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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: deepti_mohit

wow yaar superb concept n CS

too gud totally loved it do continue soon



i m glad u liked it..thanks 4 commenting..ll try to updt asap..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was soooooooo awesomeee Concept and CS



thanks a tonne😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

Hey dear Congo for ur new ff n I loveee da concept n ughhh chuddi aunty here yuckkk bt m glad dat Sammy doesn't like her n den majan married n mayu loveeee gunji a lottt bt gunji doesn't offcourse both sajan r waiting for each other hehehe der dream love lol can't wait for sajan meet do continue soon n thnx for pm


m glad u liked it..the story ll interest u..i hope u ll like it and ll surely add u 2 d pm list😊
thanks 4 a big comment😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
@mysterygirl--thanks soo much..i ll surely updt soon n pm u..thanks 4 commentin😊
@Sajanrox11---m glad u liked it..have added u 2 d pm list😊
@saduf--thanks a tonne😊
@ruvy--thankss soo much..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
thanku soo much guys for ur comments..i m rily very happy..well iheres the 1st part..

Guys if u wanna njoi this story then u ll imagine all the happenings..

PART I


A man was in his room and was talking to a business partner'mujhe yeh sab kissi bhi haal me chahiye..by hook or crook'

The business partner said ok sir..i ll try my best and try 2 gt it done'

No trial..i want it..otherwise u r fired..do u get that?

Yes sirr' I ll---ggggett it done..

Hmmm good..c u at 10 am'in the office'

He kept the phone down and started staring outside the window..the climate was windy and it was pleasant..

Suddenly he felt as if some1 is hugging him from the back'and wen he turned arnd it was none other than SHEENA(SHEE-NAAH)🤢

GM JAAN..inti jaldi kyon uth gayye..abhi toh sirf 10 baje hain'

Samrat her jaan said to himself'isse yeh jaldi lagta hain..pata nai kab akal ayegi'and then his voice turned stern as he knew that y was she talking soo sweetly'.

Kya chahiye tumhe?samrat asked'

Zyada kuch naii..bas 1 lakh rs chahiye'mujhe kuch shopping karni hain'apne liye aur apne jaan ke liye'plzz de do naa'

Kya 1 lakh bas shopping ke liye..aur sheena tum sirf apne liye shopping karti hoo..toh jhoot kyon bol rahi ho?with a shocked expression on his face'

Array jaan..abhi toh mere paas job hi kapde the maine unhe 2 baar pehen liya aur agar dobaara pehnnongi toh hammarari koi status nai rahegi naa isiliye..

Hmmm..theeke ye lo(gives her the money and thinks "kaash koi aisa hota jisse main bahut pyar kar sakta aur jo mujhe aur naaki inn paiso ko..kaash maere paas kabhi paisa hota hi nai..kam se kam saccha pyar toh mil jaata"

At this thot the wind starts blowing harder and then samrat feels it pleasantly bt sheena feels it its yuck'.

Samrat felt that his life is going to change very soon'

And so he said "I hope yeh change accha ho"

Sheena asked'kuch kaha tumne?

Nai toh..mujhe der ho rahi hain..main chalta hoon'

Scene shifts to another house where a girl wearing a salwar suit with her dupatta on her head..is worshipping god and also singing bhajan in her melodious tune..her husband is watching her standing behind a pillar'

Bahaar kyon khade ho mayank,andar aao naa..gunjan sharma wife of mayank sharma said to him in a melodious tune'

Mayank was shocked..he came in n asked "tumhe kaise pata..ki main hi tha"

Agar tum neeche itne zor xor se steps le ke aaoge toh pata to chal hi jayega naa?

Hayye?tum kitni smart ho gunjan---mayank said and gunjan smiled'

Pata hain tum bahut beautiful bhi hoo..i---

Mayannkkk..office ke liye der ho rahi hain..jaldi tayyar ho jaoo..main naashta tyaar kar deti hoon'

Okk

Gunjan went into the kitchen'

And mayank said to himself "main jaanta hoon ki tum mujhse pyar nai karti..par main tumhara intezaar karroonga gunjan"

Smiling to himself he went to get ready..

Gunjan heard him n said to herself mayank mujhse kitna pyar karta hai..main usse kyon pyar nai kar sakti'itna accha hain wo'

And then the wind blows and due to this her hair comes infron of her milky white face which reflects her innocence'

And then she says'mujhe aisa kabhi mehsoos nai hua..aisa lag raha hain..jaise main kissi se milne waali hoon jo ki meri zindagi badal dega'fingers crossed..

And saying this she went off'.

In the heaven..

God was sayin "yes my children u r rite this day ll change ur lives and u ll meet ur love and this ll bring in a lot of trials and tribulations bt these trials ll only strengthen ur relationship..my work is done..now its ur work how u recognize each other and become partners'

And then god smiled and went to his chamber.

.(I noe its silly bt I m tryin to create an imaginary scene here soo that u guys like it..if u dnt like it..let me noe)


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hope u liked it..plz leave ur comments n suggestions..i wld b glad if u guys let me noe...

thanks soo much

love u all

palak


precap---gunjan meets sheena

Edited by mohit_rockstar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Wao palak awsm part yar,mindblwing.plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: karantakiar

Wao palak awsm part yar,mindblwing.plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika



thankss soo much dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
heyyy awesome superb part palak..loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Not at all silly,Palak...infact I loved the way you have started the FF. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: swati98

Not at all silly,Palak...infact I loved the way you have started the FF. Waiting for the next update.


thanks soo much swati..i was rily doubtful abt the parts
i m glad u liked it all
thanks soo much for commenting😊

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