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vrsharma thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok then will wait for 2 night only. till that will read deewangi again and again
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the way Geet said dekhna ek din you will make this number one construction company bechara Maan dont know how he gonner full feel her excepectation magnificent pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the updates...plz continue soon Muskan!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
That was a great update!!!!!!!!!
Hmmm Geets father is also very good na.............
Loved the caring family,
Hmmm i loved the way you described bot each n every thing bot Maans study, it was simply wonderful,
This FF has all contains apart from love story.............
Hmmm Deewani ka eaction will be good, i wonder she would miss maan for Noida project.............
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Posted: 14 years ago

HI MUSKAN

I LOVED MAANS ENTRY IN THE OFFICE AND HIS ATTITUDE WAS AWESOME...I AM SURE KC WILL REACH NO.1 POSITION VERY SOON...LOVE UR WRITING...
LOVE
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Posted: 14 years ago


updates

part 24

chemistry btwn maneet is





Maan - I am joining KC today.

Daadi took him to Mds cabin & offered him to sit in her seat. He smiled at her sweetness. He held her from her shoulder & made her sit there. I need it to earn it daadi. Nothing comes easy. Daadi was pleased at his modesty. But promise you to relieve u soon of this.



Geet kept the hands in between the closing files. Yah kanhi nahi jaa rahen in a attitude more than Maan could offer.



WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? She cried ek tho main naraz hoon aur aap mujhe pe chilla rahen ho?
Maan immediately softened - tum kyun naraz ho?
Though he thought the answer was KC, but she never failed to surprise him with her deewangi
aaj aapka office main first day hain & you didn't even tell me cribbed making a baby face.
He was caught off guard he never expected that coming - woh main he fumbled
woh tho main by chance subha ghar gaye tho pata chala, then I went to gurudwara with mama & prayed for you. Dehko mama bhi aayen hain aapko all the best kahene ke liyan.


You still want to work here? he blurted out in shock. Aap ne aise kyun kaha she questioned. He was never good with words to express, how could he tell her he was ashamed. She didn't understand but still touched his soul by saying dehkna ek din you will make this number one construction company in delhi..kyun india nahi nahi..the whole ..maan closed her mouth...ho gaya..aur kuch mat bolna!!!



part 25


t was 2months since maan had joined office. He never missed a single day. He even began to spend quality time on Sundays. It was geet's summer holiday & she didn't go to HP


Geet peeped into the file curiously - yeh kya hain?
Maan - clients ka file
geet - how can you know about the people without meeting them...file main sab kuch hota hain kya, like their photo & all ..dehkavo mujhe
maan looked at her innocent question but realized it just taught him the first lesson of his business. He kissed her forehead.

When rano heard about his meeting with clients, she was little worried. She immediately called maan
rano - beta can please come home now
maan - ji
he never asked why & was there in 15mins worried & tensed.
Rano & geet were both dressed & waited near the car, the moment maan came, rano asked him to hop in. maan wondered what it was? - mama sab teehk hain na?
Rano - hain baba, tumhare client ka saath meeting hain na
maan nodded looking at geet like she was upto some thing, she gave a innocent look
rano - I wanted to pick some formal dresses for you, tum client ko jeans main thodi miloghe



mama tusi great ho tofa qaboool karoooooo


Mohinder - kya huwa?
Rano - dehko na maan ke liya hume formal dress lena hain
mohinder texting in his phone - umm
rano - we tried suit, but it is not looking nice
mohinder - for what occasion?
Rano - client meeting ke liyan
mohinder - umm..he thought for a while he picked up few formal slim fit shirts, light blue, white, colors with formal pants to match them. Keep it simple


meeting with MR Sharma is



waiting for next




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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan...
m back after a long break....
n its really nice to see that u hv started 2 more ffs...
thats amazing...
i've completed reading this one...
but hv a long way to go wid the others....
btw,this one is also very good...
liked their innocent love...
n of course,it is also filled wid ur creative touch...
loved yhis...
n thnx tat u didn't stop pm ing me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskaan,
u said, today u will update deewangi for sure. but still not
we are waiting for ur update.
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz yaar. update it
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally got updates on this storyy, missed so much, hai its so so nice to read after such a long time, you are as always the best in writing, hope the new year brings you lots of sucess.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaann!!!!
Update plzz
😃

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