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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheMelody.





Hahahah! Okay Tanvi I will PM you every time! Plomishhhh! 😉



😃 gudddd veryyy gud!!! jahapana khush hue!!!
oye u r online at dis time???

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@tanvi, haan I was online yesterday. Was reading ff's!;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ! awesome ! pls PM onnce yu write one more OS !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I Want Your Bad Romance - Part 1

EDIT- This OS has not been completed so you won't find Part 2 of it.


As the loud music played in the background a girl clad in a short black dress which reached up to her thighs, sat in the corner having numerous number of vodka shots. She looked at the bar man and frowned at him.


"Aur Do!", she commanded the bar man.


"Enough, Ridzyy! You've already had so many shots!", her friend screeched grabbing the vodka shot from her hand.


"Uhhhhhhh Muski, Let me drink! It's my day of freedom today", she moaned, feeling quite drowsy but pushing away the feeling.


"Ridzy, just because Abhi and you are not in a relationship anymore, it does not mean you will start drinking", Muskaan shouted, trying to make herself audible as the melodious music played in the background.


Ridhima sat on the tall stool, swaying to the music happily.


"It does mean that! I am a FREEEEEE BIRDDD today! I can do whatever I want!", Ridhima spoke smiling at the barman.


Muskaan glared at her angrily.


"These men are such dogs", Ridhima said trying to change the topic and smiling when she succeeded.


"Hmmmm that's the hundredth time you told me the same thing. Just forget him Ridzy. He's not worth your time.", she sighed.


"Pata hai Muski, I loved him sooooo much! But he turned out to be a bas***d like all the others", Ridhima said as anger took over her again.


"Haan Ridzy..But he turned out to be a jerk. It's good that it's all over between you too. Now can we please go home? It's getting late. Yeh toh acha hua ke hum apne parents ke saath nahi rehte. Warna soch humara haal kya hota?", spoke a frighted Muskaan.


"Naiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. I am NOT going ANYWHERE. I'm having fun here", Ridhima said, protesting, looking around the club.


Muskaan looked at her annoyed by her behaviour. It had been 2 hours since they'd been in the club and Ridhima would not budge from her place. She had broken up with Abhi and to decrease her sadness she had pulled Muskaan to the club. Whenever she'd be sad or angry she would simply stroll over to the club next to their flat and drink as if there's no tomorrow. Now, it was as if Ridhima had completely lost it. She kept repeating the same things over and over to Muskaan about her relationship without realising that she had already said the same thing earlier *courtesy* the 6 smirnoff's, 2 huge glasses of wine and not forgetting the numerous vodka shots. It was as if she was not going to stop at all today.


Breathing a heavy sigh, Muskaan looked at Ridhima who was now acting like a kid on the stool and was whining.


"Ridzy, Are you coming or not?!", Muskaan shouted, glaring at her.


"Uhhhhhhh..I'm having fun here Muskaan! Seeeee!" Ridhima rocked backwards and forwards on her chair as the bar man stared at her with a smirk on his face.


"Stop it Ridhima! Don't act like a small kid!Let's go", She quickly spoke as she realised the bar man staring at Ridhima from top to bottom.


Muskaan grabbed her hand and started walking towards the main door in a rush, but before she could leave, she bumped into someone. She looked at the person annoyed, however, her face expression changed completely after she realised who it is.


"OH MY GOD!!! Nikki TUM!!!", Muskaan shrieked, letting go of Ridhima's hand and hugging the girl. Ridhima looked at Muskaan who seemed to be overjoyed by meeting an old friend of hers.


Muskaan and Nikki got engrossed in a conversation whilst Ridhima held her head as it was feeling very heavy due to the drinks. She had already been introduced to Nikki by Muskaan even though she acted really weirdly. Muskaan was embarrassed of her drunken behaviour and ensured that she spoke as little as possible.


***


Scene Shifts to a different corner of the club


"So Armaan, who's your catch for tonight?", Rahul smirked, winking at him and then sipping on some wine.


"Mhhhhmmm That's what I'm in search for here", Armaan winked back at him, looking around the club and then placing his empty can of beer on the counter.


"Aha..I should have known that."


"Shut up you bas***d. I know you knew that already. I'm off to the dance floor, wanna join?" Armaan beamed at him.


" No you carry on. I'll finish off my wine and join you later. You have fun though..", Rahul laughed.


Armaan brushed his hair with his hand playfully and walked to the dance floor where a group of girls danced. He smiled in spite of himself and went over to them. He moved close to a girl who thought was the hottest out of the lot and danced really closely with her so that their bodies had no space in between. The girl turned around in his embrace and placed her hands around his neck smiling at him as if she was seducing him. They both continued to dance in the same position as Armaan enjoyed the whole dance.


