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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

that was simply marvelous...

amazing part...

though some technical things..but got them...

thnx for the pm....

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462044

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

man i'm luving ur ff sooo much....really really interesting & sumthing very different , sumthing new, sumthing fresh it is.... awesome... & d way u write it, present it is awesome ya..... splendid... marvelously exceptionally gud... cheers 2 u 4 such a fab ff...
waiting 4 next part.... jaldiiii se update karo ab.... cant wait..2 read more...
thnks 4 d pm dear!!!
cont soonnnnnnnnnnn...😊

luv ya
tanvi

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Sagarika! Both parts, 7 and 8 were wonderful.

And the story is intriguing.

So the lead protagonist is a mom who's kids are dead. What's more she works under the same roof as her cheating ex. Is he also the father of the kiddos?😕

And her kids must have died a real bad death to turn her into a such a nerve wreck😵😔

And the fight description in part 7 was so cool.

I can't even begin to describe what I loved as I might end up pasting your whole update. 👏

Thanks for the lovely read.👍🏼

So she now remembers that Armaan WAS the guy that night🤔 Wonder, how thats going to shape up the future of their relation?

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sagarika ghosh

@ranv_rules

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Before I post the next part, I'd like to thank all of you for reading. I know I keep promising that I'll reply to all the comments but with exams and everything I just about have enough free time to write and update a new part and pm everyone.

So thank you to all the silent readers for reading my ff.

And thank you here-i-am (sorry don't know your name), kinnari,harneet, amoon (that's your name right?please say I dint get it wrong. I am sorry if I did though), Sonia, anumeha, kavyaa, taniya and Minnie.

love

Sagarika

P.S. I am going to put up the next part sometime tonight

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sagarika ghosh

@ranv_rules

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: jannat4ever
hey Sagarika very bad u started a new ff nd didn't pm me????😕
its okkkkkkkkkkkkkk 😛
just read ur ff nd i loved ur ff 😛
all parts are awesome.......to much suspense yar 😕
continue soonnnnnnnnnn
nd add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😛

lots of luv
jannat

hey jannat
i am so sorry for not pming u..
i am glad you liked it
i know that the suspense is too much even i am getting confused now..lol
bt i am trying to let all the secrets come out one by one
i will pm u for sure this time

love
sagarika

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yongshin

@yongshin

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Ur last line are jst fantastic n cliff hanger....PART was awesome.....the way to wrote ridz feeling....I like this ridz better..cant wait continue soon n THX 4 PM

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meeru_s_armaan

@meeru_s_armaan

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

hey dear !!it's surely a vry nice ff....really loved it...but i hv a suggestion and plz plz plz take it in a positive way...i really want u to emphasize more on ar relation and love than the details of forensic sciences...it's impressive to read but ar love story would be much more interesting....so i request u to write about their developing love and their feelings more than other details...I HOPE U DIDN'T MIND IT....I LIKED UR FF SO THOUGHT OF GVNG U SOME SUGGESTIONS...SORRY IF U FELT BAD...
nd plz do pm me whenever u continue...

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Hey.......... I just saw a few comments............ And the reason why I love this fanfic is because it is so different from the rest.......... And I hope you will keep it that way!

I love how you describe the forensic scenes and interweave the progression of an amazing story within.........

Kudos👍🏼

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

omg this is awesome! I'm loving it. Can't wait to read more!

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DreamerReality

@DreamerReality

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: ranv_rules

Before I post the next part, I'd like to thank all of you for reading. I know I keep promising that I'll reply to all the comments but with exams and everything I just about have enough free time to write and update a new part and pm everyone.

So thank you to all the silent readers for reading my ff.

And thank you here-i-am (sorry don't know your name), kinnari,harneet, amoon (that's your name right?please say I dint get it wrong. I am sorry if I did though), Sonia, anumeha, kavyaa, taniya and Minnie.

love

Sagarika

P.S. I am going to put up the next part sometime tonight

hey sagarika.....
yep u got d name right!! n its k take ur own tym!!
n i just simply luv the combo of Forensic science,
emotions n film linage also.......
its a diff combo to keep up n u r doin tht job superlatively
i just luv hw the ff goes abt!!

love
-kinnari

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