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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
wowwww awesomeee promo heheh very funny cant wait now lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
tht was sooooooo amazingggg promo just love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
hhahha osam promo do conitnue sooon thanks for pmsss
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lovvvvvvvely promo
cont sooon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsomeee keep it up...
continuee soonn..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part-85 the next morning.....sanjeevani.
mayank comes to the locker room n sees only gunjan...nupur wasnt there...
m=hi gunjan..
g=heyyyy!!!! kaise ho???
m=im fine...nupur kaha ha??
g=kaal itni raatko ghar ayi to di subhah uth nahi payi..usne kaha ha ke thora latese ayegi.
m=aur duty???
g=di ki duty aj 11 bajese ha...wase mayank kaal di tumhari bari tareef karrahithi.
m=accha?? tareef ya burai???
g=are nahi...woh to tumhari tareef karte karte sogayi..ke tumne kitni acchi date organize kia....
m=wase ek sach kahu???
g=kya???
m=nupur ko mat batana plzz...
g=promise...pakka wala..
m=date organize karneme mujhe samrat ne help kia tha..
g=what??
m=ha usine mujhe ye idea dia tha ke mujhe nupur ko khush karnekeliye kuch karna chahiye. aur tabhi mere dimag me ye idea aya...to asli credit to sam ko jata ha.. itna brilliant idea sochne keliye..
g=rite....
m=aur to aur..usna apna fav guitar mujhe dia bajanekeliye..ma to piano accha bajata hu.. par nupur ko piano pasand nahi ha....
g=di ko guitars acche lagte ha..
m=isiliye usne mujhe thora bohot bajana sikha dia..sirf woh ddlj wala tune.. uske baad ma jab duty me tha mere lie set bana dia..aur jab meri duty khatam hui to bakika kaam hum donone milke kia...to..is hisab se sam ko zydad credit milna chahiye na...par nupur..
g=mayank..koi baat nahii..ek baat ab ma kahu???
m=kya??
g=di ko ye baat pata ha ke ye sara plan...idea..sab samrat ka tha...usine tumhari help ki..
m=kya?? par kaise??
g=kaal jab tum di ko drop karne aye the na..to di andaar ake dekha ke samrat mere sath ha. actually woh shamse mere sath time spend karraha tha...phir jab di ayi to unhone bhi samrat ke sath gappe larana shuru kardiya.....phir bohot dertak hum teenone baate ki... tabhi di ne samrat se pucha...to samrat jhoot nahi bolpaya aur usne sach kaha..
mayank became sad
g-lekin di ne ek aur baat bataya..
m=kya???
g=yehi ke..chahe jisne bhi ye sab plan kyu na kia ho..... dil se aur maan se to tumnehi ye sab kia tha na..di keliye?? di isise bohot khush thi..kyuki tumne ajtak kabhi guitar nahi bajaya aur nahi sikha...par di ke liye bajaya... samrat ne bataya tum films nahi dekhte..par di keliye tumne ek raat jagge ddlj dekha.... raj ki tarah kapde pehne di ko impress karnekeliye... tumhe ma kya batau ke di itni khush thi.... jaise unhone kaal srk ke date kia hooo...
m=sach???
g=muchhh..aur ek baat kahu??
m=kaho na..
g=di ko na ese surprises dete rehna..theek ha??
m=koshish karunga.....
"sabhi interns nurse station pe report kare"
g=chalo...humare lie bulawa agaya ha...
m=ha chalo....
gunjan n mayank comes for reporting.
majan=gud morning dr riddhima
r=morning..dr mayank aj apki duty icu me ha.
m=ok mam...
r=aur dr gunjan..apki duty path lab me ha.
ar=dr nupur kaha ha????
g=sir...dr nupur ki duty aj late se ha..unhone do din overtime duty ki thi..
r=dr gunjan..kya ap mujhe bata sakti ha dr nupur kal kyu nahi ayi???
g=mam...woh..darasal unki tabyat thori kharab thi...to
r=tabyat kharab tha...to ek call to karhi sakti thi..ya phir ek application to dehi sakti thina???
m=mam...par...
r=anyways...dr nupur sehi shayed mujhe baat karni paregi....filhaal ap dono apni duites me jayiye...
g=mam...ek sawal tha...
r=yes.
g=dr samrat ka xam kab ha???
ar=kaal...kaal board se sare log ayenge...to kaal ap sabko early ana parega..
m=ok sir.
r=now resume ur duites
gunjan n mayank went to there duites.
r=aur ab tum bhi apni surgery me jao.
ar=kya yaar riddhima interns ke sath reh reh kar tum mujhpar bhi hukum chalene lagi ho...bhulo mat ma tumse senior ho.
r=senior my fooot....filhaal ma tumhe ek patniki hesiat se kehrahiho...
ar=yaar tum abhibi gussa ho....
