SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 64

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Posted: 14 years ago
nery nice dear.. i loved it... geet fell for maan.. nice do con..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome job.I reeally want the pms becos really cant miss the interesting stuff
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Posted: 14 years ago

Alone in Paradise 12

Early next morning
Dadi: beta how are you feeling today? saw geet wrapping her wet hairs .
Geet: smiled better dadi..
Dadi: your headache
Geet: woh to kal raat hee theek hogaya tha.
Dadi: aaj kal ka becha bhi ajeeb ha. saw geet walking out of room.."where are you going?"
Geet:dadi abhi aati hoon..walked out
nakul beta where are you going ....
Geet: to catch that flower boy....
nakul: woh tou abhi tak nai aaya ...
Geet: walked out to gate ... she waited for 1/2 hour but he didn't came ..
At dinning table..
dadi: nakul go & call Geet .
nakul: dadi she is saying she will catch the flower boy..
Maan: Hide his face in newspaper " he will not come today " said in low voice
Dadi: go & call her
Geet: dadi i am here....she came in with flowers ..
Dadi: oh beta aagai aap ka flowers
Geet: yes dadi.. placed it on table
Dadi: who is the sender beat
Maan: at once fold the paper....."i ask him not to bring now"....
Dadi: listened Maan....
Geet: Arjun.... who told him that i was sick ? while reading the card . "get well soon"
Dadi: Maan..
Maan: took a deep breath.... & started eating his breakfast
Geet: thx's seated ...
Maan: looked at her it was the first word she said to him after their fight ......
Geet: started eating her break fast..
Dadi: looked at them..
Geet: Dadi i want to ask you one thing...
Dadi: yes beta..
Geet: dadi please tell Arjun's family that i am an orphan & i am not your relative...
Dadi: looked at Maan..
Dadi: why beta ?
Geet: dadi i want them to know my real identity...that i don't have any sir name
Dadi: but
Geet: dadi if he then agree to marry me i will be ready.....
Dadi: beta why you didn't said that yesterday?
Geet: they were your guest & i didn't ...paused
Dadi: Maan you tell them the truth as you said she is your cousin.
Maan: me
Dadi: yes you ..
Maan: looked at Geet.."is this must to tell?"
Geet: yes it is .. if you marry me you will marry me with my past but he paused " started bitting her lips as if what she had said.
Maan: but..
Geet: sochna tha bolna se pehla.
Maan: looked at her in anger....
nakul: beta phone ha....he passed phone to Geet.
Geet: mera
nakul: yes Mr Arjun
Geet; looked at dadi & took the phone...."hello"
Arjun: how are you?
Geet: i am fine thank you
Arjun: Maan told you were sick.
Geet: now i am not.... said bit rudely
Arjun: did you like the flowers
Geet; yes thx for it
Arjun: i have send you a present wear it tonight.
Geet: why?
Arjun: i guess we will have dinner tonight.
Geet: i will ask dadi then let you know & before going with me you must talk to Maan ...
Maan: looked at Geet.... walked to his room
Geet: bye ... closed the call
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At Arjun place
nt: what happen?
Arjun: she is very rude .. she said i should talk to Maan first before taking her with me.
nt: hmmm i am 101% sure she was not sick last night..
Arjun: nt please let me sleep ... for you i am giving lift to that bahenjee kind of girl...
nt: what friends are for?
Arjun: bus karo
nt: everything is fair in love & war.
Arjun: now you go & let me sleep...
nt; you are really my best friend.

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At mansion
Driver came with a parcel
Dadi: what is this?
Driver: for madam
Geet: took it & opened ..... she taken out the dress
Dadi: looked at her
Geet: dadi kuch bhi hojai i will not wear this ...
dadi: wear in what you are comfortable.
Maan: who was going for office looked at the dress..... he recollected how uncomfortable she was when he taken her to buy dress....he walked out " i should to talk to Arjun".
thx for comments...
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes.........
i am the first one to comment
it is awesome really
i loved it
and maan is getting jealous
sounds gr8
its really intresting loved it
u r the best niddiya
Edited by princess_aakshu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow !!!awsome one didi ... looks this NT is upto something .... hope maan ll realise this soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
it is awesome really
i loved it
it is becoming more interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Make them confess their feelings.........plz
Wonderful update...........loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
geet slip of tongue was too good
plzz continue soon
Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.............

but what the motive for arjun behind marrying geet...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
nadz yaar loved ti very much... aha wat Geet said...

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