FF: Maan&Geet: 120, Chandini's Rooftop - CLOSED

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

Dream in a Dream.

Our guilts, pains, regrets, could have's, should have's have the tendancy to come and haunt us in our dreams.

His guilt - not being able to save his only sister.

His reality - Geet...unknowingly his heart has bonded with hers and vice versa.

Is his dream trying to tell him something - that maybe, just maybe he can forgive himself if he saves Geet from the hell she is in at the moment.

Maybe, just maybe he can live in peace, if he is able to save Geet.

In his dream he was not able to save either, because he is still confused I guess. One side he is still longing for his sister and other side a face has emerged in his subconscious Geet. His mind is still processing and maybe it is an indication that time has come to let go of Maansi and save Geet, because one is long gone and the other one will be gone too if action is not taken quickly.

Lets see how the next day shapes for both of them.

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

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DancinFireflies

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

firstly..... my apologies for not commenting for the last part... i have my exams going on... loved both of them... i'll give a proper comment after my exams finish...

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sejal1986

@sejal1986

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

First of all, your title reminds me the movie "Inception" dream in a dream , so a nice title, other thing you write so beautifully that I can't take off my eyes , and it was really nice that he spoke Geet name in his dream, who is this Maansi, his past girl I guess, story is going really well, but I want to see some Maanet moments, some cure scenes between them, update soon.

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Asha2010
First of all, your title reminds me the movie "Inception" dream in a dream , so a nice title, other thing you write so beautifully that I can't take off my eyes , and it was really nice that he spoke Geet name in his dream, who is this Maansi, his past girl I guess, story is going really well, but I want to see some Maanet moments, some cure scenes between them, update soon.

Sejal

Maansi was his sister...

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

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Posted: 14 years ago

#275

flashes of maan's past.. nice update :)

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anusha arja

@anushaarja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#276

nice one........👏👍🏼hasini......😊 maansi is maanz sis n she holds a special place in his heart...........now hez having an extension of his dream....... 😳😳hmmmmmmmm........ 😉😉giv him all d clues dat he need jus to noe dat itz love........😉😆hehe heee......😆😆😉 lub u........ thanx for d PM......🤗 jus imagine maan....... ufffff hot n dreamy........
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diotima

@diotima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

I love your writing. The story line is so different and your narration beautiful.

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

Hmm the dream is sure symbolic it was showing him trying to sage his sister I presume and then geet but I think it had a hidde meaning of his presence and what he would have to choose in the future and it includes geet as it seems to me that like how he couldn't be there for his sister but he wanted to save his sister he is there for geet and maybe save her from this trapped place which has taken her identity and made her chandni and awe poor maan he thought he hallucinated geet without her dupatta as she wore it again trying to wash out her image from his head as she believes that path is forbidden for them both to tread on anyways great update and sorry for late comment I was waiting for a peaceful time to read your ff 😊

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#279

Hasini...Please Please Please Pretty Please Update Chandini's rooftop...its beyond to wait any further..Im sure you re mking us wait coz u wanna thrill us wid an amazing update..lekin ab aur nahi...Intezaar ko bhi ab aiteraaz hain😲..itna intezaar karne se.. but besides all the above...I jus wanna applaude👏 you for ur amazing work...I love the Iyers and chandini's rooftop toooo much!
!😊Thank you once again for all ur updates and beautiful writing!

Mishti mohabbat❤️