Arrange Marriage #3 [MN]: Some Messages Shared: 30 - Page 19

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Well, you asked for an honest review, and I will give you one. I always expect the honest one :)

First off, if you say that your readership for this fan fiction is going downhill, then you should see my writing pieces. Hmm... They only go downhill, heck, I can't even pass the one hundred page mark with my recently-finished fan fiction. Really? While you, on the other hand, are currently on your third thread for this fan fiction. Perhaps the less readership is due to the lack of updates? Yeah, this must be the reason...everyone says so. Just kidding. Nope, you are right.

Anyways, I liked the sunset idea but don't make it cliche. Ohk...actually the sunset part was whole me. I am a hopeless romantic girl...shy on outside. When I read this fan fiction, I look at the unique aspect of it. Hmm...So I want to see you writing that way, because I know your capability when it comes to writing. Thanks for having trust on me...I just wanted to point this out; if you have any questions, then we can talk about it during our pm conversation we are having. Yeah. Criticism can hurt, but definitely be happy about how much readers you have. I am now.

The development of Nupur and Mayank is shown wonderful. Thank you :) My favorite part must be when Nupur waits anxiously for Mayank's call, and she ends up calling him. That was a spontaneous thing done by me. :) But one thing I want to see also is the duo realizing the importance of the commitment. They do realise it, as you have seen them thinking about the adjustments and all...but I guess, it needs a little more brushing and emphasizing. I know that it's a fan fiction with a non-serious tone, but I strongly urge you to make that a part of the fan fiction. Pakka, i wud try my level best.

Now, this is a real feedback, unlike my previous ones from a year back. 😆 Somehow, i agree [don't mind] Anyways, take care, and I hope we still continue to talk to each other via pm. I do hope so too. Take care :)

With love,

Nikki

Originally posted by: ijya

plz updt soon Mahak... loved this part of sunset and new fellings... :)

Originally posted by: rose.three

hey vry sorry 4r late reply...

amazing updt yaar..

loved it...

n do pm me wen ever therez ny new updt 😊

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

still now next part coming huh...mahi update sonner nah...!am waiting...