FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2 - Page 14

hiii hasini.........😛

i am typing this for the third time.........but i feel obliged to give u ur well deserved appreciation and feedback on this fabulous update..........coz u have done an exceeding outstanding update

u always give ur readers something to ponder over at the end of ur update....well thats the speciality of your ff

its lik a mind chow for me that i get to reflect and chew over in my mind for the rest of the remaining day.........

now back to ur update...what can i say about it.........it was beautiful...........

i wonder how u come up with beautiful analogies that leaves me completely dumbstruck with awe

the ripple effect theory....catterpillar to butterfly example...painter and his canvas instance are like gems and pearls of wisdom.......

geet realising that maan tries to create physical distance whereas geet tries to put mental distance wenever they are not ready to face each other.....captured the essence of their actions in a nut shell.....hats off to u

the two angels meera and dadi convo and their master plan to make geet agree to marry maan was wonderful

maan keeping tab on geet inspite of being angry, frustrated over her response to his proposal.........shows his unconditional and irrevocable love for her....

thanxx for creating such a wonderful male lead........someone about whom we can dream and drool over....😆😆😆😆

dadi and geet convo was the showstealer of the update......
dadi hearing geet out..her fears, insecurities,her ambitions,the emotional baggage that she had been carrying and trying to get rid of...showed that dadi is not only experienced but receptive towards others.....

at the end of the convo when geet feels happy and relieved for having found a man and his dadi as family who are ready to give her their unconditional and unflinching support wenever need them...makes the readers feel happy and relieved for geet

geet realising that her own family disowned and shunned her ....but dadi and maan ready to accept her inspite of her having a scarred past and helping her to start afresh.. was wonderfully penned down

its indeed a brilliant point made by u...that its helpful to have elders to guide you in ur life....wen we feel confused, unsure of what next to do........
its lik an eyeopener to many youngsters that we simply cant dismiss our elders....but try to realign our thoughts....and try to make them part of our thought process and include them.....

maan confused on having being informed by dadi that geet has agreed to marry him..........is a natural and expected reaction from him.....
its quite obvious coz he thought that she had rejected him.....and now out of the blue she has agreed..........
well the second thought about marrying geet ...hope its just pre- marriage jitters.....that normally ppl have ....whether r they marrying the right person, for right reasons..with right expectations.

looking forward for some more maan's monologues on this issue...

i wud lik to see heart to heart chat between M and G before their marriage so that they are able to understand each other better, bring back the warmth in their realationship.....clear their misunderstandings,and to have reasonable expectations from each other

overall a master blaster update....10/10

Originally posted by: Water.

Pushpi, wonderfully written. I am amazed at your insight. I loved your analysis.

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

any update tonight?

i think once i'm done uni for the semester (3 weeks till xmas break!) i'm going to read the whole FF again! lol

Originally posted by: Water.

Hey Nisha,

I think she meant..that she will start a new thread at 51 not a new FF. 😛😛

Originally posted by: Hasini67

Dont expect too much once again. These things make me nervous. I dont have one funny bone in me.
I write drama not comedy but wanted to try and hence this experiment.
Might not be to your liking.

Of course newly weds so those who want will get their dose of romance and passion too.