry'.courtesy-chandu)
M:(lost it&shouts)ab jao
nakul:(runs 4 his life)
M:(selftalk)ye chandu aur nakul in dono muje pagal kardenge(leaves 4 his room)


@ d portico of outhouse
G:(still her eyes closed)143 maan,143 maan....
dadi:(comes close 2 geet,notices geet's closed eyes,silently watching her&selftalk)wht maan is doing with this poor girl?she is saying 143 here&he has left silently
G:maan,is 200 times over?
dadi:(selftalk)acha,he wants her 2 say 143 for 200 times.hw romantic.

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Posted: 14 years ago
HI good to see u back was missing your updates very much your FF is one of my fev keep it up and best of luck for your studies . may sucess come to u always .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 514
G:(still eyes closed)maan,atleast nw tell me wht is d meaning of 143
dadi:(selftalk)geet doesn't know d meaning also.maan u r great
G:maan,y r u silent?
dadi:(controls her laughter)
G:ji boliyena
dadi:(selftalk)whre has he gone?
G:if u don't say d meaning,thn i'll go&ask dadima
dadi:(selftalk)hey bagwan,mein kya karu is pagal ladki ko? poor maan
G:maan,pl.tell me.i'm ready 2 give u whtever u ask
dadi:(selftalk)interesting.if maan was here,wht would have he asked her?
G:maan,i know wht do u want nw
dadi:(selftalk)acha.my stupid potha is missing d romantic moment.whre is he nw?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 515
G:(still eyes closed)y aren't u talking 2 me?
dadi:(selftalk)how would he talk?he has run somewhere
G:may i open my eyes nw?
dadi:(selftalk)geet yesa math karo beta
G:r u still angry with me?
dadi:(selftalk)maan is angry with u?impossible
G:teek hai.lemme give u an AK(she shortly says ACTION KISS as AK)
dadi:(selftalk)AK?
G:(moves forward 2wards dadi)
dadi:(scared&selftalk)pata nai.wht is meant by AK in maan's love encyclopedia?
G:ji aap kahan hai?(still eyes closed&stretches her arms 2 catch dadi)
dadi:(selftalk)ab mein kya karu?(moves backwards silently)
G:(abt 2 catch dadi)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 516
dadi:(notices tht maan is coming,she runs&hides behind a pillar)
G:(hears d footsteps of dadi&misunderstand tht maan is running)maan,nw stop playing hide&seek with me
dadi:(selftalk)acha hua.geer din catch me
M:(approaches geet)
G:nw i'm going 2 open my eyes
M:(shouts)geet don open
G:thn y r u nt replying 2 me?i only was talking all these time
M:(selftalk)geet has been talking alone
G:jawab deejiye
M:geet,have u finished saying 143 for 200 times
G:r u asking me?u r d one who was counting it.hena?
M:(fumbles)haan geet.i've forgotten
G:so nw do u want me 2 repeat 143 4 200 times?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Park 517
M:(smiles@her innocence)nai geet
dadi:(silently watching from behind d pillar)
G:teek hai.nw come closer
M:(surprised)kyun?
G:have u forgotten everything wht i just said?
M:(selftalk)wht would have she said?
G:maan
M:haan geet.i remember everything
G:teek hai.nw come closer
M:(confused,moves close 2 her&selftalk)wht is she going 2 do nw?
dadi:(selftalk)i think she is going 2 give him AK.ab pata chalega ki ye AK kya hai
G:(caressing his cheeks)
M:(scared)geet ye tum kya kar rahi ho?
G:chup.i'm going2give u AK
M:(shocked)kya?AK?geet,we r standing outside d outhouse.don't u remember?
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Posted: 14 years ago
i felt bad with Maan's act bechari 143 bolrahi hai and this guy is just leaving that place thats bad

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