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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#511

With stupid IF rationing likes it took me a good two minutes just to click like on your update....😆

Interesting update...I am guessing despite everything that has been said and done (alright, about to get done- you are all about the details aren't you) in this update- these two are no way close to being through...I am now waiting morning after in both the Kapoor household and the Thalia/Shanky bedroom!

Fab update, Devi!

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#512

haii..ok i have to admit im starting to like shashank and thalia now..lol

shashank is really perceptive when it comes to shiv/gauri but is as blind as a bat when it comes to thalia..lol

hopefully this will be the start of a wonderful relationship ⭐️

awesome update..

Edited by shiv-gauri4eva - 14 years ago

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#513

Oh wow! Shanky is too stubborn hun! Atleast shiv didnt leave gauri even whn she protestd! But i love it, she shld request hm to help her as she need to realise it always been hm n nobodyelse.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: -pixie-
With stupid IF rationing likes it too me a good two minutes just to click like on your update....😆

Interesting update...I am guessing despite everything that has been said and done (alright, about to get done- you are all about the details aren't you) in this update- these two are no way close to being through...I am now waiting morning after in both the Kapoor household and the Thalia/Shanky bedroom!

Fab update, Devi!

This is what I get when I try to "like" your post "Sorry ! You can't like same User's post more than 10 times in last 24 hours."

IF has officially lost its marbles!!

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#515

Omg same here for mee not fair^^^^^^^^

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#516

I was here...I shall be back tomorrow to hit like 😆

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311578

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#517

Now you know I read it and attempted to like it...but IF is preventing me to like it....because it knows I loved it....🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: -pixie-

I am now waiting morning after in both the Kapoor household and the Thalia/Shanky bedroom!

Would i be considered a perv if i said,
i still wana see more foreplay between Thalia and Shanky 🤔 🤣

By the way Devi, i think you're one of the best writers when it somes to writing steamy scenes,trust me some of the fics on this forum border on hard po*n 😕 it's kinda gross!

But with you it's ..... tastefully written 👏

Edited by Lip-a-Licious - 14 years ago

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#519

It was a beautiful update Devi.

Simply blissful.

Thanks

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Now you know I read it and attempted to like it...but IF is preventing me to like it....because it knows I loved it....🤣

OMG>.. i m facing the same issues.... why IF is doing this???? 😡

waiting for next update.... pls cont soon