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Posted: 14 years ago
i love u r update..........so much understanding between them...........

I wish I can get husband like Maan😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasini67


Did you forget? It started with New year. Shortly after he came to India, Then she followed. Geet's birthday was in early Jan too. Then a week here and there. Then he went back to US. Four and half weeks later marriage was around Feb 11 th.

So yesterday was first day of marriage on Feb 12 Sat
Today's update is Feb 13th Sunday.

I do follow timelines for the updates. That is a seperate excel I maintain...The geeky me.😉

Wow I'm super impressed :-D That is truly unique and amazing.
Ooh then I'm doubly excited for the next post ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nisharoyce

hasini

its been a really long time since ur last update
hope u r fine babe
please update yaar



u know what i have been humming "thumse hi thumse" from anjaana anjaani & very much imagining maan & geet in new york


I finished writing it. Editing now. Will post in some more time. its standing at 13 pages now, will try and trim a little. I have to read it like at least 3-5 times...so hold on.

Hasini

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasini67


I finished writing it. Editing now. Will post in some more time. its standing at 13 pages now, will try and trim a little. I have to read it like at least 3-5 times...so hold on.

Hasini


haasini tu edit kyun kar rahi hai yaar
did any 1 tell u that ur ff is too long / this & that were not necessary
tum tho 3 - 5 times padthe ho par hum tho agley update thak 8 - 10 times pad lethey hain
ub please update kar do na
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Posted: 14 years ago
we dont mind if its extra long!!! lol
hopefullly it will be up soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
haasini its already more than an hour please update kar do

yaar main bhi ziddi & tubelight huun bilkul maan ki tharah
u r his master woh tumhari hi baath manega na

ab bohoth waiting ho gaya
u have no idea how i am killing time
ziddi luv u ziddi
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Posted: 14 years ago

all i am goin to say is 👏👏👏👏👏👏

a standing ovation to u for this beautiful romantic sequence.....⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
it was a novel and spectacular update......with such a romantic setting...
dialogues, monologues everything was brilliant
melody
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.


Getting used to Mishti will take time...it feels a little awkward....to listen Maan call her Misthi...as well as Maan's comparison for Geet and Misthi.....
Thanks for the update..
Love
Rachana


Thanks for your comment. I have been thinking a lot about Maan calling Geet. Mshti. I'm planning to cut down on it anyways. But I can't pull it back completely, so it will be around.

@ Nisha: Hopefully that will cover you as well.

Hasini
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Posted: 14 years ago
Your soo lucky you get the black friday sales!!

In Canada we don't get that until boxing day (Dec 26th), and they are pretty lousy as well. lol

So shopping is a valid excuse for not updating!! BUT i think today's episode of Geet was enough for everyone.. still in a daze from watching it, can't stop smiling. MSK is just the best. too sweet.

Anyways, update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am really late in reading this update😭 but glad that I have read it before your next update😛
I loved it, this update was really excellent. 👏 Its very difficult to choose which part I liked the most because snap, Izhar and the pool part-all three were amazing. They were beautiful in their own way.

Lemme now begin...
The first line just captivated me! I had two things going on in my mind after I read it. It made me curious as to why this question now and also, I felt this line to be romantic (though reasons unknown to me) Just felt so.
I loved her answer. Reminded me of Maan's words today in the show when he said that he wants her to be with him always, in all coming lives.

Awww, I loved Maan calling her Mishti a lot😊 Thanks for using Mishti and not Jaan😛
Loved these lines- 'It was becoming an early morning routine to have those moments where we were lost in each other. That to me was the sunrise of our love each day. Except this was a sunrise that didn't set at the end of day for it only shone bigger and brighter the next day'
(I hope you don't mind me quoting the lines. I have been doing this in almost all my comments lately so in case you do, please let me know. )

Maan in white kurta😍 I wanna see him this way in the show. Though have seen him wearing white shirt a number of times (in the latest FB pics too) but kurta has its own charm!
I loved the mental promises they made to each other while taking pheras and today I loved the feelings, the thoughts, the love they shared while putting garlands on each other.
I really liked the way you showed the difference in maan-he is till MSK for others but Maan for Geet.

Picture-clicking session was really good. I really enjoyed reading this.
I was smiling at the reasoning he gave for asking the permission before clicking pics. Lovely!
'Sirf Geet hi ek hain jo mere saath lad sakti hain'aur Mishti mujhe pyaar karna sika thi hain' Dreamyy😍 How do you write such romantic lines-so pure, so innocent, just touches the heart!
Loved the teasing, jolly Maan in these moments a lot. And when he got a bit angry, that was cute.
Snap moments were really beautiful.
Also, I am curious too just like Geet about the family picture not complete statement by Daadima. Thats still a mystery and you seem to have haven't given any clues yet.

And then one of the best parts of this update- IZHAR. Dil toh Pagal hai part was nice but the limelight was Maan-Geet one. I loved it. I read this part twice and am still not over with it. It had everything-emotions, pain, anguish, understanding, urge, love! I loved it, loved it, loved it-infinity times!!! All the unasked questions were answered, all the loops were completed. Simply amazing!
This part came out really well. super loved it!!!
I wish we could have a scene like this in the show.

And lastly, the pool part. Well, to be honest, I really don't have words to express how much I loved this part, how much this part touched my heart. It was awesome, beautiful, mind-blowing! Koi kisise tna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai?
This part was truly magical.
And Hasini, I was in awe of your writing since the first time I started reading New York Times but you surprise me everytime whenever you come up with a new update. The way you set the whole atmosphere with your words is simply breathtaking! Amazing! How do you come up with such amazing, unique ideas? I have begun to fall in love with your thought-process now. Don't blame me, your writing has cast a spell on me and I want this spell to remain always.

And by the way, I loved today's episode. It was so nice, the dialogues were amazing-so thought provoking. I like the way Barry Dhillon comes up with deep dialogues. GC and DD-superb portrayal of emotions. The fear, the pain was so evident in Geet's eyes, specially when she held his hand tightly. Maan understood that Geet is scared and he was trying his best to comfort her by showering all the love in a very caring way. I simply loved this.
Hope you enjoyed it too.
Your thoughts about the episode?



Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago

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