FF: Geet in an alternate world UPD CH10/P37

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krishnaveni

@shiveni

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#111

kIA wonderful description man,i love it.i love the way Pinky's father soothing the fear in Geet.Actually Maan ki kami hi mujhe nahi mehsoos hui,u made me to indulge in Geet.lovely update,really u r too good.

A very happy birthday dear🤗

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#112

lovely yaar...awsome update ..wanna see maan soon ..do update the next part soon..

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kia_s

@kia_s

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#113

@sangi1588 - hey sangs, thank u and am happy that u liked the progression. i am aware its slow but i am kinda trying to fill the gaps that were not there in the mains serial🤗

@venu - thanks heaps for my birthday wishes and for liking the story🤗

@mrk _1 - thank you😊

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Sorry missed a name

@xxxyyyzzz - thank you 😃

Edited by kia_s - 15 years ago

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kia_s

@kia_s

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: mehraal
hun! I cannot tell you how much i like your story and esp the way u narrate...its like as if geet is thinking and saying this to you,...and the best part is that its genuine and real...keep it up girl!

thank you heaps mehraal.....u have made my day with ur comments and am very happy you love the way its going 😃

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Nice update

Liked how Geet's father helped her

After long tym she got good sleep

Liked the way she dosent wants to be burden on them

Liked Pinky's idea

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kia_s

@kia_s

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#116

@ afsha - thank you, yes thats pretty much the end of geets family being in contact with her for now 😃

@trishap - thank you😃

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sommie

@s-o-m-m-i-e

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#117

hey kia!!!!!!!awesome dear..........👍🏼 i m loving it yar....uncle and geet scene and letter part was amazing.it sounds real.superb👏..i m eagarly waiting for MSK entry....

keep up ur good work....this is for u dear🤗🤗