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Hmm.. From where should I start ?
Well it's definitely amazing part, in sense of the way it was written.
Honestly, you have improved a lot and no doubt I could say you are amazing writer.
The way you have written have grace, decency and a beauty in it and all these things have given an mind blowing look to your story.
Each scene was written greatly.
Not much about story I should be commenting right now coz the couple haven't met yet.
That guy with whom she bumped twice was 'The Guy' ?
Update soon.. I will NOT be waiting. 🥱
Well it's definitely amazing part, in sense of the way it was written.
Honestly, you have improved a lot and no doubt I could say you are amazing writer.
The way you have written have grace, decency and a beauty in it and all these things have given an mind blowing look to your story.
Each scene was written greatly.
Not much about story I should be commenting right now coz the couple haven't met yet.
That guy with whom she bumped twice was 'The Guy' ?
Update soon.. I will NOT be waiting. 🥱
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