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nikiksgian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

update kar zappy ! jaldi jaldi !!1 :D :D :D

ur deadlines almost over nowww !PLEASEEEE!

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priya..

@priya..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: zephyrr
so i have put up another installment, and this one's long! so beware!

Rachna- when have we ever complained about length? All that drunken state and all they do is sleep? Please wake them from sleep in the middle of the night and give us some more mushy AR moments. Have a weird feeling that No family thing for armaan is going to bite him in behind and I don't have a very good feeling about horoscope matching either. Bhagakar shaadi karva do!!!

Will comment more once you complete the update.

Priya

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: kavyaa

oh

sorry to butt in but the part above is the whole part again from pg 115 PLUS the new installment . its the full part :) i thought i wud tell u to save any confusion 😊

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Congrats Zappy for the new thread. Can't believe we are in sixth part of it... Wish many more thread to come. Don't ever end the story 😉

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sjain

@sjain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

oppsss...I m so late updating my coment this time ..I almost forgot to tell u how I felt about the part..😆

first off all..CONGRATULATIONS zeffffrrrrr...for having 6th thread of TWOS...WOW..u so deserve to have many more like this...keep up the gud work and all the very best....u r one just BRILLIANT writer ..well I have said this a million times till now ..but wat to do ..u r worth lot more aprreciation dear ...luv uu😳

well...needless to say .. as usual rocked with ur writing this time too ..arm's outburst then his guilt ...ridz realization and everything.... I luved it absolutely...u r showing ups and downs in AR's relationship so perfectly...BEAUTIFUL...😛

physical gestures r not sufficient all the time ...words r important too....I was thrilled reading ridz confession the way she spoke to arm about her fears ...her childhood and deep secrets ..BRAVO... this will surely strengthen their bond..as now arm's insecurities or his stupid thoughts will die down ...

I njoyed the part wen ridz got to know about his trip to that "haunting place"..LOL...even I felt she will surely shout and will b mad at arm ...but her reaction was a shock for me...she was too sad but I luved the way she controlled the situation and herself knowing that arm was felling guilty and blaming himself ..awww...AR's LOVV is different , very different...luv themmm

I luved SAY WHAT YOU NEED TO SAY ...in spite of the fact that it had less romance...still it was 👏

update next one soonn..and plssss snatch sometime from ur traning and ur Mr.armaan for us..pleashhhhh..LOLZZ..(can't keep my hands off from writing something to tease u...kya karoon majboor hoon..tehe)😆😛

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-DavneetKaur-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

zappy congoo on the new thread...abt last update it was awesome as usual...and the title was soo apt...however strong armaan tries to potray himself he fails badly in front of riddhima...bcoz she knows him in and out like anything...she knws how much calm he shows himself on outerside ,she knows he must be a mess on innerside.....i hope armaan comes around soon and tells riddhima his insecurities...and then riddhima explain him that relationship is about two people and not one....it is abt them together...it is not abt u or me but our relationship is abt us...i hope armaan gets this fact straight soon

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nikiksgian

@nikiksgian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

zepppy !! wats the status ??

r yu updating ?? i wanna sleeepp

jaldii bolo !!!!

should i wait .... r yu updating or no ??

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sjain

@sjain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

zephhhhyyyy will u put installment of new part today ????

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caprigurl

@caprigurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

WOW
You know what the part about Riddhima felt like reading something about myself, or maybe most of us girls who tend to keep a lot inside us even in the best of times
Like really thoughtful
I kinda always wanted this side of the story to come out- how RIddhima had changed cos of him
And yes its really true- that he has no one else to claim him only made RIddhima's feelings for him even more intense- it might not be a totally correct way to state it but it was true in this story
She'd had her family to divide her time with
He had no one but her to shower all that love and time and feelings with

It wasnt a boring part man :O its deep parts like these that make it a Story instead of episodes strung together :P
Loved it !

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Beautiful update Rachna !

I am glad Armaan finally spoke up even though it was just for some parts of it.He has lived a lonely life and the only person he has is her so his insecurities of losing that one person is going to be there and it can be called wrong ,its human nature .Armaan like Riddhima has realised needs to know how special he is to her because between them he can only how he's been the one telling her everything from the good to the bad ,he feels he has taken her for granted and leaving her added to the pain he think he was already giving her.

I love how Riddhima's realised it this soon ,she needs to tell him how dependant she is on him too because he thinks he is the only one.

Beautifully written part and I love how you've gone into the depth's of what they feel,love and relations are about feelings more then anything else !

I am wondering what happens about the going to Singapore part in the story ? I just hope it doesnt cost them a misunderstanding !