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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#331

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes yes yes yes yes yes Shaan aka Shashank KISSED her and toooo bad for thalia she thought it was a dream!!!!!!!!!!! hahaha i'm beginning to think theres a huge load of UST between these two - and oh my my

Shiv and Gauri - patch that up pleaseeeeeeeee

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wilddevil2010

@wilddevil2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#332

I loved this part

ST's relation is far more complicated than SG's and 2 b honest very interesting though I really miss Gauri.

T's insistence that d whole thing was a dream and her refusal 2 open her eyes was outstanding. It shows her stubborn reluctance 2 accept her feelings for Shaan.

Both ST don't want 2 upset d strange balance their relation has. Lets c if d kiss would upset it.

Pls continue soon
P.S. G should atleast try 2 trust Shiv

Edited by wilddevil2010 - 14 years ago

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#333

Your second leads seem to come out as the more complicated, intense and ..umm...deep(?) characters.

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Heyy Devi,

wow intense update, eh?....as if shiv gauri weren't complicated enough, here come ST!!😆

but i really lovee the portrayal of the different facets of relationships in your ffs....they always make me wonder about what constitutes a relationship and just stuff in general!😳

gauri doesn't wanna talk to him, shiv doesn't wanna explain, thalia thinks its a dream and shashank is just thinking as usual.....oh boy, kya drama hain😆

really hope SG makeup soon!

fab update!

pweez do continue soon!

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#335

I think now i enjoy thalia n shashank part too, d depth of their relationshp is beyond love or lust, it jst tat they r companions bt stil hv'nt acceptd d fact.

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#336

I loved how Lia n Shaan's relationship is going forward...v complex but still @ the end I am certain they will meet at one point.

Gauri...I m trying to figure out why she decided to go to her parents....it is not that she is scared or anything or cannot handle him.......

What it to torture Shiv.....or maybe she is vulnerable now??

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#337

' for once, he wished that she would just trust him rather than jump to conclusions in her temper.

While I loved the second part of the update, the first part intrigued me. So many emotions. Gauri, I'm sure, wishes she could trust Shiv, and Shiv is now wishing she would trust him. The concept of trust seems to be hard for these two to work out.

I am hoping that after a good nights rest, and in light of 'the kiss', Gauri will rethink trying to use Shashank to get back at Shiv. Unless Shashank thinks that Gauri is his only chance of getting Thalia out of his system. Oh dear, this is not looking good. I need to stop over thinking this, don't I? 😆

Please update sooner than later and put me out of my misery!

Edited by saomom - 14 years ago

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#338

wohoooo they kissed... 😆
lovely update Devi 👏

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Maarrriiiam...Mariam :-)

@MaankiMariam

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#339

omg it was shashank!!!!!!! I knew it 😆 ....xxx

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#340

YAY..im starting to like thalia and shashank so im glad that their love story is progressing..even if she thinks its in a dream...shiv and gauris on the other hand is slowing down a bit..lol..hopefully it will be a minor bump in an other wise smooth journey...hehe..love ur work..continue soon plz

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