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Posted: 14 years ago
where is the link for first thread
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Posted: 14 years ago
CONGRATS FOR NEW THREAD
AWESOME EXCELLENT UPDATE
PLZZZ DO CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi congratulations for ur new thread
awesome update yaar
i just love this ff
buty maan character is changed
no problem storyline is awesome
update the next part asap
thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi hi hi..
Omg...sorry dear...i was a lil busy and culdnt read it for long..jus 3 days..but i think i missed a lot...luvely update..luving maan's jj...i hate maan too...luv geet..y do always women face al such things...huh!!!i want geet to move wid shivs..but maan shuld also soon realise..!!!i hate dis naku..blah blah..!!😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 34


Geet: hello...
Shiv: what you been up to?
Geet: nothing much.
Shiv: I already feel bored.
Geet giggles...
Shiv: I am board and you finding it funny?
Geet: nop! No I am not.
Shiv: ok... Let's see...

They started talking at 11... It's 3am....
Geet was yoning under her spread... They have been talking for 4 hours now... Geet gets up still talking to him... She walks in to the kitchen...

Geet: do you really think it will work?
Shiv: you should try it sometime.
Geet: I might ask Ridzy first. I just can't trust you. She laughs.
Shiv: SKs words have powers.
Geet: right... For past 4 hours you were telling me that you will hang up... And you haven't yet.
Shiv: I only break it in your case...
Geet giggles...

Geet sat in the kitchen chair eating apple... She was giggling... Blushing.... As she spoke to shiv...

Maan walks in... Geet didn't realize first as she was spinning her chair round... He hard there conversation... He looks at the clock... 3:30 am.... He wonders who is she talking to this late... Then he sees her face blushing...

Geet: ok! I have to go now shiv.... I really need to sleep....
Maan looked at her... "shiv!" his name was enough to do the trick....
Shiv: fine by. I will pick you up at 11. Be ready.
Geet: yes yes! I will be ready at 11
She hangs up and turns round finding maan behind her... She jumps...
Geet: OMG! You made me jump!
Maan: you are here this late?
Geet: yea... I needed something to eat. Have been talking to shiv... He wouldn't hang up. cAn you believe him. And all I here from everyone is that he is so busy all the time.. And yet here he spoke to me for 4 hours! I really don't understand him!
Geet smiles and was about to leave...
Maan: he likes you I think!
Geet: umm! No! I don't think in thy way. But he is a good friend.
Maan: have you ever spoken to any of your friend this late except me?
Geet looked at him... Bit shocked....
Maan: I was your BF then!
Geet: I Guss he is my BF now!
Maan couldn't say another word... He didn't know how to express this feeling he had inside him... He was getting more angry and frustrated inside. But he kept him self calm.
Maan: is he going to propose you soon?
Geet: I don't know... Are relationship is not that deep yet...
Maan didn't like that at all...
Maan: so you were....
Geet: why are you asking this many question? Other day you were trying to decide If I should do modeling or not. Maan! This is my personal and private matter.
Maan: what personal? He starts loose his cool.
Geet: I think you have forgotten we are not to gather anymore. You have a GF and I have a BF! Are life are separate now. My BF hav more right on me then you. And your GF to you.... She said the last word sadly...
Maan: me oh....
Geet: can you stop! I have moved on. And I gus that's what you wanted. I am happy in my life now. So please let me be... And stop interfering in my life...
Maan:......
Geet walks off...

Next day... Geet and maan sat on the breakfast table...
Mum: haven't you slept last night?
Geet: oh me!
Mum: have you seen your eyes...
Geet: mum I am fine.
Mum: still... Dhane rhaka kar apni shet ka!
Geet: I am fine moma.
Dad: maan...
Maan: yes dad...
Dad: nakushas dad have rang me. We have to go round there house to fix your marriage date. Do you want any certain date? Or shall we decide.
Geet was in pain herring the news. But she smiled...
Maan looked at her... There was no sign of her jealousy... Like it doesn't matter to her any more.
Geet: dad I think there marriage should take place next month!
Maan looked at Geet in surprise. She was making comment about her marriage.
Dad: I was thinking the same.
Geet whispers to Dadi: sooner the better! You know why Dadi... She winkes...
Dadi bursts out in laugh...
Dadi: chup badmash....

Geet deliberately made that to show she really have moved on... His any action doesn't effects geets life anymore.
Maan: no dad! Not this soon. In 7-8 months minimum! He looks at geet... Who was happily taxing someone...
Dad: this late? Why?
Maan: I have some other problems to solve.
Dad: what type of problems?
Maan: business problem.

Shiv picks Geet up at 11. They make there way to the modeling show.
Nakusha was already present...



Next: maans desire waking up'

ok' hehe' lol' LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS' SO GOOD' i cant belive 21 page already' LOVE U SO MUCH' I WANT MORE LOL' being greaddy' pls pls pls do leave me some more

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI KEYAMA WAT AN UPDATE DEAR SIMPLY AMAZING YA MAKE MAAN MORE JEALOUS HE DESERVES IT AND CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD YOU LET ALL OF OUR COMMENTS FILL UP THE FIRST THREAD SO THAT YOU COULD POST A NEW THREAD YOUR SO NAUGHTY.............................BUT SERIOUSLY AMAZING UPDATE SOON PLEAES YA PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE WAITING..........

AND UPDATE 2 TO 3 PARTS TOGETHER PLEASE DEAR PLEASE...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.... nice update again.....
want to see maan jealous much more
thanks for this update
plz update soon...... can't wait.....
Edited by cutee987 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW GREAT UPDATE...................... WAITING FOR THE NEXT ...... PLS MAKE IT A LONG ONE.......................😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Keyama .... Firstly congrats for the new thread!!! Now.. big jhapppiiiisssss /.. muahhhhh!!! ab maza ayega .. MNaan z gone!! .. 😎 Geet must rock in the event!! .. woohhooo.. loooking forward for ur next updates!! .. LOVELY!! LOVELY !! LOVELY!!! .. HUGS !!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
i can't tell u kem....how happy i am after reading these parts....maan is feeling uncomfortable.....he deserves that.....
luv u
mwaaaahhhhh

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