On the other end, Ridhima was getting bored of sitting next to Nikki and Muskaan who were very much engrossed in their conversation. Finally, when Muskaan was no longer keeping an eye on Ridhima, she got up and walked to the dance floor drowsily. She held her head tightly and tried to walk to the barman, however, for that she had to walk through the dance floor. A very tired, upset, drowsy and dizzy Ridhima quickly rushed to the dance floor but before she could get off it, she bumped into someone hard. She felt her body crash into someone muscular and strong, and within a second she started to fall only to be held a strong pair of hands which grabbed her waist. His blue eyes met her green ones as she tried to open her eyes, owing to the drowsiness, and they both had an eye lock. He stared at the simplicity and innocence in her eyes, when suddenly she got up with a jerk realising the position they were in and that they were grabbing people's attention. Armaan still had his hands around her waist as she got up; he was mesmerised by her beauty.


"GET YOUR HANDS OFF ME, YOU bas***d!", Ridhima shouted raising her voice to make herself heard and gave him a fierce look.


Armaan looked at her shocked and appalled. HE had saved her from falling and she was swearing at HIM? He grabbed her waist even tighter and pulled her closer to himself.


"Who the hell do you think you are? I just SAVED you from collapsing and you're swearing at me?!"


"Ohh whatever! I know very well what you were trying to do. LET GO OF ME!", she shouted struggling to push him away from herself but in vain.


"Ohhh Really?? So what exactly did you think 'I was trying to do'?", He pulled her even more closer to himself so that their faces were just inches apart.


"Listen! I don't have time for your bullshit! Just LET GO OF ME!", She screamed.


"No. I won't let you go..I wanna dance with you", he said staring deeply into her green eyes once again.


"Huh? As if YOU can really dance?", she smirked still trying to get out of his hold as her head pained.


"I'm known as the best dancer in this club..Wanna bet?", he smirked back, winking at her.


"Oh really? And so am I! I'm the best dancer you will ever come across"


"So you take up the challenge then?", he questioned unconsciously hoping for the answer to be a 'yes'.


Ridhima felt her head wince in pain. She was unsure of what was happening. Her head felt really heavy and she herself felt dozy. Before Ridhima could respond, the song suddenly changed and she saw Armaan walking a little further away from her. No one around them watched them anymore as they were all too busy in their own worlds.


Oh, caught in a bad romance
Oh, caught in a bad romance

Rah, rah, ah, ah, ah
Roma, roma, ma
Gaga, ooh, la, la
Want your bad romance

Rah, rah, ah, ah, ah
Roma, roma, ma
Gaga, ooh la la
Want your bad romance

I want your ugly, I want your disease
I want your everything as long as it's free
I want your love
Love, love, love, I want your love


Armaan was now standing a few steps away from her and started dancing to the beats. He moved his legs and hands and looked at her cheekily, as if challenging her to go on. His dance went on for a good thirty seconds or so and then he pointed a finger at her, signalling to her that it's her turn now.



I want your drama, the touch of your hand
I want your leather studded kiss in the sand
I want your love
Love, love, love, I want your love
(Love, love, love, I want your love)

You know that I want you
And you know that I need you
I want it bad, bad romance

I want your love, and I want your revenge
You and me could write a bad romance
I want your love, and all your love is revenge
You and me could write a bad romanc
e


Ridhima watched him dance and was brought back out of trance as she saw him pointing a finger towards her. She got the signal and started swaying her body to the song. He watched her figure from top to bottom as she danced to the tune. Again, he was mesmerised by her milky white skin and her toned body curves. Little was Ridhima aware about his intense stares. Finally, it was her turn to point her finger at him as she stopped dancing.



Oh, caught in a bad romance
Oh, caught in a bad romance

Rah, rah, ah, ah, ah
Roma, roma, ma
Gaga, ooh la la
Want your bad romance

I want your horror, I want your design
'Cause you're a criminal as long as you're mine
I want your love
Love, love, love, I want your love

I want your psycho, your vertical stick
Want you in my rear window, baby, you're sick
I want your love
Love, love, love, I want your love
(Love, love, love, I want your l
ove)


As soon as he saw her finger pointed towards him, he again started to dance to the tune. He felt that the song was completely apt for the situation. Ridhima watched him dance and then gave him a thumbs down as if telling him that he was couldn't dance at all. He simply smirked at her and pointed towards her.



