Maaneet SS:~Mujhse Shaadi Karogi?~UPD: pg 49 - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update dear....loved both of the parts....plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sooooooooooooo sweet!!!!
Maan loves geet.
Loveee geet's dress.
Continue soonnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it very well written
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yaar plzzz update soon just luved it
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Hey all you wonderful people!!!! I'm back!!

Part 6:

"Stop staring at me! This isn't funny you ass!!" she said furious.

"I'm still waiting for an answer" he said staring intently at her.

"CHUP!!!" she said running a frustrated hand through her hair.

"Fine, phir yahan kyun behthi ho mere paas, hospital main?" he said amused.

"Pagal hoon isliye!! Tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho!? Kisi bhi lardki ko tum aise haasil kar lo gay?!" she said looking away almost crying but fuming.

He jerked her hand forward.

She gasped looking at him.

"I love you" he said his breath tickled her eyes.

That made her blink and the tears she wanted to stop came running down on their own.

"I'm sorry! I know I was being stupid magar tum mera yakeen nahi kar rahi thi…….." he started only to be cut-off.

"There are more ways of making one trust" she said backing up.

He pulled her again staring at her and with the other hand he pressed the button to elevate the bed.

He moved her closer and she had no choice but to move on the bed sitting beside him now.

He moved her closer towards his face.

"I'm sorry. This will never happen again. I promise" he said blowing on her cheeks gently.

She closed her eyes as his breath cooled the tears on her cheeks.

She felt his lips on her cheek caressing them. Her eyes remained shut.

He kissed her eyelids that were moist.

He moved back resting his head on the pillow.

She opened her eyes slowly and wiped her tears with a tissue.

"This should never happen again!" she said strictly.

He was about to scream in joy but she put a hand on his mouth.

"That doesn't mean I'm necessarily yours now" she said as she saw his expression fade.

"You care about me, you love me but won't admit it because you have memorized saying no!!!" he said angry now.

"SO!!!!! SO WHAT!!" she said angrier.

She stopped and put a hand on her mouth and he looked surprised.

"These things happen at this age but you'll forget me, this doesn't last Maan" she said softly.

"Why are you so scared of that, just trust" he said kissing her hand.

"If I trust, what's the guarantee you won't change your mind. Aisa hi karte ho tum lardke" she said looking away sad.

"No, I won't I love you!! And only YOU!!" he said frustrated.

She hugged him.

He hugged her back happiness dominating anger.

"Main tumhara yakeen kar leti hoon!" she said softly into his chest.

He kissed her forehead.

"I love you!" he said looking into her eyes.

"I think I need a bit more time for those strong feelings" she said smiling.

"I can wait forever"

"Okay no more cheesiness!! Pehle hi tumne bohat idiotness dikhai hai!" she said irritated.

He laughed.

Just then the door opened.

"Oye Maan tune toh!! UFF!!!" Rohan said rushing in.

"Yaar kisi aur ko nahi pata chalna chahiyay" Raj said.

"Haan you know the Gurukul thing right?" Tarun said patting Maan's shoulder.

"Uff mujhay nahi pata that um itne serious ho!?" Tanisha said shocked and casually resting her elbow on Raj's shoulder.

Raj stiffened.

"Are you okay?" Sonia said giving a hug to Geet but talking to Maan.

"Fine!" Maan said holding Geet's hand.

"Shukar hai is bechare ko tune chance de diya!!" Mahi said entering.

Tarun smiled at her.

"Waise dude you've got the nerve. Aur main kisi se bhi impress nahi hoti magar wow!" Mahi said giving Maan a wink.

Rohan laughed at Tarun's jelousy.

The nurse entered.

"Aap main se patient ke saath sirf ek reh sakta hai"

"Obviously tum dono ab saath rehna chahoo gay……hum chalte hain" Tarun said smiling.

"Hum chalain?!" Rohan said nudging a scared Sonia's shoulder.

"Haan hum bhi, vaise bhi Raj tumne kaha tha you're gunna get me that bunny" Tanisha said cutely as Raj nodded freaked out.

Everyone laughed and exited.

"So, Angel!? Ab kya plan hai?" Maan said sweetly.

"Pehle theek ho jaao phir plan khud pata chal jaaye ga!" Geet said grabbing a magazine.

"Tumhe pata hai holi aa rahi hai?"

"Haan ohmygosh! I can't wait!! Uff!! Tum pehle theek to ho jaao! Warna hum holi kaise khalain gay?" she said sweetly.

"Tum mere saath raho gi toh kaise theek nahi hoon ga!?" he said kissing her hand again.

(2 weeks later)

"Maan ko dekha hai tumne?" Geet said tapping Raj's shoulder.

"I think woh Nakul chacha se milne gaya hai"

Nakul was the gatekeeper.

She smiled and went in the direction.

She saw Maan giving Nakul money. She walked closer.

"Aap apni beti ki ache se shaadi karna….aur please agar aapko aur paison ki zaroorat ho toh PLEASE maang lijiye ga" Maan said and Nakul's eyes filled up.

Geet saw and she smiled proudly.

Nakul gave Maan an ashirwaad.

Geet walked up to him.

"Hey tum kab aayi?" Maan said as they walked outside.

"That was sweet, really. Tum aisa kar sakte ho maine kabhi nahi socha tha" she said kissing him on the cheek.

