Promise and Pyar FF#1 Part 1-310 Page1-145

First Previous

Page

101

Next Last

Frequent Posters

GurruKiDeewani-

@GurruKiDeewani-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#581

pehlay bhai ab bhabhi geet beta aap kai iraday kia hain husband kai elawa sab keh kai pukar lo becharay maan ko 🤣🤣 🤣

checking the tiles at night 🤣🤣🤣

geet is surly one piece in the entire world and that one piece only belongs to maan 🤣🤣🤣

maaan : i dont trust you i have to protect myself from you oh gosh maan u r toooooooo good 🤣🤣🤣

awwwwwwwwww maan wiping her tears sho swweeeetttttt 😍😍😍

when he said geet i hate tears mujhay woh line yaad aagai "pushpa i hate tears ray" 🤣🤣🤣

maan sahi kehta hai YEH LARKI MUJHAY PAGAL KARDAI GI and YEH LARKI SACH MUCH PAGAL HAI 🤣🤣🤣

Quote

namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#582

simply mindblowing....loved all the parts to the core...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

tonyahk

@tonyahk

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: sindu555
3 - 4 days..... u're kidding me right? "say yes" "say yes" "say yes" "say yes"

am totally hooked on ur FF .. such looonng wait will be a killer

plzz update daily .. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

luv,

Sana

hi sana,
i'll try my level best to update atleast 2-3 parts daily.but i'm not sure whether i can do tht. sorry yaar.

i will post 2 or 3 parts in a short while.

have a nice day

Quote

tonyahk

@tonyahk

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#584

Part 200
next morning
G:(wakes up,still lying on d bed&stares@maan)
M:(sleeping peacefully)
Geet is still staring @ him & remembers his words 'i hate ur tears' & d scene of maan wiping her tears. she couldn't take her eyes off him & lost in him
G:(selftalk)he looks very cute while sleeping.(comes outta d trance&selftalk)geet ye tum kya soch rahi hai.pagal hogayi kya?(gets down from d bed&goes2wash room)
M:(wakes up after few minutes&looking 4 geet)
G:(after shower comes out¬ices maan sitting on d bed)
M:geet
G:...(selftalk)hey babaji ye mujhe kya hogaya?y i'm so scared 2 talk 2 him?

Quote

tonyahk

@tonyahk

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#585

Part 201
M:geett!
G:...
M:(wonders)ye itni chup?(calls again)geet
G:(comes outta selfthought)ji sir
M:good morning
G:(fumbling)haan good night sir
M:good night?
G:ji
M:tume pagal hogayi kya?
G:ji
M:(selftalk)i think,last night when she fell onto d floor her head got injured.i should take her 2 hospital
M:geet,tum jaldi thayar hojao.i'll take u 2 hospital
G:ji(realises wht she is doing&shoughts)nai.y should i go 2 hospital?
M:u only said na u have gone mad
G:nai nai yesa kuch nai.mein bilkul teek hu
M:tht is y now u said 'good night'?
G:wo wo...haan! lastnight i forgot 2 say.so i said now

Quote

vrsharma

@vrsharma

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#586

G:wo wo...haan! lastnight i forgot 2 say.so i said now

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Quote

tonyahk

@tonyahk

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#587

Part 202
M:(selftalk)ye larki such much pagal hai aur ye mujhe pagal kardegi(leaves 4 washroom)
G:(selftalk)geet,don't listen 2 him.he is trying 2 send u 2 mental hospital.mein bilkul teek hu.hena babaji?(gets ready&goes downstairs)

maneet & dadi r in living room
dadi:(having coffee&observing maneet carefully)
G:(after a long battle came back 2 her normal self& glancing newspaper)
M:(checking emails)
dadi:(very curious 2 know d result of DM#2 &plans a prank&calls CID Chandu)
dadi:chandu
chandu:ji madam
dadi:aap ek kam kejiye.shift d extra pillows from maan's room 2 my room
maneet shocked.

Quote

vrsharma

@vrsharma

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#588

Maaneet: Babaji, Why dadima is going behind us and our room. why can't she leave us and our room like the way it is😲

Quote

ramahesh

@ramahesh

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#589

so nice ,cute yaar

🤣🤣

Quote

tonyahk

@tonyahk

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#590

Part 203
chandu:(very happy)ji madam,i will do it now itself(runs 2 maneet room)
(buddies,i donno y chandu is always so happy 2 see maan in trouble.i guess, in his previous births maan should have committed an unforgivable sin aginst chandu.i'm wondering, wht is tht sin???pl. help me)
M:(angry)chandu ruko
chandu:nai sir i should obey madam's order(starts 2 run again)
M:dadima,ye aap kya kar rahe hai?now tell him 2 stop
dadi:(hides her smile&ask chandu 2stop)
Chandu:(stops with disappointment)
M:(relieved)dadima aakir aap kya chathi hai?
dadi:pillows
G:(playing with her dupatta in tension)