You know that I want you
And you know that I need you
('Cause I'm a freak, baby)
I want it bad, bad romance

I want your love, and I want your revenge
You and me could write a bad romance
I want your love, and all your love is revenge
You and me could write a bad romance

Oh, caught in a bad romance
Oh, caught in a bad romance


Ridhima danced to the music once again. She bent down a little as she did one of her moves which moved her dress up a little from her thighs. Armaan's eyes snapped up at that point as he observed her, which again, went unnoticed by Ridhima.



Rah, rah, ah, ah, ah
Roma, roma, ma
Gaga, ooh la la
Want your bad romance

Rah, rah, ah, ah, ah
Roma, roma, ma
Gaga, ooh la la
Want your bad romance

Walk, walk, fashion, baby
Work it, move that thing, crazy
Walk, walk, fashion, baby
Work it, move that thing, crazy

Walk, walk, fashion, baby
Work it, move that thing, crazy
Walk, walk, passion, baby
Work it, I'm a freak, bab
y


When Armaan could no longer hold the urge to go to her he strolled over and snaked her hand around her tiny waist, surprising Ridhima and sending a shiver down her spine. He placed his eyes on her hers, capturing her into a deeply intense eye lock again. Ridhima felt her head feeling lighter all of a sudden. It was as if the drowsiness and everything had vanished with just his one touch. She was jerked out of her thoughts when she sensed him grabbing her hand and placing it on his shoulder without breaking the eyelock.


I want your love, and I want your revenge
I want your love, I don't wanna be friends
J'ai ton amour et je veux ton revenge
J'ai ton amour, I don't wanna be friends

No, I don't wanna be friends
(Oh, caught in a bad romance)
I don't wanna be friends

Want your bad romance
(Oh, caught in a bad romance)
Want your bad romance

I want your love, and I want your revenge
You and me could write a bad romance
I want your love, and all your love is revenge
You and me could write a bad romance

Want your bad romance
(Oh, caught in a bad romance)
Want your bad romance
Want your bad romance
(Oh, caught in a bad romance)

Rah, rah, ah, ah, ah
Roma, roma, ma
Gaga, ooh la la
Want your bad romance


The two swayed to the music slowly, in each other's arms, unconscious of what they were doing, who they were with and where they were. Armaan started to come closer and closer to her, his eyes now positioned on her pink rosy lips. She looked at him nervously as he came nearer to her when all of a sudden she felt her head feeling really heavy once again and within a second she felt dizzy and fainted....


***


Hey Everyone.

I wrote this OS as this idea came in my mind. It actually didn't turn out the way I had expected in turns of concept/story but nevertheless I hope you liked it.

NOTE: There are two parts to this OS.

*Credit for the title: Lady Gaga ;)

Please do leave you comments behind as they are very encouraging!

Lots of Love,

Mel.

PS: Don't forget to press the link button!

IMP NOTICE: If you want a PM then please go to the previous page and 'LIKE' my fourth post. Thank you! 😳

Edited by TheMelody. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yayy!!!! Me first!!!

Anyways..lol...this OS is awesome!! Ridz is completley different here!!
LOL they had a dance competition??!!

Can't wait for the next part!
Edited by lil_mizz_shawty - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Mel..:) muah muah muahhhhhhh luv u baby for starting one more OS..:)😛😳
i luved this one.. Ridz is completely diff and Armaan is the same lol
but really everything is going pretty well and Armaan is getting mesmerized by Ridz but i hope he doesnt do smthg stupid...😕
but plzzz plzzzz update the next ;part soon...cant wait..;)
thanx for the pm and tc :)
Preet <3
Edited by cutiepreet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: lil_mizz_shawty

Yayy!!!! Me first!!!


Anyways..lol...this OS is awesome!! Ridz is completley different here!!
LOL they had a dance competition??!!

Can't wait for the next part!


Yay :) LOL. Yep, It's the first time I'm changing Ridhima's character. It felt a bit awkward at first but I really wanted to try something different instead of writing the same old simple Ridhima, lol.

Was the dance competition bad?! It was kinda random but I've always wanted AR to have a dance comp like that. 😆

Thanks..Will cont soon. 😳
PS: Please update your FF. I'm dying to read on. :|
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
awesome OS!
will be waiting 4 da next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
dat was awesome gal!!! u did a fantastic job!!! i dn know y u aint satisfied wid wat u wrote coz i luved it!!! really gud ya!!! plz plz plz cont soon!!!! i'll be waiting..... dying 2 read d next part!!!
thnks 4 d pm!!!
luv ya
tanvi
Edited by kavyaa - 14 years ago
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#20
that was awesome. why dont u continue it? its superb.
plz try to write further

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