r=kyu na ho..tumne meri behen par ilzaam lagaya ek baar nahi do do baar.. aur uparse bina kisi sabut ke....armaan tumhara dimag na pehleshi kharab ha...jab hum interns the.. tabhibi tum humesha rahul aur muskaan ko leke ulta sidha kehte the...
ar=end me shadi hui na??? pyaar hua na??? riddhima..love ke bareme mujhse panga mat lo.. im the love guru...
r=accha?? love guru..ek kaam karo... ye doctor ka kaam chodke..love guru ka dhanda shuru kardooo..samjhe??? aur ab mere piche mat ana....moveee!!!!!
ar=are yaar...ye basket jab gussa hoti ha matlab mera kharab time shuru hota ha.. isse manana matlab saat samundar par karna ha..
scene shifts
armaan comes to the locker room....there was noone.....armaan comes to the locker of gunjan....he opens it..n sees many files...n a cute teddy bear...he takes it but there wasnt no name written...then he takes the other files...meanwhile..nupur comes to the locker room...she sees armaan doing something in gunjans locker..she was confused..then called him.
n=jijuuu!!!!
armaan was shocked..he quickly kept the files n papers n turned around....he was sweating.
n=kya hua jiju???? ap ese mujhe kyu dekh rahehe jaiseki ma koi bhoot hu??
ar=ha...
n=kya??
ar=mera matlab...woh tumne achanakse mujhe bulaya... to ma ghabra gaya....
n=oh accha..par jiju ap yaha kya karraheho??? aur kya dhund raheha gunjan ke locker me???
ar=ab..bb....b..woh nupur...kya hana ke mane gunjan ko ek file rakhne ko dia tha..mere desk pe par ab nahi ha....mujhe laga ke gunjan ne shayed apne locker me rakha ha...to bas...wahi dhundne aya tha...
n=par jiju..apne gunjanse pucha???
ar=woh duty me busy ha na..aur tum to janti ho ke tumhari di ko duty me koi bhi laparwahi ya disturbance pasan nahi ha..aur wase ye ek file hi to ha..to ma khud hi lene agaya...
n=oh..accha..ma apki help karti hu...
ar=nahi...yaha nahi ha..mane dekh lia..koi baat nahi ma reception me dekhta hu...its ok..
n=ok..bye..
ar=bye....
armaan leaves from there..nupur was feeling some doubt seeing his reaction....
ar(to himself)=kuch saboot to nahi mila..par ho na ho...woh teddy gunjan ko uske lover ne hi dia ha....
n(to herself)=ye jiju..aj bhi gunjan ke locker me?? usdin bhi woh locker room me jab aye the.. to gunjan ke locker mehi kuch dhundneki koshish karrahehthe...par kya??? tu bhi na nupur..din bar din detective hoti jarahiha.....chal duty pe lag ja
scene shifts
samrat was in his room..making his preparation.....but he was feeling bore too.... because he hadnt talk to gunjan since the morning..n now it was afternoon..he was thinking of calling him.. when gunjan called him..
g=hi...
s=tumhari bari lambi umar ha..
g=kya???
s=matlab ke...ma abhi abhi tumhe call karnehi wala tha par usse pehle tumne khud mujhe call karliya..
g=samrat din bhar agar mere bareme sochte ho...to parhai kab karte ho?? yaad ha na ke kaal tumhara xam ha..aur tumhe sabko piche chodke..phirse ekdam pehleki tarah join karna ha.
s=i no yaar...subhah se lekar..abtak bina kuch khaye peeye break ke bina parraha hu..aur uparse tumne subhahse call bhi nahi kia...maan to mera tumhare sath hi rehta ha na..
g=samrat..chup chap man lagake parhai karo...
s=agar itnahi khayal ha..to meri teacher plzz ake mujhe parhao na..
g=oooohh...ghar ake?? taki tum parhai chodke mere sath romance karo???
s=are..tum mujhe itni acchese kaise janti ho..meri haar baat bina bole samajh jati ho....
g=tumhare sangaatkahi asar ha....
s=accha???
nupur comes to gunjan.
n=gunjan chal na...lunch karte ha.
g=ha ek minute..
s=ek minute kyu???
g=are ek minute ke baad..ma..
n=gunjan chalna...mujhe bohot bhook lagi ha...chal na..koi ek minute nahii..
g=ha par..
s=chashmish...ekto itni derse phone kia ha...aur uparse itni jaldi phone rakhna chahti ho???
g=nahi..ma bas..
n=gunjan tujhe bhook nahi lagi????
g=ha...
s=kya??? tum mujhse baat nahi karna chahti???
g=ha par...
n=ha ha karrahiha to chal na..
g=ufoooo ek minuteee!!!!!!!!!!!!
n=kya hua???
s=kya hya???
g=di..ye phone pakro aur baat karooo...ma cafe me jarahihu...
she give the phone to nupur
n=hello...
s=nupur??
n=samrat?? tum...to matlab gunjan tumse baat karrahithi..mujhe laga..
