Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 - Page 84

that was sooo sweet

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

that was sooo sweet

now I want to know ki Nupur ne kya maanga?😉😆

par meri ek complanit hai😕

why didn't I get a pm?😭

becoz main abhi PM bhej rahi hoon..........u will get in sometime😆

Originally posted by: Payal-15

becoz main abhi PM bhej rahi hoon..........u will get in sometime😆

Hmm I didn't really get the point of this chapter...I found it more like a character sketch... We kinda knew that stuf about them! Just one request again...can u focus more on the future rather than there past? Because most of their pas has been covered and what they were like at college you have managed to convay to us through the way u have etched the characters throughougt the story so it's quite obvious! I love the pace of their relationship being slow but again I am finding that not very much happens in each chapter! Don't get me wrong- I love this FF, its one of my favourites and you write excellently- but while keeping it slow can you make more happen in a chapter? Just a request!

Originally posted by: x.Heena.x

Hmm I didn't really get the point of this chapter...I found it more like a character sketch... We kinda knew that stuf about them! Just one request again...can u focus more on the future rather than there past? Because most of their pas has been covered and what they were like at college you have managed to convay to us through the way u have etched the characters throughougt the story so it's quite obvious! I love the pace of their relationship being slow but again I am finding that not very much happens in each chapter! Don't get me wrong- I love this FF, its one of my favourites and you write excellently- but while keeping it slow can you make more happen in a chapter? Just a request!

i get what u r sayin..........but i have always given a vague idea of MN earlier...so i felt the need to show why exactly they were so distant from each other.........sorry for not getting my point across clearly

I loved this sentence '' she was always around somehow'' I could totally imagine mayank's expression..

wonderful update payal, mayanks past was interesting especially how he thinks about everything around him... And to the past i'm curious to know what nupurf wants... Anyways awesome update.... 😃

is their love story finally beginning? i'm so excited.

Really DESTINY played important Role in Their Life

Nice update...................looking forward to what she ask for................n please give some Mayur moments................cont soon...............thnx for pm...........!!!