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Kaheela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: trishap
nice part

thanks sweets😊

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ridwana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

U did not PM me.(19) th update. But I READ THE UPDATE IT WAS JUST AWESOME. just love ur ff and abhiya great update. plz update soon.

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urooj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#353

Yar y dont u write script for serials tooo ... It was so daammmmn gooood , i cant describe you how i felt after reading it , jux lovd abhiya scenes yr ...:) plz update soon with some intense moments ...;) <3 seriously u ROCK ....<3 n plz add me to the pm list :)))

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: Ridwana1234
U did not PM me.(19) th update. But I READ THE UPDATE IT WAS JUST AWESOME. just love ur ff and abhiya great update. plz update soon.

hey Ridwna sorry yaar i forgot😳..and thanks allot for loving it , but at least press the like button if you like it😆..will try to update soon😊

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: arooj_imran
Yar y dont u write script for serials tooo ... It was so daammmmn gooood , i cant describe you how i felt after reading it , jux lovd abhiya scenes yr ...:) plz update soon with some intense moments ...;) <3 seriously u ROCK ....<3 n plz add me to the pm list :)))

aww..thanks a bunch yar😳 ..glad you liked it..wil try to update soon, and dont worry there are plenty Abhiya scenes😉

Edited by ka7eela - 14 years ago

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Payal <a href="http://www.glitter-graphics.com"><i

@lighteningbuzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#356

Re: 19th Update

The story is getting interesting and filled with suspense. 😉 What a twist, Abhay somehow managed to keep away the truth from Piya and conceal the actual reason, the old guy was attacking her. Also, did Abhay just say to Piya that her attacker is a vampire??? I had to read that line a couple of times to make sure I actually saw that line with my own eyes and it wasn't a illusion...........but, why didn't Piya react?? But, Interesting turn.......😊

Edited by lighteningbuzz - 14 years ago

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz
Re: 19th Update

The story is getting interesting and filled with suspense. 😉 What a twist, Abhay somehow managed to keep away the truth from Piya and conceal the actual reason, the old guy was attacking her. Also, did Abhay just say to Piya that her attacker is a vampire??? I had to read that line a couple of times to make sure I actually saw that line with my own eyes and it wasn't a illusion...........but, why didn't Piya react?? But, Interesting turn.......😊

@ bold😆 no he didn't tell her that he was a vampire, she would have totally freaked out if he did😲..and who wouldn't!

read that line again😉 its below!, you missed what came after it, as i wrote directly after it, he thought and then says..etc..he was talking in his mind!😳

He looks at her police can't touch him Piya he is a vampire and he has super powers he will probably flee before they catch him, but i cant tell you that, he thought and then says: "Look at the first page"

hmm i think i have to rephrase that sentence again, so no one else get confused! thanks for pointing it out😃

Edited by ka7eela - 14 years ago

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Payal <a href="http://www.glitter-graphics.com"><i

@lighteningbuzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: ka7eela

@ bold😆 no he didn't tell her that he was a vampire, she would have totally freaked out if he did😲..and who wouldn't!

read that line again😉 its below!, you missed what came after it, as i wrote directly after it, he thought and then says..etc..he was talking in his mind!😳

He looks at her police can't touch him Piya he is a vampire and he has super powers he will probably flee before they catch him, but i cant tell you that, he thought and then says: "Look at the first page"

hmm i think i have to rephrase that sentence again, so no one else get confused! thanks for pointing it out😃

hahaha no need to rephrase it again. I think my own eyes deceived me. LOL I can't believe I read it several times and I missed out on it. So, its ok. 😊

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz

hahaha no need to rephrase it again. I think my own eyes deceived me. LOL I can't believe I read it several times and I missed out on it. So, its ok. 😊

😆..it happens, sometimes we are search for our things and we cant see them, even when they are in front of our eyes!😉