Maneet ff:~A Drink~ UPD: pg 59,60 - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
Kab update karegi yaar?
Please jaldi update karo
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Amna, please update soon dear....
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Hey guys sorry for long wait!!!😕 THANKS FOR COMMENTS!!!
Here u go!!!

Chapter 6: You make me smile

She looked up at the ceiling and then went over to the mirror and looked at the reflection.

She leaned in closer and examined her eyes. Those eyes that all her friends used to die for had become tired and puffy.

"Huh'..i don't deserve so I should STOP dreaming about him! He's too good to be true. And I think he's not into marriage and all considering he has a new girl every week" she said reasoning with herself as she shut her eyes and squeezed them tight but tears kept falling.

(A week later)

"Geet what's wrong you haven't been talking much at all, and now look at you'.I'm getting worried Geet!!" he said holding her hand and squeezing it.

This gesture had become his habit. And his habit always sent a cool sensation all over her body. She felt like she was human. He made her feel.

"Maam this one?" the shopkeeper said.

She hadn't picked her favourite vanilla and pointed to mint-chocolate. The ice cream man and Maan were confused they both knew she HATED that flavor.

"Geet this is choco-mint, you hate that flavor what's wrong with you?" he asked concerned now.

She looked at him dazed.

"I think we should go to the hospital" he said worried'.

"Nooo no no it's okay I'm fine" she said forcing a smile and snapping back into reality.

"Geet what's wrong you can tell me" he said as she picked her mint icecream.

"No nothing" she said walking to their table.

"Damn it! Why are you eating this if you don't like it?" he said as he looked at the melting cone and her expression after tasting it.

He grabbed the cone and threw it away in the garbage can and went up to get a different cone.

"No he is too good to be true" she said as she watched him pick the flavor and bring it over.

"I'm sorry but will you tell me?" he said sitting back down.

She put a spoonful of ice cream in her mouth.

"You know stuffing ice cream in your mouth is not gunna prevent you from giving an explanation" he said amused but smirking.

"I know" she said gulping it down.

The ice cream sent chills down her spine.

"Okay so tell me"

"Stop being pushy Maan"

"I'm sorry I just wanted to help" he said taken a back.

"Ugh! I dunno I'm sorry I'm just!" she said taking a deep breath.

"It's okay" he said blinking softly to comfort her.

"Why are you so nice?" she said looking into his eyes.

"I am not nice I simply care about you, you're special" he said softly holding her hand.

They looked at each other just reading eyes.

He couldn't read the sadness in her eyes alone. Today there had been mixed emotions in her eyes.

She looked away.

"Umm so tell me, have you decided anything?" he said looking at her.

"Umm I still have another week to decide" she said smiling.

"Yeah and keep in mind my exams will be over by the end of this week and they start tomorrow, so no escaping" he said winking.

"Yup, aye aye sir" she said saluting.

"You know you really are something" he said laughing.

"And what exactly am I Sir?" she said demanding.

"I don't know yet" he said smiling but looking into her eyes still.

"Oh okay then you tell me when you know" she said looking away with furrowed eyebrows.

"Yup don't I tell you everything!?" he said sighing and resting his head on his hand that was on the table.

She moved back a little because the table was for two, fairly small and he was just 10 inches away from her.

"And she shies away" he said chuckling.

"I am not! And yeah you tell me everything including your long list of girlfriends" she said rolling her eyes so he couldn't see the pain.

"Correction'.one night stands" he said slowly emphasizing the words.

"Yeah yeah I know Mr. Casanova here" she said pointing to him.

"Like that eh?" he said now leaning back into the chair and opening his arms widely.

She laughed at his expression.

"You know I love that you laugh now, you have a wonderful laughter" he said genuinely.

She blushed.

"You know no one has said that to me" she said looking up at him now.

"I am honored to be the first" he said smiling.

"Let's go" she said looking away.

"Maan stop making funny expressions at me and concentrate on studying" she said giggling.

"The women giggles?!" he said furrowing his brows in sarcasm.

She threw a book at him.

"Ouch! Like that hurt a lot" he said still laughing.

"Stop it!! study or I am leaving" she said threatening while pointing a finger at him.

"Okay okay" he said surrendering.

She read magazines and he studied occasionally peeking at her mischievously an they would have a laughing break.

Just like now.

"Maan stop looking at me like that" she said amused.

"Okay okay go back to gawking at shirtless men" he said making cute baby faces.

"I AM NOT!!!" she said as she showed him the page.

"Wow, I didn't know you rolled that way" he said serious.

She raised a brow.

"I mean you and looking at girls in bikinis wow Geet real modern"

"I hate you" she said as she giggled and he laughed.

She threw a cushion at him.

"You want coffee?" she said now fixing herself.

"Thanks" he said now looking back at his notes.

She was making coffee unconsciously smiling at his cute little gestures that made her insides fill up with joy.

She turned around and her lips pressed onto a soft surface.

She quickly took a step back.

He looked at her and now raising his fingers to feel the side of his lips exactly where her lips had touched.

She looked at him horrified.

He looked at her expression.

"It's okay" he said turning and pulling mugs out.

She didn't say anything her heart beats did. They were beating like she was running a marathon''.she just poured the coffee into the mugs and went back into the library.

"Geet" he said grabbing his mug.

"Haan" she said softly as she sat back down.

"Quiz me"

"Okay" and she grabbed the notes from his hands.

PRECAP:

"So you're going right cuz you said you would do anything?!" he said looking hopeful and enthusiastic.

She looked at his expression and her heart sank.

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COMMENT!!!!

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome awesome update!!!!! Love how Maan is sooo caring and sweet towards Geet!! Love how she teased him about being a casanova and all!!! Love how you show her helping him study!!! and i just loved Maan's dialogue like and the woman giggles!! And OMG at the end Geet lost in her own world and mistakenly kisses him!!!!!!! too good!!!!😉 Hmmm hope Geet agrees to go with him!!!!
Edited by desigirl_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG loved the update...it was so cute!! Cant wait for the next update 😍....PLZ continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was an amazing part luved it do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwww..tht was awesome..perfectly awesome..maan cares for her so much..he needs to realize he is in love with her..i know i am in a hurry but i can't help it..do update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
the update was superb....so Maneet are coming closer day by day....can't wait for the next part....

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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar soo short..
yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy do you do this to us
thora lamba chaheay next time
btw the update was really nice
update soon
love
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey great update yaar................
maaneet were becoming close..............hmm..............interesting looking fwd....................

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