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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
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Posted: 14 years ago
VERY VERYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY NICE AND THANKS TO ADD MEEEEEEEEEE
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There is a silent communication…….as he open the binds….where geet is talking….to the mr. swamy jii…….who is at the Indian paints…………

She is completely engrossed in her work..

At that time he called………….her…………………

She came back to the cabin..

Miss handa……bring me coffee.and also bring all the 1 yr sales reports…………with in minutes………………………

She didn't look at him………………….

Turned back.and went to pantry to bring…..his black coffee…………….without sugar………….and then….also the reports……………….with in minutes………………….

She is again in her work………………..

And then……..she got a call………………

It is from home………….to get ready for party………………….

Dress is already ready….as it is selected by anee………………

And also her friend ridimaa……….

She left the office early..

Maan looked for her…….

But he knows she already left……

Tomorrow at kc….first day………..

He smiled after long time………………..

He hate parties…..

But need to…bcause it is a family.occassion…….as this is a bussines party also…………..

Prem is exicited………….As this is chance to meet geet………………………..he want to see her……………………….

And at the same time……………

Arjun also coming……….so anee is exicited…………………….

As arjun is her child hood friend………………………flirting type……but not serious in love relationships.but he likes………..anee a lot………………

Also a good friend of dev………………………as his sister is none other than naina tara…………………………………

He is coming……………………………

So anee is super exicited………………

as he enter into the house.to find the mansion is entirely decorated…………………………and darji and others ar every much busy…………………..in their………………….bussiness meetings………

aditya and nandini……………………..ar e a very cute couple…………………..

sam enter the party looking towards ,maan side………………..

as he is at bar….

He did not want to attend the party……………………..

But he need to …………

And on the other side………….geeet is very much tired of her work……and she is no mood to attend the party…………as anee is forced….

She wore the dress………………………………………..

Everything is going well.

Suddenly a boy…enter the party…………………..he came on the bike……………….

He enter the km……………

He slowly enter into the out house……………

The door is closed.

Winds are blowing…………………..…..

As there is scary……dark……………………………..

Geet is scared…………………………

As she felt somebody at the dark.

She sreamed….

But then…………………………….

She ran to the party…..

She is at the middle………..

Badi maa and others are scared..they came to geet which is sobbing..

Maan is shocked…………….

He saw the direction pointed by the door………..

As a dark shadow…………..enter the hall.

Again put the hands on the eyes…………………………..

And wispers…..till now ur scared of darks……it wonders………………………and he smiled…

She recognized the touch.

And the person removed his helmet….and th e lights….on………….

He turned it is arjun……………………………..

Anee looked at him awe…………..

Geet turned and smiled.

And all others said ,,,,,,,,,,arjun………….

Sam looked at the person…………….

Dev ..arjun what is it…u again scared geet……….

Arjun:kya karun yaar………..habbit from the child hood………………….

Sorry geeet………….im sorry.he pulled his ears…………….

Geet got angry..

But he asked for smile.

And I know im a devil but my friend is angel…so please smile for me…………………………

Geet smiled.and they have a hug……….

Anee came to the……………….place…

And they have a fight.

Anee arjun u ediot……………..what have u done again u scared geet……..

Arjun:yaa why again u will attend me..

They start fighting…………….

Geet…..came between…………..

I know both of you.

What.

Yes…I told anee that im not interested in party.so u called arjun for help….and arjun….had playe d this sweet game……….to drag me into the party…………

Arjun:no geet ur mistaken…………………………….i came right just now……………

Geet:oh yaa..that means u make me to believe that u came right from cannada from ur super duper.bike……………..

She pointed towards the door.

And mr arjun rathod..for ur kind information………..

I got ur information of the flight………..that…………………

Ur flight had landed right time…………….at 11:45 in the night,,,,,,,,and u came here….checked ue worked…..and drove ur home to get back ur bike.as u love it the most…………

Arjun:once again..geet ur genious..

Vicky………………she is my girl…………..

He hugged arjun…………………

And everyone laugh…….

And they gave a high figh…all to them…………………………

All are happy……………………………

And the music starts……………….

Loose control
Loose control
One more time
Loose loose loose control
Loose control
I am rebel (2)
na koi padhne wala na koi sikhne wala - 2
apni toh paathshala masti ki paathshala - 2
loose control
chehare ki kitaabein hain ham woh padhne aate hai
yeh surat teri meri mobile library
yaaron ki equation hain love multiplication hain
jisne dil ko jeeta hain
woh alpha hain deeta hain – 3
Loose control loose control
One more time
Loose loose loose control
Loose control
I am rebel

talli hoke girne se samjhi hamne gravity
ishq ka practical kiya tab aayi clearity
na koi padhne wala na koi sikhne wala
naata yeh sannata hai dekho lambu shor hain
har dil mein bud bud karta h2so4 hain
na koi padhne wala na koi sikhnewala
apni toh paathshala masti ki paathshala – 2
apni toh paathsahala masti ki paathshala – 2
I am rebel
Loose control

And geet everyone feels happy…………………………….


