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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#371

My dear friend Hasini,

This part was just wonderful! That doesnt say anthing I know but thats what I can come up with right now. My mind is mush from studying orthopedics!

I hope I can write more on this part after my test is over tomorrow and while I take a break before studying for the finals for tuesday.

Relax your shoulders and don't over work yourself. My final tomorrow is on shoulder, elbow, wrist, and hand orthopedics. Please dont have me ask you questions to evaluate your shoulder 🤓

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#372

--forgot to add this to my previous comment, BUT in the next few parts, maybe add a scene where maan and geet discuss children. lol

i think it would be so cute or they can be somewhere (like subway) and see some child and it would be interesting to hear there views on children. Just a thought.

And hope ur having a great time in NY. it can be soo hectic and tiring there so make sure you rest. Otherwise, we'll have to wait forever for the next update:P

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funnymonkey

@funnymonkey

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#373

great update lol

Awww tht was a nice surprise Geet left for Maan

but she has to pay for shoving maan now lol

hehe

contnue soon!

BTW idk if i mentioned it before I love each and every title u choose for eaach chapterl..idk how u come up with it lol..but its nice lol

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#374

Yeh kya hogaya hain…phool inke liye aur kaante mere liye?

What a amazing way to put.👏

To you Hasini....

"Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication"

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Apsara1

@Apsara1

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#375

Awesome update! Your title reminded me of the first Ajay Devgan movie called Phool aur kaante! 😊

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: night13
omg.. specially the mishti part.. i surely think you guys think alike... 😳
please update soon..........

I took the word from the soap, but the way he said

"tum bilkul woh lagte ho....Mishti"

That was a snatcher from here...

Once again the lap scene ending with a phone is also taken by CV's. So I dont know how to rewrite it.

Hai...Babaji...mera 3 gante waste ho gaya hai...ab mujhe phir se yeh sb likna padega...why not make it hotter then? ok...let me do that.

Update will only come in the night to my knowledge.

Hasini

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Trust me you want the rewritten part. Its steamy...atleast to me.

Your story is good even without the steaminess too 😊 and i mean that in the best possible way!

But yeah if your making it steamy then who am I to deter you from exercising your creative freedom!😆

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Tesha

@Lov26

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

Trust me you want the rewritten part. Its steamy...atleast to me.

Just started it. Here is a Jhalak.

He crushed my lips at first contact and his hands were moving fast to unbutton my shirt, when that was too time consuming, he just moved onto pull out the shirt that was tucked away inside my trousers. His hand raced back to feel the skin on my back and moved forward to grab me by the narrow of my waist...

That is so not fair Hasini.. Lol.. Not just a Jhalak, we want the whole thing.. 😛

U are tempting us.. Oh boyyy it seems it IS going to be a HOT & SEXY update. Bring it ON Girl.. 😉

Are u updating anytime soon? Not my intention to put any pressure on you, just wanna know.

~Tesha

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: Newdime

Anything will be fine from you. Could you go the round figure plz...100 plz since you will go to 90 so please create the mark of the century. ☺️

Oi did you forget my obsession with numbers?. I will of course make it till 100...and then an epilogue to end it as if this is a story....just a script 😉

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Rachana,

In all this you are leaving out Karma....you gotta pay for what you gotta pay for, even with the almighty who has predestined your life....

There are women who never get married, married but dont have a kid, married but dont have a good husband, Good husband but not good in-laws, good marriage but no money.

And some who have everything, but not the heart to recognize what they have.

In the latter, their disability is the missing heart. What can I say, all we can do is just hope for the best for now and pray....just like your screen name...FLOW....

Hasini,

I totally agree with you in the Law of Karma.

Paying for what you gotta pay....but is that not the lesson you have to learn in this particular life. I mean because you have missed out on this particular lesson n have not learned its importance and value...you are in that situation in this life time. Until you have learned your lesson...you will repeatedly be in that situation and finally once you have learned it...you will move further in life.