*The Arrival of My Doomsday* |Link to New FF|Pg53| - Page 10

hey.. u did updated..:)
wowww this part was funny.. cute and very sweet..:)
i luved how Ridz was talking to herself and cursing being married..lol
and then Armaan awwww how sweet of him...he made all the things easier...:) i wish i wud get a guy like him....:) <3
thanxx for the pm and continue soon..:)
tc :)
Preet <3

loved it
add me to ur pm list

Perfectly beautiful, Debs! 🤗

I love this chapter to bits, how understanding a fellow Armaan is. Both characters are very well sketched. I take it, you're pretty observant about marriages in India. Wow, so am I! Weddings here are beyond crazy, aren't they? 😆

Well, I would love it if they fall in love only after they make great friends. I guess, you've planned this only. But erm, I wanna to tell that this way, the essence of the story would be kept intact and there'd really be nothing more beautiful! I am already hoping too much, I love reading this flick!

You write extremely well, D! Keep it up, you're awesome! =]

-Kanky

awesome part...waitin to read more....update soon.....

loved the part just awesome and loved the inhead convos lol ;p :D

awesome ...
Happy that Ar are now frnds.. 😊.. Me sure that this frndship will soon turn in to a beautiful Love Story 😳 But really want to know that how these two met and got mrd.. 😍
Update soon this time... Thnx for the PM

plz add me 2 ur buddy list fren i luv ur ff cotinue soon plz

The 21st century glitched female in me is applauding at an unbelievable rate on reading this update. Indeed, Riddhima's list of Post- marriag ebullshit is our Not-to-follow-charter! I can toatlly imagine the so-called "couple" hi-5'ing each other and behaving like bosom buddies...I love the way u bring out the very feminist version as well as the feeling sof agirl who wants to balance out thing sin he rlife. On one hand, Riddhima falls into an emotional trap (crappy...I hate those girls but then familial ties sure trap u) and on the other, her personality tries to surface beneath the expectations she's loaded with...I love her statement about jumping off a cliff...I'd totally walk out from anything that comes in my way of pursuing my aspirations. Nonetheless, the people around her make her pretend! On an ending note, although I talked my heart out nd ya da ya da ya da...I love how u incorporated all these feelings in to a single update with less than 1000 words...huh...make ur updates longer lol! I believe I don't need to say how awesome this part was or that a good writer like u shud continue soon...I hope U can read in between the lines...looking forward to reading another one of those a lil egotistic and self-esteem Riddhima approaches int he next part! Oh Oh Oh! I hope the new generation with the glitch cud find a replacement to the cheesy honey moon...lol !