Guilty Conscience (SR FF ~Part 23: Page 86)

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Nomad Soul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#311

First of all my apologies for not commenting regularly :| in-spite of the fact that this is one of my most favorite FFs!! ;))))

And my my waadddaaa phattakkk update!!! Totally awesome!! Goshh the DNA test & all that!! yayy ayyaa finally it's the beginning of the revelation of the big mystery!!!!! awwwooohoohohohohoh!!! Sid & RIddhima!! How & When!!!! Good Lord!!! hahaha this is gonna be EPIC!!!! I CANT... REEEAAALLLYY ABSOLUTEEELLLYYY CAAANNNTTT WAIT TO READ ABOUT IT!!!
So please please please continue like SUPERRR SOOONNN!!!
STUPENDOUS piece of work!! Absolutely marvelous!!! 👏👏👏

Oh and my guess is it might have happened while they were totally sloshed!! 😛

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-Harshu-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#312

Zohal 🤗

AWESOME update !!!! the DNA test & all that!

I really loved the Aryaan-Sid scene at swing😳

Wohooo Finally its revealed that Aryaan is Sid's son

well we knew it . I just wonder how can Sid be Aryaan's father n Riddhima dsnt recognize him 🤔

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Continue superr soon...

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Neetu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#313

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Hey there 🤗

I am super loving the way this story is progressing. I love the way Sid - Aryan's bond is developing - Sid is proving to be a father figure in Aryan's life unknowingly (and whats ironic is he is his father 😆)

And now Sid is close to finding out the truth.. Cant wait to know whats there in the past...

Pls continue super soon...

Great story so far... 👍🏼👏

Cheers

Neet

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Veena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#314

Zohal🤗

phinallyyy u updated😆

i so luvd Sid n Aryan's convo😳

n also Sid n his "gay" con's convo🤣

so Sid wil get to know d truth in d nxt part, cool😎

i m sure Aryan is nt Riddhima's son😕

plz plz plz update soon😃

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Dsntmatter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: Liashna
Awww... This is awesome... 😃

Zohal, I seriously think, are you a philosopher???

Am Amazed by your words..

Really keen to know what Sid's gonna do..😉

Update pretty fast yaar..

Cheers👏

Liashna THANK YOU!!

And Im not a philosopher... its just the character talks like that! Lol.

I'm glad you like the concept of the whole thing!

And guess Im late again... but updating in a moment!

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Dsntmatter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: superxuberant
thisss was a superbbb update
u ve kept me guessing ki ab aage kya hoga
how long ll v ve to wait 4 d next update nw
plzzz make it little faster...

Sank YOU! and aagey kya hoga? Aagey read karo!! And The update is coming now... !! Sorry abt it!

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Dsntmatter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: indian_beauty
Zohal 🤗🤗🤗

Yesss finally an update from you!!!!!

It was as always awesome update!

I really loved the Aryaan-Sid scene at swing😳
Such sweet father son scene😳

I'm also LOVING SR interaction with each other...its fun cute n flirty if I may say😳

Finally its revealed that Aryaan is Sid's son
well we knew it na...I just wonder how can Sid be Aryaan's father n Riddhima dsnt recognize him🤔 Riddhima's not Aryaan's mother is she?? maybe he's her sister's or frnds son😕 IDK ... I wanna knw soon!!!!!!
So plzzz continue soon yaar!!

P.S. try to enjoy ur summer job...trust me I knw summer jobs can be boring bt still try😛

I know!! I am the most sad writer in this whole forum!! Taking all those gaps before updating!

Glad u liked the father-son scenes... I kinda struggle with those since I am a girl and I really have no knowledge of that sort of bonding so yh I try my best at those!! Real happy u liked em!

And with the coming update all ur doubts will be cleared! And cant enjoy my summer job! Its bloody accounting!! HATE ACCOUNTS!!!!

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Dsntmatter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: NaGeSwArI
hi buddy

awesome update

aryan sid's son

Hey Nageshwari! Glad u liked it!! And Yes now I know u love Rajnikanth with all ur heart! ;)

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Dsntmatter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: sonia1000
WOWWW👏
It was just WOWWW. It wasn't boring at all.
Finally Sid came to know that Aryan is his child.
Yaar you take centuries to update PLZ do be so cruel to us...😆
I just want to know what would Sid do now...
This time you should continue as soon as possible... otherwise I'll be dead...
Once again awesome part and PLZ continue soon

Sonia!! really? it was WOW? well happy u liked it and enjoyed reading it!! Hope u like the coming bit too! Dont Die! My updates will die if my readers abandon me! lol