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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update but not much of maaneet scenes.............pl write more on maaneet scenes thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice ff😛
pls add me in your pm list and update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
just came accross ur ff
prety interestin
childhood jealosy does spoil things at times
sheesh
update soon an plz add me for PM
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Posted: 14 years ago

Arjun is a special person in geet 's life

He shares every secret with geet…………..

Because ……..geet helps him with his work…

He is best event manager…………

He is one of them………………

Geet always help him…………………..

He knows geet well………………………

And geet knows that anee likes him……………….

The odd secret In arjun's life

At the same time..she also knows that arjun also likes her………..

They are moved…….

Maan looked at geet…..

She always sourrounded by people……..everyone arounds her admires……………..her………….

Even she deserves it………………

On the other hand………………….

Geet is again in the upstairs………she always speak to her parents………………………..with stars……………………….

She speaked……

Mama baba………..arjun came back………………………..

He is friend of mine…………

As she comes down………………………..

Her leg slips………..and as she above to fall…….

A strong hands………catches her…………..

She tries to free. The mascular hands………on the waist.not letting her to go…………………

Maan is looking for geet,,,,,,,,,,,

He didn't find..

He knows that everytime whether happiness or sadness she shares with parents….

First he used to feel weird……….but now it is giving some happiness…….

He realized that she missed them a lot………..

So he guessed that she will be in terrace.as he climbed he saw..she is coming down…….and he saw her slip….and came forward to caught her……………..

Geet closed her eyes……………………..

Maan looking at her…geet open her eyes tofind the same dark brown eyes…………….staring.very well know the eyes…………..she cannot forget………them……….

Maan looked the eyes….the hazzle dark almond eyes……………….

He lost in it……………..why he cannot find her before,,,,bcause he never looked into it…….the feeling that he wants her into his hands…………….for ever………………………….

But geet…came back……….

She is struggling to get free from hands.

But his grip becoming tighter………………………

Chodo muje………………

Chodo muje……………..

Please maan……….

The name on her lips………so sweet……………………….

So humble…………………………….

One minute he left her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

She ran to the downstairs……………..

She is looking on the moon.

What 's wrong with me..why everytime he comes face to me………………………..

And now his touch……………………

Tears .welled up…………

Maan confused…………….he came to his room…………………….

He starts the tai-chi…………..

He don't know why.he is hitting harder……..blood is oozing out….he is restless………………..

What's wrong with him…….

What is happening………………………………………..

Next morning………….

Geet is in kc………………

She stepped into maan's room

He is not at office.

The office pitures.of darji………………..

She folded hands………………………

And take the blessings……………..

And she came down……………..as adi came to her……..

Adi:hello geet maam……..welcome………..

Adi is oldest employee he knows geet 's place……………..

Geet:no adi sir.don't call me maam………..im an mere trainee here………….pls call me geet…and I will call u sir………………………….

And she moves…………….

As she is waiting for him in his room……….

She is reading the file…

Msk enter,in his usual style……….

Msk ……………………….looks at watch,,

And he sees geet in his room…readingthe file………………………………………

He remember the previous night..incident…………..

She looks at him.her eyes stop at the hand,,bandage…………………………

She know s why,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

As usual.some thing is bothering him,,,,,,,,,,,so he,,,,,,,took it on the poor bag…….hurt himself……he always………………………….dos the same……

Geet looking at him

Where as maan is checking her………

Her white suit………………………………..makingher glow more…………..

The hair is blend with a pony………………….

She is looking extremely professional…………

She Is looking at the file.

Just then knock at the door.

The staring session broke due to sasha.

Sasha is checking…….geet……..which is looking outside her world….

She remembered…

Oh hai ur the new trainee…….and what are doing in boss room…………..

She start yelling……………………………..

And at the time………………

Maan stopped her.

With one hand.

She came to be trainee under me…so im going to talk to her…..now stop accuses.and move……

And bring in the files.

Geet is shocked.

She is well known about his employees……..

Regarding…..sasha……………………..she is one of the top prority list.even dev knows her……………

But today.for her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

She felt odd.,.

With out questions.

He got a call.from…………sam.

He cut the call……..

Don't know…………………………..he is feeling ……..

Now adays he don't want to see………………..sam………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update..............
maan confused with his feelings for geet but after his rudeness will he b ever able to win her in love
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
do continue

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