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Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyyyyyyyyy beautiful update annie
thanx GOD now sam is fine

loved sayank convo
it was awesome
fantastic update
do cont it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update...im glad samrat is fine....cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was soooooooooooo niceeeeeeeeee part
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Posted: 14 years ago
tu khud toh bimar rehti hi hey tere ff ka charecter bhi humesha hospital mein rehte hey.......pehle mayank ab sam...iske baad kaun hey......benji........it was nice........update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

finally u updated

amazingggggggg update dear
loved it
beautifully written
but dont u think it was a lil small
i think so
awwwwwwwww
sayank roxxxxxxxxxx
loved them
there scenes as usual was the best
do continue sooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited my rp on pg 116
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update Annie
Please continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG......!!!!!!!!!
awesum update annie......
GOSH! poor sam.....i cnt see him in pain......😭
bechari gunjan i can understnd her pain abi to bechari ki luv-stry line pe aayi thi......sab bigad gaya.......
m soooooo relived that sam is F9........
wah! mayank luv u yaar.......kya correct guess maara h......👏
nw just go & kill that KAMINI.....err KAMNI......😆
luvd SaYank bond........best bros of world.......
& thoda SaJan romance bhi rakhna.....plzzzz.....😳
no need 2 say MaYur coz u'll already do that.......
applauses 4 u........👏👏👏

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME.........

