SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 68

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Nadia, I came across your FF and loved the idea.

But please dont let NT and Arjun humiliate Geet.

Add me to your PM list. Thnx

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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice update.......

waiting 4 nxt.....
love.......286pearl
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 286pearl

very nice update.......

waiting 4 nxt.....
love.......286pearl

just completing it.. soon i will update hope fully
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Posted: 14 years ago

Alone in Paradise 13

Maan: walked to car... he smiled "if any other girl would be at her place would have done same , after seeing those pictures " ...he wore his sun glasses ..... " it was my fault i would have told her that she was drunk." he drove the car . he stop at a signal ...
Flower boy knocked his window" your money sir"
Maan: smiled keep it & take this ..gave him more ...
Flower boy: "what for this?"
Maan deliver flowers twice a day & don't tell name at any cost..
Flower boy : oh ishq ..
Maan: stared in anger....
Flower boy zip his lips ...
Maan: send best flowers ....
Flower boy :don't you worry izzazt ka sawal ha ......
Maan smiled & left.... "miss attitude i am maan singh khurana i have not learn how to lose ."
He drove to his office ..
Adi: sir you have a meeting...
Maan: Adi cancel that & call Delhi best designer .
Adi: your designer
Maan: no ladies .... & keep it to your self
Adi: gave Maan a strange look."sir if you will call here then everyone will come to know about it "
Maan: ok you arrange my meeting.
Adi: walked out..
Maan: i could have taken revenge from you of that slap but i will take in my way..... looked at her picture in his cell... "oh i have to call to Arjun" he dialed his number
Arjun: hi kaisa yaad kiya?
Maan: actually i wanted to tell you something
Arjun: since when you are becoming so formal Maan?
Maan: i want to tell you something about Geet
Arjun: "what you will tell Maan? i already know everything"
Maan:bit shocked "how you know?"
Arjun:"yar i want to marry her, i will not find who she is"
Maan: what you know?
Arjun: Maan is this must to tell you ? i will ask her myself if i want to... & please don't be her lawyer here... he said bit harshly ...
Maan: you are taking it in other sense
Arjun: Maan let me handle it in my way.
Maan: ok but you listen one thing you dare not hurt her.
Arjun: Maan i know how to handle ladies
Maan: ok lets see ...i will keep an eye on you ... he cut the call....

Adi: sir i have arranged the meeting.
Maan Ok he picked up his cell & walk out.....

At home
Dadi: beta why you are so upset?
Geet: Dadi pata nai
Dadi: ok tell me do you have any friend?
Geet: yes Pari is my friend
Dadi: ok call her home
Geet: why dadi?
Dadi: beta you talk to her you will feel better
Geet: smiled
Dadi: and do what you like ? as it is your life ....
nakul: Geet beta
Geet: jee
nakul aagya tumhara phool
Geet: looked at it

Geet dadi is not these beautiful .. she smiled
Dadi: yes it is
nakul: beta boy said he was late as he went to collect these flowers..
Dadi: nakul you didnot asked him
nakul: he said he can't tell.
Geet: dadi my secret admire is ....paused she started arranging it in living room

Dadi: looked at her face .... "Maan why are you doing this ?" murmur
Geet: dadi i want to find him
Dadi : sure beta
Geet: smiled ... walk to her room to call Pari.

At designer shop
Maan:s please show me a grace full dress
Designer: sir you tell me what is the age of the lady
Maan: 24 or 25
Designer: buy these
Maan: i said grace full.
Designer: now days girls wear such dress
Maan: looked at saree ..."pack that "
Designer: oh for your grand ma
Maan: stared show me jewelery too.
Designer: i think Black diamonds will go with that....

Maan : looked at the necklace .... "please pack this " .... murmur "surly this will suit you.. smiled at his own thought . went to courier office ....
Maan: please you type this note with it

I hope you like this small gift .do wear it tonight.
he asked them to send at home address.


At home Dadi & Geet were having lunch.
nakul: beta parcel for you..
Geet: now what? she quickly open the box
Dadi: wow beta such an elegant saree...
Geet: dadi see this..
Dadi: diamonds...
Geet: dadi Arjun send this she pass the note
Dadi: too read the note.." i think he realized his mistake"
Geet: yes... i guess
Dadi: call him & thank him
Geet: dadi i will say it in evening.
Dadi: as you wish beta ...
nakul: beta some more flowers....



Geet: hold her head "i will find this person"
to be cont hit like button or comment to show me that you are there
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
aah arjun, don't like him.
update soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update
Want 2 see how Geet find out hu sends her da flowers
Nice dress & jewellery
Cont soon Xx...
🤗 👍🏼
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ahh geet thinking saree is sent by arjun
but geet set to find the secret admirer😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
😆

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Gr8 update
Want 2 see how Geet find out hu sends her da flowers
Nice dress & jewellery
Cont soon Xx...
🤗 👍🏼

it took hour for me to find this dress and jewellery 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely

amazing
just pleasent as those roses
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Posted: 14 years ago
is Geet taking Maan's doing as Arjun doing it.. like teh saree she things tat Arjun has sent it isn't she...

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