FF: Maan&Geet: 120, Chandini's Rooftop - CLOSED

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

I am falling more and more in love with this story.....1 down four more to go...

its amazing how there are times in life when 1 day seems to stretch forever and then a whole week will go by in a matter of seconds...We have all been there😊

So what is it going to be for them-5 days that seem like eternity or 5 days that went by too fast ?

Love your word play, Hasini!

Thanks for the PM!

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Since it is dedication season...heres one of my favorites..I think it fits these two...Do let me know if you like it....

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FpO9MSEWpxc[/YOUTUBE]

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Manpreet

@Maneetkraze

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

I am trying to guess where this story will end up but no clue yet. Very suspenseful! Can't wait to read the next part:)

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@OfTheHeart

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

@hasini only u can make us feel alive of ur FFs.......... ur FF doesn't look like just written parts.. while reading them it looks like the everything is moving in front of our eyes like movies...

awesome update ...

pls update soon............

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

hey good one i liked it.

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

I have been repeating one thing again and again. Lets just concentrate about the Love part...Don't expect too much from the story...I'm actually getting scared. I'm not a seasoned writer to explore the dark side to the fullest...we will leave it to the others...and lets see what I can actually write.

This is a short one...I don't see it go beyond 25 - 35 for now...but don't know.

There is another one coming. This was actually sparked off by a good friend from this FF. She wrote some scenes and passed it on....and I have created story line for it.

When the time comes, we will open a thread for the Promo...and introduce my friend.

We have finalized the story. The scene draft will start once Rooftop reaches close to 15 and provided NY time completes by that time.

FF 3 is set in London....

Music...love...and a lot of chasing...

Maan actually swears....

And Geet hates rock....

Keep guessing the rest...😉

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maaneet2010

@maaneet2010

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Loving Rooftop just the way I love reading NYT..... 👏

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

hey great update dear.................
maaneet convo was strange n interesting too..............
maan wanna see geet face😆...........................
looking fwd......................

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

A very intriguing part!

She's Chandni to the whole world, but she's Geet, her own self unknowningly, to a man whom she's just met. No matter how hard she's trying she isn't able to keep a veil on Geet. She's taking care of him, she feels something when he undergoes even the slightest pain.

And Maan, who has the whole world at his beck and call is listening to this woman and is doing things that he would never even imagined doing!

What is it thats binding them-an unknown yet attractive force drawing them closer!

Hasini, I really enjoyed reading this part. It was an inquisitive update. Too eager to know how their story progresses further, how these 5 days changes Maan and Geet's worlds.

The way you've sketched the characters is amazing. Each dialogue very thoughtfully written-portraying the character through the dialogues.

Geet's pain, her frustation is so evident from her sarcastic way of talking.

And the part where she replies that if he wants to meet her he can meet her at the rooftop as Chandni shows that she's become really hard, has devoid herself of all the emotions, has enclosed Geet in a hard shell with the outer covering as Chandni for she knows that she has no escape from Chandni.

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Quite an interesting and intriguing update....you know dunno why but I'm being drawn to this FF...being drawn to NYT is something I can understand by this one...I've no idea at all...but all I know is I love this subject...negative and dark it may seem...but I love to tread to tread on paths people tend to avoid....time and again you say just concentrate on the Love part..but then dunno why I hope and wish that you explore the darker side of reality....I dunno why people don't wish to explore it...is it fear or something else that makes the writer conscious not to tread more on this subject ?? I seriously dunno so I'm not gonna have any request as such to explore that side....am happy with the way the story is paving.

Coming to the update...quite painful and even though bit amount of humor was hidden somewhere but it was all about pain...hidden or out in the open; both Maan and Geet.....loved the way Maan still calls her Geet and not Chandni.....and Geet's plea of not calling her by her real name....I was quite a lot absorbed and lost in the whole update....maybe I just love such stories....

Let's see what happens in the next 4 days....days also seem slow each passing second at times....

Keep writing ! Coz you write beautifully dear :)

Take Care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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