w8ing eagerly 4 next update........do cont soon.......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
annz🤗
chlo gud sam in out of dangr.....n i loved d way mayu cared n cried fr him almoset! liked sayank totally ....also loved d fact that he directly suspected kamni....haye my brainy mayu😃 me watin fr mn scenes...jaldi laooooo!!😳 chl gr8 update hun....cont soon...thnx🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter Twenty-Nine
Samrat was in his ward, sleeping. When Mayank too fell asleep sitting with him, when Gunjan entered, she saw them both, and shook Mayank a bit. Mayank opened his eyes, Gunjan assured Mayank her presence and asked him to go and rest. Mayank was worried about Samrat so he enforced Gunjan to let him stay there, Gunjan made Mayank relax and leave, and assured that she'd stay there and will take Samrat's care until Mayank returns back. Mayank left.
There in the corridor he saw Police officer entering again, Mayank went to him..
Inspector:Mr. Mayank Sharma , acha hua ap mujhe yahin mill gaye..
Mayank:Kuch pata laga inspector..
Inspector:Main bhi apse issi silsile mein baat karne aya tha..
Mayank:Ji boliye..
Inspector:Hamme uss location se aik admi ko giraftar kiya hai..
Mayank:What! Leikin golli marne wala toh wahan se bhag gaya tha..
Inspector:Han leikin woh door nahi gaya tha.. Jab ap sab wahan se challe gaye toh woh wahin par tha.. Darasal woh apni revolver lene aya tha.. Leikin tab tak wahan police phonoch chuki thi.. Hammein bas pehchan karni hai.. Ussi liye main Mr. Samrat ki tabyet maloom karne aya tha.. Agar woh stable hain toh ham ussko pehchan keh liye iss hospital mein la sakte hain..
Mayank:Well, ap Samrat ki doctor se mil sakte hain.. Ap Dr. Armaan, ya Dr. Nupur aur Dr. Dia se baat kar li jiye..
Inspector:Ji.. Waise.. Main apse poochna chahta tha.. Yeh Mrs. Kamni Sharma kon hai?
Mayank:Kyun?
Inspector:Suspect keh paas jo gun hai.. Uska license kisi Mrs. Kamni Sharma ka hai.. Waise Yeh Kamni Sharma kon hain?
Mayank:What!! Mera shak sahi tha.. Mujhe pata tha keh yeh goli mujh par chalayi gayi thi.. Yeh goli mere liye thi..
Inspector: Leikin yeh Kamni sharma kon hain?
Mayank:Samrat ki mom..
Inspector:What?! U mean ap dono ki mom?
Mayank:Exactly.. Well mujhe pehle se hi shak tha..
Inspector:apko apni maa par shak tha?
Mayank:sautely maa par..
Inspector:Ohk.. Waise ab main chalta hoon..
Mayank:Ji..
The inspector left, and Mayank went to the locker room.
Where he saw Nupur, sneezing..
Nupur:Hi Mayank.. Achooo!!
Mayank:Nupur.. Maine kaha tha na.. Baarish mein nahi jana chahiye.. Lag gaya na zukaam...
Nupur:Mayank wo.. Achoo..
Mayank:Nupur.. chalo mere saath..
Nupur:Ka..Achoo!! I mean Kahan?
Mayank:Canteen..
Nupur:Achoo!!! Leikin.. Achoo!! Canteen?
Mayank:Han.. Canteen!
He took Nupur to canteen, and ordered a cup of coffee for her,
He brought the cup of coffee to Nupur,
Mayank:Ab nakhre na karna aur pee lena..
Nupur:Achoo!! Leikin Mayank.. Achoo!!
Mayank:Sshh!! Chup chap pee lo.. Otherwise..
Nupur:Mayank! Look meri chinken ruk gayi ab..
And after two seconds she sneezed again,
Mayank:Dekha! See.. I am your doctor right now.. Tum meri patient ho.. Aur yeh coffee tumhari dawai hai.. So drink it right now..
Nupur under her breathe:Khadoos.. Achoo!!
Mayank: Unfortunately tumhari cheenk ki wajah se mujhe tumhare mere bare mein uch wichar samajh mein aa gaye.. Leikin no matter what.. U gotta drink this coffee..
Nupur:Eww... Achoo!!
Mayank:Bas Nupur.. Drink it in a second..
Mayank said this in a strict voice..
Nupur picked the mug up and started gulping the coffee. While Nupur did this, Mayank kept on staring her, the adorable way of drinking coffee was really unique for him. Mayank kept on smilling..
Mayank's POV: Nupur is loot king too cute..
After sometime his smile vanished..
Mayank's POV: What!! Wait.. Am I in love?! Nope.. Mayank Sharma!!! Am I in love with Nupur?!! Huh.. I mean getting closer to her has started meaning alot to me.. I keep on staring at her once I look her.. Is this love? Huh.. Oh my God!
Nupur pinched Mayank..
Mayank:Nupur!! Ouch!!
Nupur:Doctor sahab! Dekh lijiye.. Apke patient neh dawai pee lee hai.. Now please.. Main jaoon?