"Tum agar mujhe har baar kiss karo gi toh main aise karne ke liye hamesha tayyar hoon" he said surprised at her gesture.

"Uff ho!! Mujhay holi ke liye apna dupatta shop se pick karna hai" she said worried.

"Let's go!" he said walking behind her.

As she chose the dupatta he saw chudriyaan that matched with her green dupatta.

"Us lardki ke size ki yeh wali churiyaan de dain" he said to the shopkeeper quietly so she wouldn't hear.

The shopkeeper quietly gave them to him and wrapped it in a newspaper winking.

"Thanks" Maan said.

The shopkeeper had wrapped them in newspaper so Geet couldn't tell what it was.

"Chalain?" Maan said walking over to Geet.

"Nazar nahi aa raha main wait kar rahi hoon" she said with attitude.

"Sorry Angel main bhool gaya tha you're always cranky!"

"Kisne kaha tha mere peeche anne ke liye?" she said arguing evenly.

"If you yell one more time I swear I'll kiss you right here" he said whispering.

She moved away glaring at him.

He smirked amused at her response.

Geet was getting ready and she heard a knock.

He came in smiling.

"Ab kya hai?" she said curious.

He took her wrist and started putting the churdiyaan on her.

She looked at him in awe.

"Mere liye, tum kitne sweet ho" she said blushing.

"I love you Angel and you look gorgeous" he said kissing her jaw line.

She gave him a hug.

The guys waited outside secretly for the girls.

"Yaar Tanisha mujhe pata nahi kya kare gi!?" Raj said whispering scared.

"Atleast Tanisha kuch karti to hai Sonia to kuch bhi nahi karti" Rohan said disappointed.

"Tu jo bohat kuch karta hai!" Tarun said snickering.

"Mahi jab tujhay mare gi then I'll see who's laughing!!" Rohan said.

"Shhhhh there coming, ready……." Said Maan.

"Yaar mere tank pe koi rang toh nahi hai?" Mahi said as Tarun gawked at her.

Mahi wore a white tank top with golden sparkles and white shorts. Her hair was tied into a high-pony tail and she wore a tiny gold headband, sporty chic.

Tanisha wore a plain white dress with straps that hung just above her knees and her hair waved.

Sonia wore a white fitted anarkali with a pink dupatta, her hair was into a loose braid.

Geet wore a white churidaar with a green dupatta and her hair pin straight.

Seeing all this Rohan whistled.

"Man they look hot!! Especially Sonia" Rohan said gawking.

Maan took a deep breath.

"1….2….3….NOW!!"

And all the boys threw red colour on the girls.

Mahi saw Tarun laughing and grabbed a broom from the man sweeping the floor, and ran after him.

Sonia stood stunned as Rohan went over and teased her.

Tanisha stood there smirking and indicated with her finger for Raj to come over.

"Rang dena" she demanded.

"Ab apne upar rang lagaoo, aur ache se lagana" she said watching him do so.

Geet went over and rubbed the colour all over Maan's face.

"Hey!! Maine itna toh nahi lagaya!!?" he said laughing.

"So, I don't care!?" she said throwing coloured water on him and he ran after her with water.

"STOP!!! MAAAN!!! BAS!!" she said running behind a tree.

"That wasn't fair………." He said naughtily.

"Okay please no water!" she said pleading.

"Okay then come here….yeh lo I threw the water away" he said smirking.

She made sure and came out from behind the tree.

He grabbed her and hugged her.

"Oh my god!! YOU IDIOT!!!" she said as she saw that his clothes drenched her too.

She saw his built body because his vest stuck to him like skin and became transparent with the purple all over him.

"Great! Thanks" she said turning away.

"Holi hai aur holi pe yehi sab hota hai" he said pulling her close by the waist.

She smiled and hit his chest lightly.

"I love you" she said for the first time ever.

He looked at her shocked as a warm feeling rushed into his body and her scent filled his lungs.

"Can I kiss you now?"

"It's not like you haven't before you jerk!!"

He leaned in and pressed his lips on hers.

The kiss was slow and soft but then it got passionate and intense………..he pulled her up onto his shoes so he could kiss her with ease.

She gasped and he took advantage, she slowly started to respond and her hand rubbed his back while the other tousled his hair.

He broke the kiss and kissed her neck then moved back up.

"Bas! Koi dekh lega!" she said out of breath.

"HUH! Kuch zaida ho gaya na!" he said catching his breath.

She touched her lips.

"Thanks now everyone can tell!" she said moving away.

"Hahaha!!" he said but she turned back to give him a glare.

"Sorry" he said looking down.

PRECAP:

"Dad this is Maan" she said clutching Maan's arm.

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Comment please!
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantic update i cant wait to read how her DAD react about Maan pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome awesome behoodi!!Freakin if wouldnt let me comment!!! Anyway loved the holi idea!! And all the couples are too cute!!! Aww Geet confessed to him tooo cute and oo la la at last part ;) hmmm lets see what the dad says
Edited by desigirl_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow..
Awesome update loved itt...
Loved the holi part..
Yaya Geet confessed...
Loved the kiss...😳
Awww sooo cute
Cant wait for more..
Precap?? What will be geet's dad reaction..
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update i wonder what dad will say

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