s=yaar tum humesha kabab me haddi ban jati ho..ek to hospitalme nahi asakta.. phone pe baat karta hu...to humesha tum beech me ajati ho...
n=accha?? ma kabab me haddi..theek ha jaoo..abse gunjan ko tumhare sath date pe janekeliye ma nahi manane walii..
s=are yaar..tum to naraz hogayiii...mazak tha..
n=wase mere pyaar samrat..mane bhi kaha sach kaha?? agar apko mazak karna ata ha... to thori masti to hum bhi karlete hana...
s=accha??? chalo..chashmish ek baat boldena ke aj sham mujhe tumhare gharke samne wale park me mile...
n=shamko??
s=plzz nupur...ma usse jaldi drop kardunga..
n=theek ha baba..tum uske sath ho to theek ha..aur kuch???
s=ha..ek aur msg...
n=kya???
s=i love u...
n=what??????
s=tumhe nahi....chashmish ko..
n=oh sorryy...theek ha dedungii..bye
s=bye
cafe
m=are gunjan tum akeli?? nupur kaha ha??
g=arahiha..
n=yaha hu ma...ye le tera phone..
g=thanks..
n=tere lie samrat ne do do msgs chora ha..
m=tum kya koi answering machine ban gayi ho????
n=very funnnyy.....
g=kya bola???
n=tujhe aj sham duty ke baad humare gharke samne wale park me milneko kaha ha...
g=shamko??? par di...
n=tu ghabra mat..woh tujhe drop kardega...
m=aur dusra????
n=yehi ke...i love u..
gunjan starts blushing..
m=aye hayy!!!! kya baat ha...
n=wase mayank..kya tum kabhi gunjan ke hatho mere lie ese msg bhejoge???
m=kyu?? tumto har din samnehi rehti ho.....to gunjan se kehke kyu bhijwaunga????
n=nahi bass esehi pucha....
m=ummm...sochungaa.
n=tum sochtehi raho..tabtak meri jawani khatam..aur tab humare bacchose ye kehelwana...
m=are tum to serious hogayii..
n=to aur kya karu??? tum humesha..
g=di...mayank..plzz...ab tum dono larna mat shuru karooo..ok???har baat pe larna.. aur di is baar tumne shuru kia..mayank ne to sirf mazak kia..
n=wah!!!! tu to abhise isski sali bangayii..
m=kehte hana...sali adhi gharwali ha...
g=mayank...agar mar khaneka irada nahi ha..to sorry kehdooo..
m=accha baba....(holds his ears) sorryyy..
n(smiling)=its ok..my sweetuuu....by god...gunjan tujhe pata ha...ma jabhibi ese gussa hoti hu na..to mayank mujhe esehi itni sweetly sorry kehta ha...jaise mujhse ek baccheki tarah candy mangta hoo..
m=ha ha...very funnyy....
g=accha ma chalti hu..
n=kaha chali??
g=tum love birds ko akela chod deti hu..
m=are gunjan..betho na..
g=are mazak karrahihuu..mujhe locker room me jana ha.....kuch kaam ha..
n=oohhhhooohh...akele akele apne sam se baat karni ha..
g=di....plzz...ma apa mobile leke ati hu..ap log lunch order kijiye..
m=ok..
gunjan comes out of the cafe...n goes to the locker room...n calls samrat.
s=ha chashmish bolo.
g=kya karraheho??
s=kuch nahi...bass kalki preparation lerahahu..kyu???
g=nahi..tumne kuch khaya nahi na subhah se??
s=tumhe kaise pata????
g=bass pata chal gaya..accha sabse pehle..kuch khalo...phir bakiki parhai..
s=aretum meri chinta mat karooo..ma khalunga..wase nupur ne msg dia na??
g=ha dia ha..ma ajaungii....
s=aur woh dusra wala??? uska reply nahi dogi?????
g=samrat tum bhi na..kaal exam ha aur tum..
s=plzz...ek baar kehdona..mera lucky charm......plzz..
g=accha theke ha...i love u..ab khush???
s=ab samjho..ma exam me pass hogaya...
g=bye.
s=bye..see u...
gunjan keeps the line...
g=shamko..park me....gr88!!!!
she comes out of the locker room...armaan overhears her..
ar=park me?? aj to usko ma pakadkehi rahungaa...
PRECAP: r=haaar sal sanjeevani me bb match hota ha..
n=ha mam...mane dekha ha..
r=is baar bhi hoga..do teams..meri team..aur dr armaan ki team.....
m=mam.....hum zarur jeetengee.....aur dr armaan ki team haregiii....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Very Cute Update.Locker scene , Cafe scene and Phone convo. was too Good. Do Update soon....Thanx 4 PM.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
a very cute update!!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Wowww so cuteeee update hayeee sajan convo loveee it n hayeee dey gonna meet in park yayyyy can't wait now do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Wao awsm updt yar.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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