Mayank:Ab kahan?
Nupur:Samrat keh ward mein... Usse dekhne.. Kuch observations bhi leni hain..
Mayank:Main bhi aoon?
Nupur:No!
Mayank:Why?
Nupur:Kyunke you are now going home..
Mayank:Home? Which home?
Nupur:Tumhara ghar Mayank..
Mayank:What the hell.. I am not going there..
Nupur:Pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Mayank:Main uss ghar mein dobara nahi jaoon ga..
Nupur:Mayank.. Let me share something with you..
Mayank:Bolo..
Nupur:Meri life ka na aik fanda hai..
Mayank:Fanda? Kya fanda?
Nupur:Jab kisi se tang aa jao na.. Toh uska jeena haram kardo!
Mayank:Matlab? Main.. Mrs. Kamni Sharma? Huh..
Nupur:Try it once..
Mayank:Chodo na... Waise.. Aj inspector keh rahe the ki..
Nupur:Keh rahe the ki?
Mayank:Wo keh rahe the ki aik admi ko uss jagah se giraftar kiya gaya hai.. Uski gun ka license.. Mrs. Kamni Sharma keh naam par hai..
Nupur:Oh my God! Leikin wo Samrat ko?
Mayank:You got it wrong Nupur.. She did that to kill me.. Unfortunately golli Sam neh apne aap par le li..
Nupur:Mayank..
Putting her hands on Mayank's hands.
Nupur:I know tum iss waqt kaisa feel kar rahe ho.. Aur aik baad yaad rakhna.. Tum jo bhi karo ge .. Main tumhare saath hoon..
While Mayank and Nupur saw Kamni and Pankit rushing to Samrat's ward..
Mayank:Yeh dono..!!
In an angry tone..
Nupur:Dekho Mayank.. Relax.. Abhi kuch aisa na bolna jisse tumhe koi nuksaan pohonche.. Ham bolen ge toh sahi.. Leikin evidences keh saath..
Mayank:Kaise na boloon? Aj agar mera bhai zindagi aur mot se lada hai toh wo sirf iss aurat ki wajah se.. no Nupur.. Main boloon ga..
Nupur:Maine tumhe bolne se nahi roka Mayank.. Leikin evidences keh saath!
Now cut to Samrat's ward,
Samrat woke up.. Gunjan was sitting with him..
Gunjan:Samrat! Tum uth gaye? Kaise ho ab? Main Di ya Dia ko bulaoon?
Samrat:Chashmish..
In his low tone..
Gunjan:Han main yahin hoon Samrat.. Bolo..
Samrat:Tum yahan?
Gunjan smiled..
Gunjan:Mera best friend bimar hai.. Aur main uske paas bhi na aoon.. aisa kaise hoga?
Samrat gave a smile..
Gunjan:Chalo ab.. Tumhari dawai ka time ho gaya hai.. Thodi himmat karo.. Aur utho..
Samrat:hmm..
Gunjan helped Samrat sitting and then fed him with Medicines
Gunjan:I am sure.. Ab tum better ho jao ge.. Waise.. Aik baat kahoon..
Samrat:Bolo..
Gunjan:Tum bohot bahadur ho..
Samrat:Wo kaise..
Gunjan:Bina kissi dar.. Yah fiker keh.. Tumne Mayank par chali goli khud par le li..
Samrat smiled, then answered,
Samrat:Sach boloon toh.. Agar aj mere hote hue Mayank ko wo goli lag jaati aur usse kuch ho jata.. Toh main apne aap ko kabhi maaf na kar pata.. wo goli.. maine apni hi nazron mein girne se bachne keh liye khud par le li..
Gunjan:Tumhe dar nahi laga?
Samrat:Nahi..
Gunjan:wo kyun?
Samrat:Mayank mera bhai hai Gunjan.. aur apne bhai keh liye golli khai hai maine.. yeh dar ki nahi.. fakhar ki baat hai..
Gunjan:tum kitne ache ho na..
She started staring Samrat,
Samrat:Arre.. Kahan ghayab ho gayi?
Gunjan:ab.. wo.. wo..
Samrat giggled,
Samrat:Tum bilkul na.. Mayank jaisi ho
Gunjan:Mayank jaisi?
Samrat:Hmm..
Gunjan was about to say something
When Kamni and Pankit entered..
There, at the Malik mansion,
Armaan reached the house,
And Billy opened the door,
Billy:Ammy boy!
Armaan:Dad!!
Billy:Aate hi kardi na dill dukhane wali baat..
Armaan:What!
Billy:Call me billy.. meow! Whatever! But not dad!!
Armaan:Ok.. As u wish Billy.. Now please.. May I have a hug with my Father?.. Apart from this chocolaty and flirty billy?
Billy:Sure son!
They both hugged eachother..
Then they proceeded inside,
Where Ridhima and Ananya were sitting together..
Armaan:Mom!!
He rushed to hug Ananya..
Ananya:Armaan!! Missed you beta..
Armaan:Missed you too mom!! But ab ap log aa gaye hain na.. So everything will be great!
Ridhima:Han.. Ab Hamari family complete.. Haina?
Armaan:Han.. Ab Junior Ammy ke Dada dadi.. Aur Mom dad.. Sab aik saath!
Billy:Armaan!!
Armaan:Now what?
Billy:Maine tujhe dad bulane se mana kiya.. aur tune Dada bana diya..
Everyone started laughing...

Ok Guyz,
That was it,
I hope it was big enough,
lol, Thanks for reading,
Muahhz!
Love,
Annie

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